KR and SS FF Betrayal... But Still I Love You Part 8 on pg 20 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
2nd chappy
Awsome
Swayam ne bol diya finally
And very well described the emmotion and love
Too good
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Taking revenge
Thats not good
Truth pata chalane par they gona hurt so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Nice update...

But still din get what happened b/w them

Continue soon

N thanx for d pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Interesting work

But i really hope its not what em finking it is


Such a thrill moment

Update soonest n pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Part 5

Kriya was going, Swayam came in front.

Kriya: maine kitni baar kaha hai, mere saamne mat aaya karo!

Swayam: but kriya meri..

Kriya: mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai swayam.

Swayam; kriya sab kuch thik ho sakta hai.. agar tum chaho toh.

Kriya: bahut der ho chuki hai swayam.

Swaym: Its never too late kriya. Tumhe wo din yaad hai na jab tumne rey ko propose kiya tha?

Kriya got flash back.

"Rey, jabse maine pyar ko jana hai, aapko samjha hai, maine sirf aapse pyaar kiya hai. Main janti hun k hamari friendship fight se suru hui thi, par, wo kaise love me badal gayi, mujhe patahi nahi chala. I love u rey, I love u a lot. Main nahi janti aap mere bare me kya feel karte ho, par maine feel kia hai k aap b mujhe... u too like me. Issliye main aaj confident k saat keh rhi hun. I loveu, more than my life!"

Swayam: yaad hai na tumhe?

"Rey: kriya pyar tak thik hai par, shaadi..

Kriya: rey shaadi ka faisla aap hi ka tha.

Rey: mera wo faisla galat tha.

Kriya: aap kehna kya chahte ho, saaf saaf batao.

Rey: kriya, I know mujhe tumhare saath ghoomna phirna acha lagta hai, time spend kar na acha lagta hai but..

Kriya: but what?

Rey: but you r not a married material!"

Kriya: mujhe wo din b yaad hai swayam, jab unhone mujhe reject kia tha!

Swyam: kriya tum..

Kriya: swayam: jitna ho sake, stay far from us.

She leaves.

Kriya sitting on her bed and thinking something.

FLASHBACK

Rey was standing near a bridge. Kriya comes running.

"Rey", she called.

He turns, she runs and hugs her.

Kriya: rey I m so.. so happy!

Rey: kriya i...

Kriya: I know aap nervous ho. But don't worry, everything will be ok. I m with you.

Rey: baat wo nhi hai, actually i..

Kriya: maine kaha na rey, don't worry, mom aapse mil kar bht khus hongi.

Rey: kriya main tumhare parents se nahi mil rha.

She was shocked.

Kriya: what do u mean by nahi mil rhe? Rey we have already talked abt it. U agreed isliye maine mom dad se baat ki. Aur ab aap keh rhe ho k..

Rey: listen kriya, pyar tak thk hai par shaadi... I don't think it's the right time.

Kriya: rey shaadi ka faisla aap hi ka tha.

Rey: mera wo faisla galat tha.

Kriya: aap kehna kya chahte ho, saaf saaf batao.

Rey: kriya, I know mujhe tumhare saath ghoomna phirna acha lagta hai, time spend kar na acha lagta hai but..

Kriya: but what?

Rey: but you r not a married material!"

Kriya was in a dead shock! She couldn't believe her ears.

Kriya: kya kaha aapne? Phir se bolo?

Rey: look kriya i...

Kriya: agar apke dil me yahi tha, toh kyun khincha iss natak itna lamba? Kyun kia pyar izhaar?

Rey: izhaar pehle tumne kia tha maine nahi. Propose tumne mujhe kia tha, friendship ko love ka naam tumne diya tha.

Kriya: agar aisa hai toh aapne accept kyun kia tha?

Rey: kyun main us waqt tumhara dil nahi todna chahta tha.

Kriya: toh ab aap kya kar rhe ho? Rey I really don't know, aap yeh sab kyun keh rhe ho, but I know very well k aap mujhe pyar karte ho. I m damn sure u love me!

Rey: kriya aaj main bagalore jaa rha hun. Wahan koi mera wait kar rhi hai.

