KR and SS FF Betrayal... But Still I Love You Part 8 on pg 20 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayeee... that was amazing..
my interest is growing... in this story..

update soon
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plz update whenever you get time
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amazing concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reyam to be in Krisha Home.

How would they react??

Would they accept them, or reject them??

Would they be able to win their heart again, or they will return back in dissappointment??

To know this, stay tuned for the update!!

Love,
Shirisha :)
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update kb milega...it has been months???
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Akku she is busy in study
But she will update it soon


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reyam krisha together...
wow...

update soon...
waiting eagerly
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HEy... Really interesting concept...
Plz do continue soon n pm me when u update:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2: Mohabatt ki purani Dastaan likhegi nayi Kahani

Bangalore

Swayam comes downstairs. His mom comes in front.

Swayam: kya hua maa?

Maa: apni ma se itna bada dhoka kyun kiya tumne swayam?

Swayam: par ma mene kiya kya hai?

She shows him sharon's pic.

Ma: yeh mujhe tumhare pillow k niche se mila. Tumne...

Swyam: I m sorry maa, mene bht koshis ki par nahi bhula paya use.

(rey comes)

Mom: nahi bhula paye matlab? Wo koi devi toh nahi na k tum use bhula nahi paoge?

Rey :( in mind) aaj chup mat reh swayam, aaj toh tujhe bolna hoga. Apne liye nahi, apne pyaar k liye sahi. Bol Swayam, bol!

Mom (trying to tear d pic): aaj main iss cheese ko zad se mita dungi.

He holds her hand.

Swyam: sorry maa, par isbaar nahi. Issbaar main chup nahi rahunga.

Maa: swayam tum...

Swayam: Agar meri Sharon par koi b musibat aai toh use pehle mujhse guzarna hoga

Maa: rey, dekho beta yeh swayam kaisi baatein kar raha hai, rook ise.

Rey: pichle do saal se isi din ka toh intzaar kar raha hun mom, ajj jab yeh ho raha hai, toh aap chahti hai k main ise rok dun? Forget about it!

Swyam: apke kehne par mene apne pyar ko hurt kiya, apni friendship ki insult ki. Na chahte hue b Sharon ko dhoka diya, kriya se jhoot bola aur Rey, mere bhai k chehre se hasi toh jaise gayab hi ho gayi maa, sirf meri wajah se, lekin main chup raha. apne mujhe Sharon ki yaadon k sahare zeene ko mazbaar kiya main chup raha lekin aaj aap use b mujhse dur karna chahti hain? Nahi. Aaj main chup nahi rahunga.

Rey: do saal mom do saal se ghut ghut kar zee rahe hai hum dono... sayad, chaaron. Lekin ab aur nahi. Ab hum apni life jiyenge. Ek dusre k saath. Hum jante hai k wo aaj b hamare intazaar me hongi, issliye hum aaj hi Delhi jaa rahe hai mom, aur iss baar hume koi nahi rok sakta. Aap b nahi. Chal swayam.

They were leaving.

Swayam: ek baat aur maa, Sharon koi chiz nahi hai, wo meri life hai, aur yeh baat kabhi mat bhulna.

They leaves.

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Kriya opens d window. The cool breeze touches her face and the blow of air makes her hair flow.

Kriya: aaj ki inn hawayon me ek naya ehsaas hai, pata nahi kyun aisa lag raha hai jaise bht der baad kuch bht sahi hone wala hai.

Rey was packing his stuffs.

Rey: main aa raha hun kriya, sab kuch sahi karne, tumhe wapas pane. Phir hum kabhi alag nahi honge. Kabhi b nahi.

Sharon on study table

Kyun aisa lag raha hai jaise sab kuch badalne wala hai, zindagi ek naya mod lene wali hai. jaise kuch, wapas milne wala hai.

Swayam: tumhara swayam wapas aa raha hai Sharon, tumhara pyar wapas pane. Iss umeed k saath k tum mujhe maaf kar dogi.

Delhi Airport

Reyam comes out of d airport.

Swayam: rey, yahan aa toh gaye hai par ab jayenge kahan? Hum toh unka address b nahi jante.

Rey: don't worry swayam, jab destiny ume yahan tak le aai hai, toh aage ka rasta b wahi dikhaegi.

Swayam: pata hai kya, inn hawayon me ek ajeeb sa ehsaas hai, jo do saal pehle tha.

Sharon: do saal pehle hua wo ehsaas aaj fir kyun ho raha hai? aaj achanak phir se dil me butterfly waali feeling kyun ho rahi hai?

Kriya: aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise bhuli hui wo mohabaat ki purani dastaan ek nayi kahani likhne waali hai, Delhi ki yeh hawayen apna rukh badalne wali hain.

Rey: inn hawayon ko apna rukh toh badalna hi hoga. Delhi me asli dilwale jo aa gaye hain, jo ek ahuri kahani puri karne wale hain, ruthi hi inn hawaon me mohabatt bharne wale hain.

Kriya: Adhure sapne, zindagi adhuri, pyar ki yeh kahani rahegi hamesha adhuri,

Rey: Pure honge sapne phir sajegi zndagi, mohabatt ki iss dastan ko main karunga puri.

Sharon: Bichad gaye sapne, zndagi ne b na saath diya, toot gaya dil jab tumne mujhe dhoka diya,

Swayam:judenge sapne, zndagi ne b hai palat liya, milenge ab hum, kismet ne hai mauka jo diya.

It's a short update but tried my best. As u all know m busy in studies so... ready for all chappals n tomatoes!!!!

sorry for typos.

04 oct. 2014

Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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okay for god's sake why am I missing your brilliant work?Damn this is so emotional, so pure and so painful
Hurt, pain, love, guilt and nervousness in ReYam
Pain,hurt,love and wait shown in KriSha
The story is so much great
the concept is great
Hope you update it soon

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