KR and SS FF Betrayal... But Still I Love You Part 8 on pg 20

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Betrayal: But Still I Love You

Banner Credit goes to -Koeli_Appy-

Prologue

Kriya: Zindagi. Kab kise kis mod par laakar khada kar de, koi nahi janta. Mere saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua. Zindagi bhar saath rehne ka wada kiya, aur chale gaye?? Mujhe chodkar? Akele? Besahara? Janese pehle ek baar reason toh bata dete, lekin ab main kya karun? Wo toh apne saath mera dil bhi le gaye hain. Afsos sirf iss baat ka hai k jaane se pehle unhone ek baar bhi mujhse nahi pucha, "Kriya, Jee paogi mere bina???"

Sharon: Life? Nafrat hai mujhe iss word se. Life time saath rehne ka promise kiya, aur... Ek nahi, do do baar mera dil dukhaya hai usne. Wo kya sochta hai, main uske bagair kuch nahi? No. he's wrong. Dikhadundi main use ki main apni life apni tarah se jee sakti hun, uske bina bhi. Afsos bas iss baat ka hai, ki jisne baar baar dil ko toda, yeh dil aaj bhi use nahi bhul paya. Had mod par yaad aata hai...!

Rey: Zindagi? Love! Pyar k bina life ka toh koi matlab hai hi nahi. Kya nahi hai mere paas? Daulat, shauhrat, paisa, rutba, sab toh hai. phir b sache pyar ki kami hamesha mehsus hoti hai. Aisi zndgi hamesha se nahi thi meri, meri life me bhi koi thi, jo mujhse beintahaan pyar karti thi. Mere har zarurat ka khayal rakti thi lekin..., apni hi bewakoofi ki wajan se kho diya maine use. Afsos sirf iss baat ka hai k aane se pehle main use ek baar bhi nahi keh paya ki, nahi jee sakta main tumhare bina...!

Swayam: Life?? Dhokha! Har mod par zndgi ne mujhe sirf dhoka diya hai, aur majboori me maine use. Iss dil ne hamesha sirf usise pyar kiya, aur anjaane me hi sahi par... baar baar usika dil tod diya.khud b ghut ghut kar jeer aha hun aur sayad use bhi majbaar kar raha hun, aisi zndagi jine par. Baatien toh bahut saari batana chahta tha par... it was too late. Aaj, afsos bas iss baat ka hai ki ek akhri baar sine se lagakar main use yeh nahi bata paya, ki main usse kitna pyar karta hun. Nahi keh paya.Ilove u.. ek akhri baar...!

Kriya: Dil diya hai aapko, chahun dilo jaan se.

Rey: Nahi bhula hun tumko, aaj bhi pyar karta hun tumse.

Sharon: Phir kyun gaye chod kar mujhe, kyun toda dil tumne?

Swayam: Nahi bata sakta kya thi majboori, par chaha hai bas tumhiko maine...!

Kya Zindagi par viswaas lautega inka?

Kya ubhar kar ayega koi tinka?

Kya apna Afsos zaheer kar payenge kabhi?

Kya ek dusre se dobara mil payenge kabhi?

Ya bhul jayenge wo khushal din aur raatein,

Aur reh jayengi bas yaadein, yaadein aur Yaadein???


So guys... its my Second work and i hope u like and encourage me...😃

Those who want PM, hit the like button or Scrap me.

Part 1 pg 4

Part 2 pg 7

Part 3 pg 9

Promo Pg 11

Part 4 Pg 12

Part 5 Pg 15

Love,

Shirisha😊

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wow totaly aswom concept loved ur proluge...

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love the prologue
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