KR and SS FF Betrayal... But Still I Love You Part 8 on pg 20 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
They Are here back to win there love back
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supab update krisha are determined to not allow reyam to enter in their life while reyam are determined to rnter in there life love it
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Amazing update:)
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Nice update...
Finally they come face to face
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PROMO

Swayam: hum kya Karen? Wo toh hamari sakal b nahi dekhna chahti...

Rey: ek kaam karte hain. Tu kriya se baat kar aur main Sharon se baat karta hun...

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Kriya: bahut der ho chuki hai Swayam..

Swayam: its never too late Kriya...

Kriya: Swayam, tum mujhse 5, aur Sharon se 500 km dur rahoge, samjhe???

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Sharon: hum tumhe apne ghar me tolerate kar rahe hain, bas yahi bht hai...

Rey: Sharon, sab kuch thik ho sakta hai, hum sab phir saath ho sakte hain, pehle ki tarah...

Sharon: Pehle ki tarah ab kuch nahi raha Rey, na main, na tum, na Swayam, aur na hi Kriya!


Love,

Shirisha😊

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I am little busy coz my cousin's wedding in on the way so updating when got time. Hope u like it.

Part 4: The bitter truth, nothing can be like before

Rey and Kriya were getting married in few days. They both were really happy that finally they are going to be together for the rest of their lives. They have been together through many ups and downs of life. Rey's life revolved around her he wants to share every single moment of his life with her. He couldn't wait till Kriya would be all his, the day of his marriage. It has been 3 days he didn't see or talk with Kriya, oh how he disliked the ritual of not meeting the bride before marriage. He didn't believe in all this so he made up his mind that he would go and meet her. Here he is now climbing the balcony to reach her room.

Kriya was lost in Rey's thoughts; she missed him too as much as he missed her. She knew that she couldn't do anything as no one would let her go out and meet Rey. She was in her land of dreams walking towards the room door when she felt someone grab her waist, cover her mouth and pin her to the wall. Due to the lack of light in the room Kriya couldn't clearly figure out the face of the person who scared her but his touch made her shiver and she had pretty good idea who the person was, coz there was only 1 person in the world who made her feel that way and that was... Rey.

Rey: shhh its just me, mujhse aur raha nahi gaya toh main chala aya tumhe dekhne ke liye.

He slowly removed his hand from her mouth...

Kriya: Rey apne to mujhe dara hi diya tha. Aur aap yaha se jao agar kisine dekhliya to problem ho jayegi.

Rey: My darling would be wife main itne risk k saath pipese climb kar k aaya hun, sirf tumse milne k liye, Aur tum ho ki... mujhe waapis jane ke liye keh rahi ho.(he turned his face away from her pretending to be upset with her)

Kriya: uffo ab aise naraz mat ho na, acha baba I m sorry. batao how are you? And I really missed you too very much.

Hugs him and kisses his cheek. Rey hold her hands and comes really close to her their faces are almost touching...

Rey: Tumhare bina meri life bikul adhuri hai, you're the reason I am still alive , and main tumhara saath tab tak nahi chodunga jab tak life mera saath nahi cho...

Before Rey can complete Kriya silenced him by place her finger on his lips.

Kriya: shh... Aisa kabhi kuch bhi nahi hoga we will always be together.

Kriya had tears in her eyes listening to the words that Rey just said, she was feeling as the luckiest girl in the whole world. Rey wiped her tears and planted another kiss on her forehead.

Rey: tumhare aankhon main aanson bilkul ache nahi lagte, aur jab tak main tumhare saath hun tumhare aankhon main kabhi bhi aansoon nahi dekhna chahtha...

Kriya: lekin yeh toh khu...

Rey: khushi ke aansoon bhi nahi, agar itni hi khush ho to hansso ro math!

Kriya: Rey jab tak aap mere saath ho mujhe hamesha hasaate hi rahoge.(says it smiling)

Rey: hayye I am falling in love with you again...

Sharon (calling): Kriya!!! Jaldi neeche aao dinner ka time hogaya.

Kriya: haan aayi!...Rey ab jao yaha se before she sees you. Aur meri behen ko toh jante hi ho, taang khichne ka ek b mauka nahi chodti!

Rey: ok fine. Mere jaaneman main jaunga jab tum mujhe mere goodnight kiss dedo.

Kriya: Rey bachon jaise harkaten mat karo aur jaao yahase.

Rey: are pehle kiss warna main yaha se gayab nahi honewala

Kriya couldn't think of doing anything else, so she quickly gives him a peck on his cheek and pushes him out to the balcony. Rey looks at her one last time admires her beauty and climbs down.

Rey: 2 din kaise guzrenge tumhare bigair...

Finally after what felt like ages Rey was sitting in the mandap waiting for his love. He was dreaming their life after marriage. The priest asked for the bride.

"Rey" He heard. Looked up. He was shocked. He removed his turban and went to her. Kriya was in a unbelievable position. She was in half bridal dress and having wounds all over her body and her lips still bleeding. She was crying to hell. Rey rushed to her.

