PrAja SS Life without You epilogue updated pg 13 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Oh man, I can't wait to know what you have planned for him! And vaidji's wife always has some effective advice. Hopefully, he has to work hard for it. I am excited to see what the real Ajabde is like.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update is here
Part 3
'How is Ajabde?' was the first thing pratap asked the vaid. VW looked impassive thoroughly pissed by his carelessness but vaidji continued,' KP ajabde wil be fine if she would want to. They left leaving behind two confused and one greiving soul. VW asked vaidji,'Why you lied to KP ?' vaidji replied,'KP is like my son and as a father i should have my hand in making him correct his flaws ' both of them smiled and went away.
Here pratap was all frustrated seeing ajabde do all the chores with her right wrist still bleeding which could be seen by the reddening of the bandage. Ajabde was now in the courtyard giving some hay to the bullocks carrying a cart. Pratap asked her where was she going but she remained silent. Ajabde went to her room and was packing all her stuff as if going somewhere. pratap asked her,'are you going somewhere?' Silence. He had enough. pratap asked her to stop, he even ordered her but she neither acknowledged his presence nor did she answered him. Pratap wanted her to scold him, to make him say sorry and make him regret his decision but not to be silent. Her silence was killing him. He was just about to talk to her when she suddenly faded. Pratap held her in his arms and made her lay on the bed. 'let her get up and she is gonna receive a good dose for her foolhardiness' he sprinkled some water on her face which made her open her eyes. 'i'm done with your unnecessary darings ajabde. Now you are gonn rest and that is an order. I know i have failed you but please dont let your health show your hurt. Henceforth, i ppromise to never leave you and to always be by your side. I'm sorry for all the wrongs i did towards you and also for always leaving you. Do you intend on making me live a vast life all alone in this cruel world? I will make sure i never repeat them again. But please ajabde dont harm your health for my misdeeds i cannot imagine a life without you'
Their eyes conveyed how much pain they had undergone and the desire to be together. But ajabde had to be strong. She said blankly,'Imagine? you had chosen a life without me that too very lovingly. Kunwarsa, it is the wife who would be at fault right when her wise and justice loving husband would go for diksha? surely, the wife would have not fulfilled her duties well bcox if she would have done then her smart husband wont leave her. the wife would have only failed in loving her husband with full her heart and body and also being with him which led to he leaving her. A girl who has always got ignorance and insult from all her loved ones insipte of sacrificing everything for them would only be at fault. She would have only been wrong when the person who claimed to trust her and love her left her after 24 hrs of marriage and also midway of a journey in an unknown place. i know i am very unfortunate and maybe the worst thing ever happening to you that is why i am leaving your life and going to ujjain to repent for my sins that i would have committed leading to everyone hurting me and getting angered by me. Thank you for all that you have done uptil now kunwarsa but i need to leave by today. Regarding my health, i actually dont intend to live but vaidjis medecines are forcing life into me. If He wants then i may survive to serve people and if He doesnt then i may die...' she tried to make it as sarcastic as possible. she knew she was lying but it was time for her to test his love for her.
'You are the best thing that has happened to me ajbde. you will live and you are not going anywhere. you are resting. I was carried away for sometime ajabde but now i know how much important you are for me. I promise ajabde i won't leave you. I am sorry'
' always make promises that are under our control. Anyways i am leaving for ujjain and i don't think that you have got any right on me now. You had left me and now as a returned sanyasi you have got no right on your wife'
Ajabde sits in the cart and leaves. a lone tear escapes from her eyes but she had to be strong. Strong so that she ensures a bright future for herself, their baby and their entire kingdom
Here pratap was all set to start from zero.'Kunwarsa huh ajabde? Well you forgot one thing that if you can resume your form of baijilal even i am Kp of mewar. How far will you resist me. With a plan forming in his mind, he rode on chetak and followed her wife's carriage.
Precap: Guys, i want your suggestions. I have lost all my brains in my exams and for quick proceedings, i would need some fuelling from you'll. Please comment and feel free to give suggestions😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikkipeanu

Oh man, I can't wait to know what you have planned for him! And vaidji's wife always has some effective advice. Hopefully, he has to work hard for it. I am excited to see what the real Ajabde is like.

