PrAja SS Life without You epilogue updated pg 13 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: coderlady

I got a little behind so just catching up. Like how the story is progressing. Waiting to see what you will make Pratap do to win her back. He owes her big time.


Thank you. Oh yess he has to work really hard this time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aayu baby please update am eagerly waiting for Mehfoos khan ki pitaai - I love dishoom dishoom so khoob saara dishoom dishoom dena please with a side of romance 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Aayu baby please update am eagerly waiting for Mehfoos khan ki pitaai - I love dishoom dishoom so khoob saara dishoom dishoom dena please with a side of romance 😊


Aww baby suites my name 😳
Sure will update by tonight with a lot of dhishum dhushum and a pinch pf romance
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Hey..Ayu sweet heart..!!! Firstly welcome to the world of writings .. 🤗

Now coming to ur ss...Well read all the parts in one go.. and they all are really like fantastically magical...🥳

And I think PrAja will fall for each other once again.. waiting for ur next update... so update ASAP...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApekshaM

Hey..Ayu sweet heart..!!! Firstly welcome to the world of writings .. 🤗


Now coming to ur ss...Well read all the parts in one go.. and they all are really like fantastically magical...🥳

And I think PrAja will fall for each other once again..waiting for ur next update... so update ASAP...😉


Hey thanks yaar 😛
All you wonderful writers on the forum are my inspiration 😳
Update will be done tonight 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
First of all HAPPY MAHAVIR JAYANTHI to all of you. May lord Mahavir bless you'll with whatever you'll desire. Secondly, sorry for the delay. Enjoy but don't forget to leave my loads of love at the end. The next part should be a great surprise and entertainer for you'll
PART 5
Mehfoos khan was moving towards ajabde who had been tripped and fallen on the grown. She was hell scared as she was carrying a baby and could not fight as she didn't want to harm the baby. But, on the other hand, she could'nt let some leech eye her. So she threw some sand in his eyes and tried to run towards the cart. But her attempts failed as mehfoos had ordered his men to surround her. They were all grinning visualising the future entertainement. Mehfoos made a move towards ajabde's dupatta but his hand never got the fabric as it was cut apart from his body. Yes, our dearest husband and warrior pratap had arrived for his wife's rescue. Pratap had fire exuding from him which could be clearly seen through his blood red eyes and body gestures. Ajabde was transfixed by the recent happenings. Pratap ordered her to come behind him. Pratap then asked calmly yet anyone could make out he was highly angry,' Mehfoos Khan, how badly i wanted to find you and slaughter you for kidnapping innocent children of kashi and selling them to camel traders. Today, i also came to know that you were so cheap and shameless in charracter just like your fellow mates. First, I thought to kill you in one go but now, since you dared to eye Kunwar Pratap's wife and make her cry, I am going to give you the most painful death'
Mehfoos khan was trembling with fear and pain. The Kunwar Pratap Of Mewar was standing in front of him and what more? He had tried to harm the modesty of KP's wife! But gathering his confidence he said,'Oh Pratap! Badshah will shower gold coins on me when he'll know that I killed you. And these kids- Soldiers trap the kids now'. The soldiers followed the orders and put swords on their necks. Pratap said,'Mehfoos Khan don't act like a coward.Leave them. NOW'
MK:'Kp i am not a coward i'm just working towards what i want. The condition is simple. I'll leave the kids and you...well give me your begum'MK eyed lustily towards her feeling proud on his own intelligence. That was it. Pratap was boiling with anger. He shouted,'MEHFOOS KHAN' and kicked him so hard that he landed up on one of the soldiers holding a child. All the soldiers were terrified by this. Pratap was on a violent rampage. He killed each and every soldier before cornering MK.
'MEHFOOS KHAN you dared to eye my wife and have your filthy eyes on the innocent kids!!!! You'll be doomed Mehfoos khan.' And with this, Pratap cut through his throat in one go leaving behing his short torso whereas his head landed at ajabde's feet. Pratap calmed down seeing his wife's face and said, 'Your culprit is at your feet ajabde'. Ajabde kicked his head and mumbled, 'Thank you KP' and returned back to the cart. Pratap asked, 'You won't come with me. On this, she replied, 'I never forgave you KP' But pratap was smiling looking at her retreating figure,' Atleast now I am KP for you and not Kunwarsa. Brace yourself for more charismatic shows ajabde'. With this, Pratap left on his chetak following ajabde who was silently thinking how will she build up a self control strong enough to resist KP
Precap: New entry
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
What an entrance by KP - am all vaari jaawan soniyo

Haaye Ajabde kiya karegi becahari- kaise control karegi aone emotions ko- soch soch ke hi dil mera goes dhak dhak☺️

Mehfoos Khan toh gayoo pit gaya woh kamina - Ajabde pe dore daal raha than pata nahi KP uski band kya baraat nikalwa dega. KP ka gussa was like ☢️

Amazing update Aayu baby - new entry kiski ho rahi hai????
Ajabade ka koi deewaana ya phir JB waapis aa rahi hai KP ko ek do teen acche acche slap maarne😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

What an entrance by KP - am all vaari jaawan soniyo

Haaye Ajabde kiya karegi becahari- kaise control karegi aone emotions ko- soch soch ke hi dil mera goes dhak dhak☺️

Mehfoos Khan toh gayoo pit gaya woh kamina - Ajabde pe dore daal raha than pata nahi KP uski band kya baraat nikalwa dega. KP ka gussa was like ☢️

Amazing update Aayu baby - new entry kiski ho rahi hai????
Ajabade ka koi deewaana ya phir JB waapis aa rahi hai KP ko ek do teen acche acche slap maarne😉


Woh toh pata chal ho jayega yaar but bohot maza aane waala hae. Thank you so much for commenting on every part it means a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Nice update. Hopefully Pratap will have to more than just fight to get Ajabde to forgive him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Nice update. Hopefully Pratap will have to more than just fight to get Ajabde to forgive him.


Yup he will definitely have to work hard

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