KR and SS FF Betrayal... But Still I Love You Part 8 on pg 20 - Page 5

Nice bt short...
bt we can manage ..atleast update to mila...

I m soo happy that finally swayam bola...
waiting for their meeting...

update soon nd do pm me plz

Awesome update after a long time
Nearly forgot about this ff
Brilliant
Update soon

awesome work

beautiful... read both d prts n a go...
luvd d prolouge...
xcitd for their first meet...
luvng ur works...
awesomeee... :)

this is chapter was fabulous... wonderful and what they thought is new
and hope they get fill this time ... do continue soon

Wow!!
Swayam finally spoke up!
2 yrs of wait!
Finally dey r going to krisha!
Hopefully it wudnt b too hard!
Continue soon!

OMG this is awesome!!!
I sooo sooo sooo love it!!
Pyaar ka ehsas dil todna
I love it all!!! I soo love it!!
I love the way you write!! Feels like poetry at times!!!
All those lines they feel soo nice and lovely!!!

You have amazing writing skills!!!
Keep writing the same way!!!

Part 3: First meet after Break-Up

Swayam sitting in a hotel room. Thinking something:

Flash Back

Swayam enters in a room. Rey was very excited.

Rey: Swayam! (hugs him)

Rey: swayam tujhe pata hai aaj kriya ne apne parents se baat ki hogi hamare bare me.. aaj main use officially propose karne wala hun... shaadi k liye! I m so so happy!

Swayam: Rey,... mat kar..!

He looked at him confused.

Rey: kya na karun?

Swaym: Kriya ko propose, mat kar!

Rey: what? Par... kyun na karun? Tu janta hai na main kriya se kitna pyar karta hun? Phir tu...

Swayam: main janta hun rey main sab janta hun par...

Rey: tu janta hai na swayam tu mujhe kis chiz k liye man akar raha hai? saans lene k liye!

Swayam: rey main b toh Sharon se door jaa raha hun na...

Rey: ek sec, kya kaha? Tu n Sharon se... oh! ab samjha, yeh sab tu nahi bol raha swayam, wo tujhse karwarahi hain yeh sab.

Swayam: yeh sanb ek beta bol raha hai Rey.

Rey:beta, is it? F9, ban ek acha beta, lekin Sharon ki taraf teri koi zimmedaari nahi?

Swayam: main behes nahi karna chahta rey, hum aaj hi banglore jaa rahe hain bus!

Rey: thik hai, main chahunga tere saath. Chod dunga kriya ko, lekin issliye nahi ki wo meri mom hain ya main unse darta hun, main yeh sab iss liye kar raha hun kyun ki main tera bhai hun. Hamse har time saath me sab kuch saha hai, ab yeh toh.. yahi sahi. Lekin ek baat yaad rakh swayam, main sir fuss din tak chup hun jab tak tu kuch nahi bolta, apne liye nahi ladta, main b dekhta hun, tu kabtak sehta hai...

Present

Rey comes and sees Swayam thinking something.

Rey: swayam!

He gets senses back.

Rey: kya soch raha hai?

He hugs him tightly.

Swayam: I m sorry Rey, mujhe maaf kar de, maine tujhe tere pyar se 2 saal dur rakha, mujhe koi haque nahi tha, meri wajah se tu hasna muskura bhul gaya... I m sorry rey, I m really very sorry!!!

Rey: Swayam! (Faces him)Swayam relax! Pehli baat, aagar tu mera bhai hai aur tera mujhpar pura haq hai. aur dusri baat, main kriya se pyar karta hunt oh iska yeh matlab nahi k main tujhse kam pyar karta hun. Agar kriya se meri saanse judi hain toh tujhse dhadkane judi hain. Agar kriya meri jaan hai toh tu meri zndagi hai swayam. Iss liye aisi baatein phir kabhi mat karna.

Swyam: u know what? I love u bro!!!

Rey (hugging him): love u too.

Next afternoon

Krisha on dining table with mom. Dad comes.

Mom: are aap itni jaldi office aa gaye?