Well i have encompassed the character of baijilal into real ajabde since that was the time she discovered herself. Hope you are satisfied with how the story is proceeding🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Well done on getting Pratap to say sorry...continue the story of Ajabdee ignoring KP. I would love to see KP getting angry and trying to protect Ajabdee... Tjis is her chance to show him all the mis-judgement he made thru out their marriage.
The story line is really progressing well.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update - I'm so proud of you - you brought in Ajabde as the hurt wife-would be mother and then traits of Baijilal effectively so bravo👏

Ideas okay
1) You can show Ajab facing some difficult situation on her journey and Pratap helping her from the background

2) Ujjain they meet JB and she helps both Ajabde and Pratap with their difficulties

3) Ajabde though taking care of herself somehow manages to get trapped/hurt/faints or something and Pratap looks
4) You could also show a Ajabde Deewaana trying to woo her but Pratap ruining all his plans

I'll think of something more and let you know😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update - I'm so proud of you - you brought in Ajabde as the hurt wife-would be mother and then traits of Baijilal effectively so bravo👏

Ideas okay
1) You can show Ajab facing some difficult situation on her journey and Pratap helping her from the background

2) Ujjain they meet JB and she helps both Ajabde and Pratap with their difficulties

3) Ajabde though taking care of herself somehow manages to get trapped/hurt/faints or something and Pratap looks
4) You could also show a Ajabde Deewaana trying to woo her but Pratap ruining all his plans

I'll think of something more and let you know😃
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Ajabde having a deewaana...that would be awesome to watch...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Well done on getting Pratap to say sorry...continue the story of Ajabdee ignoring KP. I would love to see KP getting angry and trying to protect Ajabdee... Tjis is her chance to show him all the mis-judgement he made thru out their marriage.

The story line is really progressing well.

Thank you. Apka hukum sarakho par.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Amazing update - I'm so proud of you - you brought in Ajabde as the hurt wife-would be mother and then traits of Baijilal effectively so bravo👏

Ideas okay
1) You can show Ajab facing some difficult situation on her journey and Pratap helping her from the background

2) Ujjain they meet JB and she helps both Ajabde and Pratap with their difficulties

3) Ajabde though taking care of herself somehow manages to get trapped/hurt/faints or something and Pratap looks
4) You could also show a Ajabde Deewaana trying to woo her but Pratap ruining all his plans

I'll think of something more and let you know😃

Thank you yaar. Even i was thinking of that deewana part. I'll surely consider the ideas.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Update is here friends. The next update will be after 15 likes and minimum five comments. ( i cannot do anything for my greed)
Part 4
Ajabde had been travelling for two hours now. More half a day to go. Pratap was nicely following his wife plotting plans to win her heart all over again. He had chakrapani by his side thinking what he would tell to subho. Afterall subho would kill him after knowing that he led KP do all this to Ajabde.
Chakri:'Baujiraj what are you thinking? Do you have any plans on what do you intend to do once in ujjain?'
KP:'Chakrapani i know where will she go in ujjain. She had once told me that she wanted to spend time in the vishnu temple there whenever she would be in a dilemna. I know she will go there to find solace. And for us, our dear friend Som has already made all the preparations for our stay. Now stop interrogating me and think of something which will make your bhabhisa come with me'
Chakri: i don't know how to handle my wife subho also who is just her friend. Thinking about convincing bhabhisa is beyond my wildest imaginations.
KP:' So true chakri. Last time just to convince her for marriage i had to work so hard. the starts were with me when she silently agreed for gauna. I will have a very tough time '
Chakr:'Baujiraj you don't even flinch in front of the biggest enemies and now a girl is giving you fearful goosebumps. I must say bhabhisa was the perfect choice undoubtebly.
KP:'Oh really! then why does the greatest astrloger of all time pandit chakrapani mishra cannot even ask for his favourite dish in front of his wife?
Chakri:'Stop making fun of me baujiraj and think something which will melt bhabhisa. you know like using your charms and wits.'
KP:'You are right chakri ajabde can never resist my charms. I'll think something really smart'
Just then both of them stopped. Ajabde had moved out of her cart. They hid behind a kind of lot of trees and saw the scene unfolding in front of them.
There was a crowd that had gathered in front of her cart and to see what was happening she got down. As soon as she saw that some mughals were taking innocent children for labour. She became alert. She called them, ' You filthy foreigners! What the hell are you doing on our soil. By which right are you taking these innocent children? Leave them! NOW!'
Their head mehfoos khan rebuked,' these are the subjects of our lord akbar and we do have a right on doing anything with them But who are you? I must say, Allah has made you with all his time and emotions!' while scrutinizing her from head to toe, He began moving forward. Ajabde got really scared because she did not have her dagger nor the sword. She quickly tried to run towards the cart but tripped on the floor due to a petty stone. Mehfoos khan started moving towards her. Just then...
Precap: Action and reaction
I know its boring but i always wanted a light hearted conversation between both the friends.
Do comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
I got a little behind so just catching up. Like how the story is progressing. Waiting to see what you will make Pratap do to win her back. He owes her big time.

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