KR SS : ~|| A NOTE || ~ (completed)

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KR SS : ~|| A NOTE ||~


There I sat alone in silence. I din't know from how many hours I was there. My friends would probably be worried about me.

It had now been 9 months that she had betrayed and left me or so I thought. All this while I had tried to forget her. Leave her behind. Forget her as a bad dream. But alas easier said than done.

My friends tried to set me up with many girls, I don't blame them they only wanted to see me smile. Later some also thought that I had fallen for Tanni. Hey!! I am NOT that low people. Just because I don't want to be with anyone else or I talk to her or I am friendly with her does not make her my love interest. Get it straight!! . She is just a friend actually a friend's sister. If I know that a jerk like Shivam is messing up with her I have to stop it. I do agree I am a bit overprotected about her but that was because somewhere I had blamed myself for her condition. I know she loves me but I also know that she will understand that we are not meant to be, she is a friend in fact a good friend but can't replace Kriya, ever.

As her name crossed my mind. I looked at the small piece of paper in my hand. I opened it again and read it for about millionth time I guess.

Rey, I know I have hurt you a lot. And you probably hate me now. But try and understand what I felt that day broke me forever. I am hurt probably more because I have intentionally hurt you, hurt the only person who so loved and cared about me. But I was bound Rey. I had promised mom that I will never dance or have any contact with you. The two things which are most precious to me in this world, but I can't do anything. I broke your heart so that you could move on and I really hope you do so. And the very fact that you loved me is enough for me. Please try to forgive and forget me.

A tear trickled down my cheeks as I finished reading the small note.

Did she really love me? She never betrayed me? She promised to never dance just for us? Is she alright? Where the hell is she??!!!!

Millions of questions were running in my mind. I laughed at my fate. Today just by chance I was pasing by the girl's locker room when I saw a cleaner clear Kriya's old locker tried to avoid it but then unwillingly steeped in. I looked at all the stuffs lying there which once belonged to her. My gaze fell on some books and there, there it was 'MACBETH'; all the memories attached to flashed to me just like a motion picture. A faint smile made its place on my face. There were sum files and a notebook. I took the notebook and ran my fingers on it. I smiled at the thought that something of her was still near me. I opened the notebook, in big bold letters it was written KRIYA GHAI. I smiled but it was soon turned to a annoyed one as I flipped through the pages of the notebook, it was empty. I felt somewhat disappointed. Disappointment nothing new for me. Huhh on the other hand would cud have he found a love-letter describing her un-dying love for him, they coming together and oh-so love story. Too filmy to be true. Reality is a bitch man, come back on earth; my mind said. It's then that my gaze fell on a paper, folded and kept at a side. I opened it but then it struck me it cud be personal and technically he had no right to open it. as I was about to fold it back, I noticed tear marks on the paper as the writing was smashed with it. I now decided to read it. Call me an idiot or dumb but I can't see my baatcutter sad, even if I don't matter to her, she did and always will. I need to know the reasons for those tears and that's how at last I cane to this paper which turned my life upside down.

I chuckled at the irony of my thoughts. Life and love has its way. But now some things were really bugging me. I need an answer to all my questions. And I have to find HER!!. But where is she???...

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hope you all liked it 😊..this was suppose to be a os but turned out to be an ss, this time a happy ending awaits.😊 There are 2 more parts, will update if you all want want it and only after we get a good response , no demands kept as such but plzz dnt disappoint us 😳

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- Shreya and Kanishtha

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awesum SS..
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if a million likes could be given,i would have done it.awesome...continue it...and update soon...finally he knows that she never betrayed him...she betrayed herself but not him..lovely...
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totally new soch...

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