SwaRon - You are mine - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

^^ Jum - Where are you gal, I can give you one tight hug right now

So before i get all emotional and blush a deep shade red, let me just 🤗 U
So my lil poem could get you fell all that, i felt your comments and thoughts on it were more beautiful then the poem itself.
For everyone and you to know on how i came up with this poem, i was trying to get in to the skin of Swayam for my future work and this one line " You are mine Sharon " from the recent episode stuck with me.
Then just few lines here and there and i tried my best to get it rhyming fearing no one will accept this as a poem if not 😆
So i was not sure, to what i ended up expressing, but was glad that it was so closely related to the SwaRon journey and the recent track.

Thanks Jum and thank you all my friends 🤗
All your comments mean a lot to me
Love you all 😳

sudha ur just too cute!!!🤗 i know u'l hate it perhaps bt imagine me pulling ur cheeks!!😛
It was related to the swaron journey n we cud feel the connection.. kp it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just blown away by this poem...how can it be for real yar...i amamazed to see that somebody can be so deeply in love...i really dont have words to describe what i feel after reading this...but one thing is for sure hats off and bow down to you for thinking out something just out of d world to describe a pair which just filled with true love ' swaron'...its the only pair that can justify this true love emotion...

thanks for pm...do write more like this yar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!!!!👏

Amezing poem 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sudha 🤗 this was simply amazing...
never expected u to be a great poet too... i so loved ur poem..
each n every line was awesome..
hope to see more like this from u 😃

P.S. so sorry for being so late... came back home only few days back... once again sorry for the late comment 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey sudha di!!!😊

Well...wt 2 say...dat ws smethng bynd beautiful...😳👏sch a heart touchin poem..😳.well it depicts swayam love perfectly...d unconditional love dat he has sharon...dis poem brngs out dse prfctly.😊..d lyn "u r myn" wre rly a gr8 choice...👍🏼dese lyns hve alwys been spcl fr swaronians..😳.nd not even fr once i felt i ws rdng a poem bt it ws as if swayam himslf ws spkin his hr8 out..😊.d ups nd downs in deir rltnshp...nd how he luks upon dem z nycly shown...nd his confidence ovr his love...i am nt able to xpln nycly bt i srsly lve it a lot...u shud wrte poems mre oftn sudha di...jst two poems we hve got...wud lve 2 read mre...nd once again a marvellous poem...👏

A new dawn broke

When you finally outspoke

And things did change

When we exchanged

I was your's Sharon

Always your's

love dese lines...😳

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