PrAja SS Life without You epilogue updated pg 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: coderlady
Nice start. Nice to see Pratap repenting his decision.

Thank you so much. May I know your name?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: nikkipeanu
Great start! I am excited by the inner monologue that Pratap has going, and I hope you do some sort of repenting on Pratap's part. I was sadly disappointed when we received no sorry, no nothing when they brought Ajabde back. I hope she plays a little hard to get and makes him work for it.

Thank you. Yeah he will work well in my stories coz i am not a CV's fan😡😡. Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thank you for all the love.

Part 2

Pratap was lost in his thoughts so he dint notice TD coming. "Thinking about your wife. This brought him out of his reverie. He looked at him impassively. TD cntinued,"I think you should go and fulfill you duties towards her. Grihasthashram is very important phase in every man's life. I knew you were wrong when you decided to take diksha but I didnt stop you bcoz i wanted you to realize your mistake as well as your duties towards her. Now since you are repenting, I give you the freedom to go and complete a phase of your life. Vijay bhava KP! You always have my blessings.

Pratap was overwhelmed to hear his guru say this. At the same time he was feeling more remorse. He did such a foolish thing whch wasnt even acknowledged by his guru TD. But now, he'll correct everything. He will bring himself back in this world as well as ajabde's world. He took TD's leave and headed to their house in kashi. But while entering the village, he suddenly felt as his his heart was getting ripped by a dagger, the same feeling he gets when any of his loved one is in danger. Dismissing this intuition and praying to god, he entered the house. The sight before him left him dumbstruck. Ajabde had her hair disheavelled, her clothes were dirty as if their master had lost the spark to dress, she was lying in a semi conscious state with a dull face half on bed and half on the floor. Blood was dripping from her hand forming a pool around her. Her wrist was in blood. Ajabde couldnt see him because she had lost her energy in all these 7 days. Moreover, she had completely given up on him or his return. Pratap felt his heart getting constricted in his chest on seeing her like this. She had cut her wrist!

Pratap immediately picked her up and laid her on the bed. Ajabde saw him but thought that this was nothing but her inner thoughts and wishes getting a form. So she just waited silently wanting to elope from this world with death. Pratap read her but before answering a memory flashed through his mind,,"if i had to choose between a life without you and death i promise to choose death" She had shared with him this wild imagination of hers after they had consummated their marriage. He was so drowned in bhakti that he left it unheard and now he was paying. Ajabde flinched a litte and brought him back to the world. Pratap immediately shouted," SOMEONE CALL THE VAIDJI. PLEASE. CHAKRAPANI WHERE ARE YOU? CALL THE VAIDJI. PATTA GO AND GET THE VAID. CHAKRAPANI! PATTA!" bOTH of them gathered and the sight before them made them numb. They were against pratap's decision but could never dare to oppose him. now was not the timw to think all this. They immediately went to vaidji's house and asked him to come with them immediately. On learning that it was ajabde's case, even vaidji's wife(VW) accompanied the,.

Vaidji and VW were shocked to see a pregnant woman in such a state. They immediately told the others to go out. VW examined her state whereas vaidji prepared a temmporary medecine to give some glucose and energy to ajabde. They knew that if she wanted to live, she'll survive. But ajabde's state of mind affected her will to live and this made VW fear like hell. She asked her one thing, "My child, as far as i know, you are deeply hurt by KP's diksha experiment. Now, he's back in your life. Do you want to live ?" ajabde answered gathering her new acquired energy, "Mausiji, my life had ended from the moment KP told me to take diksha and didnt even care to think about my feelings, leave alone the fact that he unfulfilled his promises and left me midway. This is just a formality to complete the human concept related to death and to ensure that i am physically and mentally dead." " so you want KP to repent?" ajabde nodded,"That is why I want to die..."

VW explained,"Death is not an option. Inthat case, he wil mourn for maybe a month or two and then move on letting you sacrifice go in vain. LIVE and make him regret his decisions, make him realize his faults, your importance, make him miss you again and again, make him understand the importance of your company, of your trust, of your care. you will have to be strong ajabde. And then there will be an actual transformation in him. " Ajabde thought for a while and then asked," What about my child?" VW said, "the gods are by your side ajabde though there is a major blood loss the child is fit and healthy inside your womb. Saving both of you'll would be a cakewalk if you arise the will to live again" Ajabde said," if that is the case, cure me soon mausiji. I am tired of three days of crying and four days of fasting." VW couldnt help but smile. Ajabde added, " Behold KP you are gonna tackle the real ajabde now. Brace yourself well"

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Pari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

trouble time for our dear KP he is so gone

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Garima

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: aayu_26

OMG Garima you replied that too on my very first update of the story😃😃😃 I think I am off into fangirling mode😆 thank you for welcoming. Yeah the next update will be soon😊

Ohhh now you are making me all 😳 you know I had a big fan girl moment when Asya_lover, Aru_A, Celu commented on my works - I mean these guys have been there for so long and wrote these amazing stuff...My inspiration to write stories came from DiviC- check out all her work, Pari is a sweethearta and a fantabulous writer as well

Coming to the update - I enjoyed it - Ajabde's condition moved me and I'm in love with Vaidraj ki wife on the show and in your story as well. She is a smart woman
Waiting to see Pratap doing all the work now

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JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Good start of a story...Pratap to repent...Love the notion.

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Pari

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Ohhh now you are making me all 😳 you know I had a big fan girl moment when Asya_lover, Aru_A, Celu commented on my works - I mean these guys have been there for so long and wrote these amazing stuff...My inspiration to write stories came from DiviC- check out all her work, Pari is a sweethearta and a fantabulous writer as well

Coming to the update - I enjoyed it - Ajabde's condition moved me and I'm in love with Vaidraj ki wife on the show and in your story as well. She is a smart woman
Waiting to see Pratap doing all the work now

You are making me 😳 😳

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Garima

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: pari0706

You are making me 😳 😳

I ❤️ you Pari ☺️

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Pari

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awww me too Garima 🤗

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aayu_26

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Ohhh now you are making me all 😳 you know I had a big fan girl moment when Asya_lover, Aru_A, Celu commented on my works - I mean these guys have been there for so long and wrote these amazing stuff...My inspiration to write stories came from DiviC- check out all her work, Pari is a sweethearta and a fantabulous writer as well

Coming to the update - I enjoyed it - Ajabde's condition moved me and I'm in love with Vaidraj ki wife on the show and in your story as well. She is a smart woman
Waiting to see Pratap doing all the work now

Oh yes i have read those stories too😊 But due to studies i couldnt comment.

There are so many amazing writers on the forum. It is like whenever they complete one i am like 👏

Anyways thank you and yes i like to portray the characters in their best not like the CVs😡

Will definitely think something khuraffati😉