SwaRon - You are mine

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Shalini

@lyfisbeautiful

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Sudha🤗 u hv come up with such a wondeful poem.. it is so swayam, whole of it n u hv written it really well.. i can feel the connect and i guess thats wat poetry is all about! i hvnt read any poem on swaron so this was the first.. n wat a brilliant start.. but i feel that u hv underplayed ur strength over here.. u have no idea how brilliant and deep the concepts and theme of ur work usually is! The underlying essence of this poem is great but it seemed to me that u focusd a lot on rhyming and formatting.. u dnt need it that much sudha as ur concepts are powerful enough!😃! kp giving us more of these!! 😳

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Oh-ho...so you write poems also, that too having rhyming words. Me impressed. It truly reflected Swayam's feelings for Sharon, and his inhibitions in a way.

Well done Sudha👍🏼

So now i am gonna ask you not only for more OS/SS but also poems on SwaRon. Yeah me the greedy one😈

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Its really very nice😳 well done Sudha!!! SwaRon's journey till now is beautifully written👏 Actually this is the first work of your's which i read but after reading this i wanna read more of your works but sorry today i dont have time but one day i will surely read all your works😊 whenever you write something on SwaRon please pm me

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Mahirah

@Mahirah

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Its Beautiful and amazing =)

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

looks like somebody's changed from a very good writer to a poetess!! 😉
lovely poem sudha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳👏⭐️
aaawww loved from the start till each n every "you are mine sharon" and till the last "your wish is my command"
you really presented the SwaRon current journey through this poem!!
all the flashbacks right from their classroom romance to their endless MU's came in front of my eyes!! 😳
after reading your poem i am loving more n more SwaRon!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
KEEP WRITING SUDHA!! 🤗

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wonderfully written Sudha👏 thanks for the pm...

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

WOW Sudha you are not only an awesome author but an awesome poet too. 👏

Lovely stuff...and so sweet of you to dedicate this to TSF...keep the coming 😊

P.S Congrats TSF⭐️

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow sudha..how flawlessly you desrcibed swaron's situation..and dat too through a poem! ⭐️
that's simply beautiful..😳
all those lines..you are mine sharon..i am all yours sharon..you are still mine...Were remarkably excellent! 👏
I lovedd itt!! ❤️
Keep writing poem mahn..
and i didn't knew your hidden poem talent! 😉