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Posted: 13 years ago
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Something i wrote on SwaRon, though i have recently started writing OS/SS on them this is something new.

Depicts the present scenario on SwaRon track.

Dedicated to all my fellow SwaRonians

TSF has hit 51000 likes 🥳 Dedicated to you guys


You are mine Sharon

You are mine

A dream I've tried

To make in a reality

Only to fine you

Question my morality

But deep down I still knew

You are mine Sharon

You are mine

From the very day i saw you

Till the day for now

One thing i always knew

That I'll never allow

myself forcefully on you

Because

You are mine Sharon

You are mine

Something's Changed

Passion's engaged

The looks we exchanged

At a close range

But you'd always deranged

Few things still remain

Very much unchanged

You are mine Sharon

You are mine

A new dawn broke

When you finally outspoke

And things did change

When we exchanged

I was your's Sharon

Always your's

Why the black clouds now

Why the outrage now

What have i done to allow

I so need the know-how

To clear the accusations aroused

You are still mine Sharon

You'll always be mine

Why push me Away

From anywhere u stay

You ain't the kind to betray

Then why the shades of grey

I'll never cause you any dismay

Because

You are still mine Sharon

You are mine

And your wish my command.


-----

Sudha


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Posted: 13 years ago
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res yippie me first🥳

gosh sudha! m PROUD TO SAY U R MA BESTIE..🤗
i soo love it..👏the startin 2 lines itself made me feel that its swayam's heart that is singing it..❤️
swayam's love for sharon is unconditional..its immortal n ur poem proved it all.👍🏼.
u knw it takes a lot to write such a beautiful piece of work.It takes lots of dissection of characters n must say u hav dissected swayam in inches.👏.i soo loved it..❤️

the pain n agony,the love n care,the need n yearning,every emotion was very well penned👏SwaRon always portrayed intense n passionate love but at the same time they even depict emotional n sensitive side of a relationship.. (though we dont accept it at times)u included it all🤗

u spoke for swayam today..for SwaRon to be alive sharon n swayam are equally responsible n today swayam proved it yet again..n nw i want sharon to prove it..well i hope u gt me..😉😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh sudha u r a poet too??? I nevr knew dat bt i must say u r an awesum poet as much as u r an mindblowing author!!! Lovd dis one as it perfectly describes swaron's journey so far!!! Hoping to see more such awesum works from u!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sudha ji...kithhe ho aap n aap k pair kaha hai...i mean wow...i mean wow wow wow...what class...👏👏.padh k toh dil garden garden ho gaya yaar...though i m not poet lover but u made me to fall love in ur poem ...i just loved it.👍🏼
keep writing bcoz as of now am ur die hard fan...love u🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sudha tu shayar bhi ban gayi ab ek dum style mein...luvd ur dedication esp for its simple yet appealing lyrics which r so true for the times that Swaron r currently going thru...three cheers & may this b an inspiration & the first of many more to cum 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Never thought Sudha you would be equally good poet as good you are an author. This poem beautifully sums up the journey of SwaRon till now. Especailly the last two stanja awesomely shows the current state for SwaRon track.
This poem was beautifully written. Hoping to see more of them from you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Sudha..amazingly written!!
n TSF congrtulations hope it reaches 10k sooner!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome poem
Just loved it
It describe swaron journey from starting n how much swayam love sharon
Amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww Cute One😊 Loved It😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sudha-ji! Kya baat hai! Poems likhna shuru kar diya. Very well written, by the way. I'm no expert on poems, but this one has a nice to ring it. Lucid and flowing. And totally appropriate from Swayam's POV. iLoved. 👍🏼

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