Rishmi OS Broken Heart

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Tanukirti

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Posted: 3 years ago

hii guys

I am writing the oneshot. Give your opinions on the one shot.

Its start with Malishka asking to Rishi to broke his all tie with Lakshmi. On her insistence he throw the ring and chain given by Lakshmi and his family.

Lakshmi feel something wrong. On the other hand Malishka saw a snake behind Rishi and shout RISHIIII.Rishi asked what happened. Malishka said a snake is behind you. Rishi turned And Snake bites him and he shouted and his phone fall from his hand. Hearing his shout Lakshmi comes there and get shocked. Lakshmi take in her lap and asked not to close your eyes and tie cloth near his bitten area. She called everyone and called the ambulance.

Rishi get admitted in hospital. Neelam get to know what happened when Malishka and his mother was talking that how Malishka get angry amd asked him to break his relation with Lakshmi. Neelam start scolding Malishka that how could she do this with Rishi when she knows that he have dosh in his kundali and only Lakshmi horoscope can protect her. Thats why they get her married to him for a year only. Just then he hear a voice of falling something. All turned and saw Lakshmi. Everyone get shocked. Lakshmi look shattered. Lakshmi asked why everyone do this to me.Why you people get me married to him if he love Malishka.Why you spoil my life?WHYYYYY. Everyone get silent as none have answer.Ayush start to say Rishi bhai have lakshmi stop him and say I heard everything.If you all have informed me before the marriage I have agreed to marry him whole heartedly because my bauji asked me to help everyone. If you have informed me before then I have never loved Rishi but you all hide the truth from me.I will never forgive you.She runs from there non stop.After running a lot she comes to a temple.She fold his hand infront of the idol.Why you always snatched that people whom I love the most?Why first my parents then Rishi Why? Now show me some way and she closed her eyes and suddenly she remembers all the family member talks that only she can protect Rishi.PLEASE GOD PLEASE SAVE RISHI. I KNOW HE CHEATED ME BUT I LOVED HIM TRUELY PLEASE SAV HIM. I WILL GO AWAY FROM HIM AFTER A YEAR. I KNOW HE CAN NEVER LOVE ME BECAUSE HE LOVED MALISHKA. I WILL RING THE BELL UNTIL RISHI GET FINE. She start ring the bell. After sometime her hand start bleeding still she ring the bell on the other side Venom is taken out from Rishi's body. Ayush start to search Lakshmi. After some hours of searching, he find Lakshmi in the temple with bleeding hand and she was ringing the bell continuously. Ayush inform her that rishi get fine and is out of danger. After her this both goes back to hospital. Rishi get conscious and doctor inform them not to stress rishi about anything. Malishka goes to meet Rishi. Malishka said sorry to Rishi and talked to him for sometime but rishi was continuously thinking about Lakshmi why she didn't came to meet him? How is she? and so on.On the other hand ayush take lakshmi for first aid. After 10 mins Lakshmi came out and sit emotionlessly. Virender today your prayer saved my son Lakshmi. Thank you beta. Lakshmi said nothing and goes from there. After2 days Rishi got discharge but in these two days Lakshmi didn't came to meet him for once and thats why he was shocked, sad and worried. He reached home, everyone welcomed him but Lakshmi didn't came to welcome him and again he got shocked. He then goes to his room to rest and Lakshmi was also not there. Sanjay comes there to give him soup. He asked to Sanjay where is Lakshmi. He telled to Rishi she was in kitchen doing some work and left. Rishi goes to kitchen to meet her.Lakshmi asked do you need something. Rishi said no. Lakshmi continue to work. Rishi get shocked that she didn't asked about his health.Like this some days passed. Rishi was still thinking why Lakshmi is behaving weird with him and always ignore him. On Dhanteras, Dadi asked rishi and virender to gift their wives a gift both agreed but Lakshmi refused to take any gift from him. Rishi again get shocked, he was about to ask her but before that Lakshmi left from there. He comes behind her in their room.He asked her why are you behaving weird with me and ignoring me like hell? Lakshmi said I am not ignoring you rishi.Rishi stopped her then why your eyes don't show any emotion for me, You didn't even asked me how I am? What is the need for me to ask your health, Malishka asked and that enough. Rishi she is not my wife you are my wife. You have to fulfill all duties of my wife. Lakshmi Oh So duties are mine and love for Malishka, I am your wife and your girlfriend is Malishka. Rishi get shocked to hear Lakshmi outburst.Yes, Mr Oberoi I know everything that you love Malishka before our namesake marriage. Why Rishi, Why you didn't tell me the truth. Why you spoil my life. I know you feel suffocated in this marriage but you have to wait for 11 month. After that I will leave from your life for forever. Rishi felt like someone stabbed his heart repeatedly. Lakshmi didn't talk to anyone till diwali evening. On Diwali evening there is a celebration,Many guest are invited, So she have to act like Rishi's wife. She get ready in Red saree with side braid. She comes down till then all the guest have come. So she stand near rishi but there was a gap between them. Rishi didn't like this much ignorance of Rishi. A photographer come ask them to give pose and said to close the distance between them. They give a pose after that Lakshmi leaves from there. But Rishi felt Nice. Malishka didn't come as Neelam told her not to come till a 2 weeks as Lakshmi is very angry with everyone. They perform pooja together. After that everyone leaves because I don't want to drag it. Now Lakshmi used to sleep on floor and rishi felt bad but didn't not able to say anything. After that Lakshmi speak veey less to all person and she never talked to Rishi. Rishi start to miss Lakshmi smile, her talks, her care, her everything.He used to found reasons to tall to her but she never talked. One day Varun comes to meet Lakshmi at Oberoi Mansion ,seeing Varun Lakshmi comes running there smiling and shake hand with him. Everyone saw this but can't say anything to her now as varun was there. Varun greets everyone. Lakshmi ask him to come with her on terrace,on terrace they talk a lot as both were childhood friends. Rishi can't digest Lakshmi talking with a male. So he just go after them to see what are they talking. Varun say I missed you yaar How good it will be, if we both were married. Lakshmi said Yes I was so happy when our marriage was fixed but it broked.It will be a blessing from god if we both get married. Hearing this Rishi felt really bad, angry, jealous and what not. After some chit chatting he leaves saying he will wait for her till next birth. Rishi was very jealous. After that Rishi tries to make Lakshmi talk to him but nothing works. He realized that he loves Lakshmi amd broke up with Malishka. He tried many time to woo Lakshmi but she never talked or reacted to him Like that 9month passed. In this 9 months some accident happened with Rishi but Lakshmi save him always. Lakshmi send her sister to Amritsar with gurucharan chacha and start a dhaba there with their father 's insurance money and it was running very well. Now the pandit comes there that this 2 days is very risky for rishi. Everyone get panicked. Now after some hour he was going office but neelam tried to stop him but he said there was a important meeting he will come in 2 hours. Neelam said ok unwillingly.He goes out and see Lakshmi going out.He just then remember that today is auto rickshaw strike. So he request her to go by car. After much pleading he agreed. She left in car. Now Rishi was waiting for her return as today all cars taken away by all members. Suddenly Ayush called him he picked his call and he informed him that not to sit in the car as break are destroyed by a rival company owner .Rishi get shocked and remembered that Lakshmi left in the same car. Phone fall from his hand. After a minute,he come out of shock and pick his phone dialed Lakshmi number but it was unreachable. On the other side Lakshmi and his driver get to know that breaks are failed of their car when driver tried to apply break. Lakshmi asked him to take the car on the lonely road. He takes the car their now Lakshmi asked him to jump off from the car.Both did but Lakshmi head hit a big stone. Blood start coming out from his head. Driver called Rishi and informed the same. Rishi get shocked and called ayush asked him to come fast and informed him about Lakshmi accident. Ayush and rishi goes there and admitted her in the hospital. Everyone comes there.After 2 hours operation ,Doctor come out and informed them that Lakshmi goes to Coma. Rishi get shocked and disheartened. Rishi goes to Lakshmi ward and hold his hand, Lakshmi you always protect me even today you are here because of me. Panditji inform us that this week is very difficult for me but I didn't listen to anyone and now you are in this condition. After 2days Lakshmi shifted to Oberoi Mansion with all facilities, precautions. Rishi used to sit beside her always and used to do his work from home. He makes her ready daily and always apply sindoor to his maang. He take her care very well and never leave her except some urgent meetings. Like this one month passed.