Rey: kriya..!! Kriya yeh sab.. kya hua tumhare saath??

She hugged him crying.

Rey: kriya kuch batao toh.. hua kya hai? Kisne kiya yeh sab?

She was crying only.

Rey: Batao toh sahi.. kriya kriya look at me. Bolo mujhe, kisne kiya yeh? Kriya tumhe meri kasam hai say kaun hai wo???

She points her finger. Rey gets shocked.

1 month ago

Sharon: wo mane ya na mane, unhe hamari life se jana hi hoga.

Swayam: wo mane ya na mane, unhe hamari life me wapas aana hi hoga.

Kriya: wo din kabhi nahi aayega, hum aane hi nahi denge.

Rey: wo din zarror aayenga. Hum lekar aayenge!

ReYam decided to do the reverse. Rey shuld talk to Sharon and swayam to Kriya. Sharon was busy with some books when Rey entered.

Sharon: tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Rey: Sharon mujhe tumse kuch..

Sharon: Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni. Just leave ok?

Rey: But Sharon...

Sharon: hum tumhe apne ghar me tolerate kar rahe hain, bas yahi bht hai... ok?

Rey: Sharon tum koshis toh kar sakti ho? Wo din yaad karo jab swayam ne tumhara dil jeeta tha.

She smiled. Flashes came in her mind.

"Maine kabhi nahi socha tha k kabhi b kisi se b yeh sab kahun ga par... us din jab tum mere pass chalkar aayi toh laga jaise, mujhe meri jine ki umeed mil gayi. Tumhare saath bitaya hua hare k pal mrei hard drive me permanently store ho gaya hai jise main kabhi delete nahi kar sakta. Aur main karna b nahi chahta. U know what? Main apni puri life tumhare saath spend karna chahta hun. Miss Sharon rai prakash, I really Love u a lot. Aur main tumhare bagair nahi jee sakta. I love u Sharon, I love u..."

Rey: yes.. come on.. yaad hai na tumhe???

She again gets flash back

"Bhool Jao mujhe. Hamara saath yahin tak tha/"

"but swayam"

"main kisi aur se shaadi kar rha hun Sharon. Mujhe aazad kar do."

"Tum mujhse chahte kya ho?"

"chali jao meri zindagi se, hamesha k liye"

Rey: Yaad karo jab usne tumhara dil jeeta tha

Sharon: Mujhe wo din b yaad aa rha hai Rey, Jab usne mera dil toda tha!

Rey: Sharon, sab kuch thik ho sakta hai, hum sab phir saath ho sakte hain, pehle ki tarah...

Sharon: Pehle ki tarah ab kuch nahi raha Rey, na main, na tum, na Kriya aur na hi Swayam!

Sharon sitting in her room. Thinking Rey's talks.

Flashback

It was Sharon's birthday. Party was over and she was gonna sleep now. But suddenly the lights went off. Kriya shouted from the other rom to light up the candles. She lit one and was shocked to see swayam in front.

Sharon: tum???

He put his palm on her mouth.

Swaym: shhh... kriya aa jayegi.

Sharon: par tum yahan kya kar rhe ho? Party toh khatam ho gayi na?

Swyam: han. Par hamara moment abhi baaki hai.

Sharon: what?

He held her in arms,

Sharon: swayam yeh tum...

Swayam: chup! Bilkul chup!

He took her to the balcony. Their she sees lots of decoration and a cake on a table.

He puts her ddown.

Swayam: Sharon, main tumse kuch kehna chata hun.

Sharon: ya...

Swayam; wo main... Maine kabhi nahi socha tha k kabhi b kisi se b yeh sab kahun ga par... us din jab tum mere pass chalkar aayi toh laga jaise, mujhe meri jine ki umeed mil gayi. Tumhare saath bitaya hua hare k pal mrei hard drive me permanently store ho gaya hai jise main kabhi delete nahi kar sakta. Aur main karna b nahi chahta. U know what?(comes on knees) Main apni puri life tumhare saath spend karna chahta hun. Miss Sharon rai prakash, I really Love u a lot. Aur main tumhare bagair nahi jee sakta. I love u Sharon, I love u...

There was a silence.

Swayam: Sharon.. my knees are paining...

Sharon smiles and comes on knees hugging him.

Sharon: let it be... I love u too.

They gets up hugging each other. Swaym kisses her forehead.

Swayam {Breaking the hug):Ab main chalt ahun.

Sharon: Swayam...!!!

Swayam: what?

Sharon: proposal ha gaya, uske baad??

Swayam; uske baad?

Sharon: kiss!!!

Swyam: wo b toh kar diya!

Sharon: tum sachme itne stupid ho ya sirf pretend karte ho?

Swayam: what?

Sharon drags his collar.

Swayam: u know what? Tum bahut fast forward ho...

Sharon: so toh hun!!!

To be continued...


Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 10 years ago

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