Kriya: oh! Like, really? Aap mujhe chod k iss liye jaa rhe ho coz aapko koi aur mil gyi hai?

Rey: look kriya, I m sorry..

Kriya: no rey, I m sorry, k maine aapse pyar kia, aapke liye apni feeling waste ki, aapke jhoote pyaar ko samajh hi nahi payi. I m really sorry for that. Lekin ek baat toh batao, usme aisa kya hai jo aap mujhe chod rhe ho? Batao..

Rey: sunna chahti ho, toh suno. Wo tumse jyada beautiful hai, tumse jyada intelligent and, understanding hai...

Kriya: aur married material bhi? M I right? Or m I right?

Rey: kriya..

Kriya: enough rey, u know what? Just go to hell! Maine aaj tak sirf yahi pray kia hai k har ladki ko rey jaisa partner mile, . par aaj k baad, main roz yeh dua karungi k aapke jaisa partner kisiko na mile. Main.. main aapki sakal b nahi dekhna chahti,, so gud bye forever, Mr. Reyansh Singhania!

She left. Rey ended up with tears.

Present

Sharon enters.

Sharon: kriya, kya soch rhi hai?

Kriya: kuch nhi... bas..

Sharon: tu rey k bare me soch rhi thi na?

Kriya looks at her and nods her head in a yes.

Sharon sits beside her and they hug.

Night

Shron took out her diary

" today I got an old memory, one of the most passionate time spend with swayam.

It was the time when we were returning from Rinni's engagement. I had a surprise for Swayam that evening when I was in a Saree. I knew Swayam would love it and he did. Swayam was going to drop my home when our car stopped and he said it will take time. It was raining and both were wet in the rain. We then saw a hut at some distance and ran there. We found no one there. I was shivering and Swayam saw that.

He lighten his lighter, it's a room with lump of hay on 1 side, broken woods, furniture, useless stuff, so sure no 1 will cm there or no 1 mind if we stay there. Swayam closed the door to stop the storm coming inside. It's getting colder and colder. Swayam arranged the bone fire; I quickly came near to it. I was shivering. I was rubbing my hands to get rid of cold. While running hands in hairs my eyes fall on Swayam, who was staring me for a long time. my heart start beating fast.

For diverting him I said: baht thand hai na, sari bilkul bheeg gai hai..., trying to dry.

Swayam without moving his eyes: to utar do.

I looked at him with wide eyes, now by his words I is sure of his intensions. I m Sharon. Can't let him win!

I moved inside a room. . HE sat on the hay. After a while he got hit by something, he saw it's my earring, the rain of my jewelry started hitting him. he shouted "ye kya kr rhi ho"? I replied loudly from the back of hay lump " uttar rhi hunn " he opened his mouth withed, got my sari on his face.

I came out covering my body from chest to thigh.

I said teasingly: thand baht hai naa ?

Swayam: it's hot!

I looked at him shortening my eyes. She smiled mischievously. He came near me and I turned to go but he dragged me. he kissed my ear, neck but I push him. He again pulled me. And this tym, not letting me go... We fall on the hay. His kisses moved to my chin, neck to my bare shoulder. But I, as usual, teased him. "Swayam". He looked at me. "Meri Saree sukh gayi hogi" I said with a mischievous smile. Swayam smiled and stand straight. I too stood up and turned. He lowered his face smiling.

Me: I love u Swayam!!

Swayam: I love u too!!!"

I really wish k wo din wapas aa jayen.. but, the fact is.. Nothing can be like Before!!!!

Ok! This much for today. Hope u guys like it..

Love,

Shirisha😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Loved it
Waiting for nxt update
I hope kriyaansh aur swaron ek ho jaaye
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
read it all in a go!!!
Its super awesome!!!
so loved it!!!
cant wait to read more :)
👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Rey ko koi aur mil gai...
Ho hi nhi sakta..
He must be faking it..

Swaron romantic moment was awww
Loved it to the core..

Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
awesome update
love it

thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
hey, nice update⭐️
I loved it😃
bt itna distance accha nahi lagta😉
get them closure soon😊
n most importantly... plsss update soon😆
Edited by KriYaansh-ArSha - 10 years ago

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