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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys I'm really sorry for the delay. Here is the epilogue. Read, like and comment😊
EPILOGUE
AFTER SEVEN MONTHS
Ajabde was making pratap go nuts with her various demands and mood swings. At one time, she wanted to have mangoes in winter that too ripe ones. Poor pratap had to go all the way to the far south to get them. And then she wanted imlis and lemons for whole two days. No food, only tamarind and lemons. When her demands were satisfied, she still used to scold pratap like a kid because the shape and colour was not perfect. Poor pratap had no support of db and us also. They used to be like,'kp seems like you are getting the punishment for all your troubling to us'. Db used to laugh and say that it was all a part of this phase and that fulfilling all the demands is his duty. Maan and chand used to always laugh on her antics and his poor condition. But all the pain was for a very fruitful cause, which was maybe now giving pain, a lot of pain to his or her mother. He came out of his thoughts and went to ajabde who was tearing all the bedsheets by her hands not able to handle the pain.
Db:ajabde please few more minutes please try to push please control yourself
Aj:chotimaa I can't handle him he has gone on his father only I guess, very adamant aaahh not anymore aahhh
Daima:ranisa it's been six hours of labor I doubt...
Db:no daima no! Don't say that. Ajabde please for your kingdom, your husband, yourself
Ajabde: aaahhh kunwarrr pratappp
Daima: she's getting unconscious
Just then kp entered.
Kp:ajabdeee
His father's voice worked like magic. The baby started to make movement. Ajabde got consciousness and in one last try she pushed.
Aj: Aaahhh
The wailing of the baby echoed in the whole corridor. Everyone was in tears. Ajabde took a look at the lump of flesh they had produced. So innocent. So small. Yet so fiery and shining. Daima slowly whispered that it was a boy. Db was overwhelmed by the fact that she became a grandmom. She had finally accepted kp as her own and had left behind all her negativities. US and rawatji came in. All of them were very happy as the heir of the crown was born. He wasnamed Amar, the one who never dies. And as little amar went into his father'sarms from his mother's, he cuddled himself to his chest clearly indicated how much he liked his father's touch. US and db held him and the mischievous bundle started fidgeting with their jewellery and hair. Maan and chand were more engrossed in fighting who will get amar first. And then ajbde held him close to her bosom. He loved the safe haven of his mother's arms. Pratap remarked that this little naughty fellow already has started to own my wife making everyone burst into laughter.
In the night pratap entered his room and saw ajabde humming a lullaby to their child. She indicated pratap not to make any sound and pratap like an obedient child went on the bed and waited for her. After some time, she got up ensuring amar was asleep in the cradle and came to the bed.
Pratap: I'm scared ajabde. What if i don't be a good father?
Ajabde: kunwar pratap even I'm new in this phase of life. We have got our elders who will guide us through all the difficulties and besides we have got the company of each other. As far as we are together no difficulty can come in between our happiness.
Pratap: yes that is true. We will always be together no matter what happens.
With that they embraced each other and also embraced their new destiny and new roles in their lives.