One day Rishi said to Lakshmi please Lakshmi wake up I can't see you in this condition. please wake up give me what ever punishment you want to give me but please wake up damm it. I will die with you. Please wake up for myself. Hearing this Lakshmi show some signs of recovery. Now she start getting better but it take her a month to recover fully. Nows Its rishi birthday and her last in the house. Rishi planned to propose her today on his birthday on the other hand Lakshmi plan to leave this city today itself. In morning Lakshmi wished Rishi Happily. Rishi thought that Lakshmi will forgive him and start afresh with him. In evening The celebration begins Everyone celebrates the birthday happily amd cut the cake. After cake cutting Rishi search for Lakshmi everywhere but didn't found her. He found a letter of her in which she mentioned she is leaving this city and will start afresh and hope that they never meet again. Congrats him and Malishka for their new and happy journey. Rishi gwt heartbroken. He searched for her a lot but didn't found her. After a month, he was talking to Lakshmi photo with red eyes I know I have done a crime but how can you leave me like this. I am still searching for you and I will continue to search for you. He cries hugging her photo. On the other hand Lakshmi was working in the dhabha she thought I still love you rishi and will always do but I know till now you have married to Malishka I hope now you will be happy. She cries uncontrollably.

My pov.

Both are missing each other and need each other. Both are heart broken for each other.

I don't know whether you guys will like it or not but please give your valuable opinions to me.

Thank you for reading.