Dad: haan. aa gya, aur saath me kisi ko laya b hun.

Mom: kisko?

Dad: "Reyaansh" , "Swayam"!!!

Krisha were shocked. They got up from the ttable and turned towards the door.

Reyam comes walking slowly.

Tere liye ham hai jiye honto ko siye

Krisha starts moving to them

Tere liye ham hai jiye har aansu piye

They face each other

Tere liye ham hai jiye har aansu piye

Krisha moves their hand on Reyam's cheek.

Tere liye ham hai jiye honto ko siye

Reyam keep their hand on Krisha's.

Dil me magar jalte rahe chahat ke diye

They hugs tightly.

Tere liye...

"Rey, Swayam!"

They got their senses back and realized that they were dreaming and girlz were still far. Dad informs he met with an accident and these guys saved him. they needed job and company could give it after a month or two. So they are going to stay at their home for some day. After sometime all sits and chatters. Kriyaansh and Swaron were looking at each other during the convo with elders. Sharon serves coffee o everyone. She gives it to Rey. He smiles but she avoids. When it comes to swayam, it accidentally falls on his shirt. Mom scolds Sharon and asks her to show him the wash room, unwantedly Sharon went with him. on the other hand dad asked kriya to show rey their room. Kriya was helpless. They went.

Swaron

Sharon: there's the washroom.

Swayam: Sharon...

Sharon: swayam mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai. jis kaam k liye aaye ho, wo karo.

Swayam: wahi toh kar raha hun.

Shaon: what/

Swayam: main tumhare liye wapas aaya hun Sharon.

Sharon: mere liye? Really? Kyun? Tumhari wo Bangalore wali kahan gayi? Jiske liye 2 saal pehle tumne mujhe chod diya!

Swayam: Sharon...

Swayam: sorry swayam, agar tumhe lagta hai k main tumhari life main uski jagah puri karungi then I m really sorry, main uss type ki nahi hun.

She turns he holds her hand.

Sharon: swayam haath chodo.

Swayam: Sharon meri...

Sharon: mene kaha haath chodo!

He leaves.

Sharon: mere piche aane ki koshish, galti se b mat karna.

She leaves.

Kriyaansh

They enters a room.

Kriya: its your room.

She was leaving. Rey comes in front.

Kriya: jane do mujhe.

Rey: kriya main...

Kriya: rey, let me go!

She was going.

Rey: kriya meri baat toh suno!

Kriya: kya sunu main rey? Aur kehne sunne ko reh kya gaya hai? saari baat toh do saal pehle hi khatam ho gayi thi, jab kisi aur ladki k piche aapne mera dil toda tha!

Rey: par kriya main wahi galti toh sudharne aaya hun, tumse maafi mang...

Kriya: galti ki ho, toh sudharoge na, apne galti nahi, gunah kiya hai, aur gunah se liye sazaa hoti hai, maafi nahi.

Rey: kriya...

She turns to go. He holds her hand. She stops. Looks at him and drops hand.

Kriya: now, don't u dare touch me, did u get that Mr. Reyaansh Singhania?

She leaves.

Reyam and Krisha

Swayam: yakin nahi hota, jo ladkiyan kabhi humpe jaan chidakti thin, aaj humse itni nafrat karti hain ki hamari shakal b nahi dekhna chahti.

Rey: nahi swayam, wo hamse naraaz hain nafrat nahi kartin hamse. Dil k kisi kone me toh hume chupa kar rakha hai.

Sharon: wo mane ya na mane, unhe hamari life se jana hi hoga.

Swayam: wo mane ya na mane, unhe hamari life me wapas aana hi hoga.

Kriya: wo din kabhi nahi aayega, hum aane hi nahi denge.

Rey: wo din zarror aayenga. Hum lekar aayenge!

so guys, this much for today.. hope u like it...

love,

Shirisha😊

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wow awesome yr so finally they meet.. krisha are rude..bt this is what reyam deserve hope everything get sort out soon thanks 4 d pm