AFTER EIGHT YEARS
Amar singh was the exact copy of his father was the first thing anyone would say on seeing him. Same dashing looks, that killer smile, that fiery attitude, that excellent brains, that courage and that intense patriotism. The only thing he inherited from his mother was dark, deep eyes and a compassionate attitude. As soon as he got a little big, the whole palace used to buzz by his antics. Once he had freed the whole cattle of a farmer saying that he used to beat them a lot and that animals deserve a better living. His intentions were pure this was argued by pratap only to hear that he was spoiling his son. Poor amar had to listen so much from his mother while their grandparents stood there smiling and his father, oh his great warrior father used to transform into such a cat in front of his mother. And now he knew he was dead since he had messed up the kitchen, the favourite place of his mother. Ajabde was still taking in the situation, spilled vessels, shattered veggies, spices everywhere, burned daal and a face full of flour. Maan and chand were laughing seeing the white amar and pratap was fearing the next thing to come.
Ajabde: what have you done to my kitchen?
Amar: maa actually i wanted to cook food today for the guests coming to meet us. Your best friend phool mausiji is also there na so i wanted to cook food by my oen hands.
Pratap: that is so generous of you amar
Ajabde: stop supporting him kp. Look at the state of my kitchen. And where are the daasis?
Amar: i declared avkash for them. I thought I'll do all by myself but it didn'twork out...
Ajabde: amar singh you know you are too small for this. Be like your father na. Use brains in wars and strategies not in my kitchen please.
Pratap: excuse me but i'm also good at all...
Ajabde: oh please kp! Want me to make amar aware of the disaster last time when you tried cooking and had burnt half of my food?
Pratap:see that was...
Amar: really maa? In that case i'm better than daajiraj
Ajabde: stop laughing amar. You will get a punishment.
Amar: but why only me? Tell dajiraj also. After all he only told me to cook for you.
Ajabdr: Whattt????
Prarap: not like that actually...
Amar: speak up daajiraj waise toh you are the greatest warrior not afraid of the worst enemies then in front of maa why do you always get mum?
Pratap was all flustered now. Ajabde was very angry.
Ajabde: is this true?
Pratap: yeah... no no I mean..
Ajabde: both of you do whatever you want I'm going. Huh!
She left angrily. Amar and pratap looked at each other innocently.
Pratap: we will have a tough time to convince her
Anar: yes daajiraj i know. But np you flirt with her a little and i will clean up all the mess. He smiled at his little smartness.
Pratap: you are getting naughtier day by day. Now clean this up or else your mother will kill us.
Both of them smiled and then got to work.
Pratap: (nuzzling her neck ftom back) ajabde sorry na we won'trepeat it pakka.
Ajabde: no kp. You can't always get away..s..oo...ea...sily..
Pratap was kissing her back making it difficult for her to talk
Pratap(kissing her nape of neck): sorry ajabde
Ajabde had to give in.
Ajabde: okay but this is the last time. She said turning around.
Pratap: yeah okay.and he kissed her on her forehead and left to meet the guests.
Phool had married the Prince of ajmer kunwar sahadev and was very happy in her life. She was also pregnant with ajabde and was that is why unable to meet her. Now she had come to meet her with her two kids kunwar samar and rajkumari kanak. All the three shared a very good camaraderie that is amar, samar and kanak. Ajabde remarked that kanak was indeed as beautiful as her mother. Even phool and ajabde shared a gala time whereas pratap and sahadev initially shared light moments but then got engrossed im some state matters.
The way amar and kanak looked at each other, their mothers knew they would share a beautiful bond, perhaps a permanent one. Years went by and their friendship blossomed into love. It was amar's marriage. He had grown into a handsome, brave and intelligent young warrior. But his heart was reserved only for kanak. Ajabde and phool were very happy as their friendship had now turned into relationship. The whole chittaur was decorated as a bride but the real bride was par a beauty.
And as praja saw their responsibilities getting fulfilled at the night of amar's marriage, they sighed a breath of accomplishment as they entangled their hands enjoying each other's company staring at the endless night sky in awe of the glittering stars and their brightened future.

THE END
Thank you for being with me throughout. Hope that you'll will support me in my future endeavours too😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
My epilogue is here!!!! such a wonderful end to an amazing story Aayu baby..you make me so proud and happy...Well done on the story. ..Simply fabulous the epilogue was -
so our AS is a little mischievous haan exactly like KP well after all he is his son...and even Phool is happy that is so good to see and read...
Amar and Kanak - like the rhyme that goes...
Thank you so much for granting me my wish for an epilogue Aayu baby

PS: I'm first!!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
👏a really beautiful ending!... thanks for your wonderful story😊
aayu_26 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

My epilogue is here!!!! such a wonderful end to an amazing story Aayu baby..you make me so proud and happy...Well done on the story. ..Simply fabulous the epilogue was -
so our AS is a little mischievous haan exactly like KP well after all he is his son...and even Phool is happy that is so good to see and read...
Amar and Kanak - like the rhyme that goes...
Thank you so much for granting me my wish for an epilogue Aayu baby

PS: I'm first!!!!




Yayy you are first di!!!!
Omg itna sweetness muje toh diabetes ho jayega 😆
I'm glad you liked it really I wanted to give a fabulous update to you especially since you always encouraged me the most. This one was for you di 😊
Glad that you are proud of your baby 😃
Ab thoda mischeif toh zaroori hae 😛 😉
Yes I always believe in having people happy in all the celebrations.
Glad you liked my pairing 😉
Thank you once again for so much love

PS: I have one more story lined up titled love and betrayal so would be glad if you guide me through that also since you are excellent at modern praja stories 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poeple1234

👏a really beautiful ending!... thanks for your wonderful story😊


Thank you so much 😊
twilightlover29 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aayu_26


Yayy you are first di!!!!
Omg itna sweetness muje toh diabetes ho jayega 😆
I'm glad you liked it really I wanted to give a fabulous update to you especially since you always encouraged me the most. This one was for you di 😊
Glad that you are proud of your baby 😃
Ab thoda mischeif toh zaroori hae 😛 😉
Yes I always believe in having people happy in all the celebrations.
Glad you liked my pairing 😉
Thank you once again for so much love

PS: I have one more story lined up titled love and betrayal so would be glad if you guide me through that also since you are excellent at modern praja stories 😊



@Bold: I'm getting a new story-yipeee
totally psyched for it already...post it soon please
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Posted: 10 years ago
A surprise epilogue. It was a treat. Wonderful story overall. Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

A surprise epilogue. It was a treat. Wonderful story overall. Thank you.


No need for thank you yaar!
Glad you liked it 😊

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