Adiya SS: Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 7 on Pg 55, 29/01/19 - Page 38

Originally posted by: kennashreign

I enjoyed reading this update. The tenderness and affection of Aliya towards Aditya is heartwarming. Continue soon

Originally posted by: sezo

Thanks for pm as always

I'm at loss for words that was a Amazing chapter.

It feels like been a long time but was definatley worth the wait

Plz do update sooner.

Originally posted by: jenshadfan1

Mandyyy finally found your story! Will read it and give my comments on it InshaAllah! 😃

Originally posted by: jenshadfan1

Beautiful start. So Adi, Zoya and Pooja are childhood friends so were their mothers. Harshvardan betrayed Anjana, she committed suicide and then Harsh deserted them. Poor Adi had to bear so much in such age. Both the Hooda's brother had lost their parents simulataneously. Harshvardan didnt even care about his children. Selfish man!

So zoya seems to be a girl who lives in fantacy and she loves Adi. Pooja also loves Adi but she knows she has not a tiny bit chance over Adi.

Woah I thought Aliya would be Arnoor's daughter but she turned out be Adiya's daughter. It meant Adiya got married. Seems like Zoya left Adi and he again has to face the same scenario as her mother had once gone through. Poor Aliya has the same fate as her father! Her parents didnt care about her between their fights that their actions will effect their child. But the big thing is why Adiya got seperated? What would be the reason that zoya had to leave his love amd her child. There would be a very serious and biggest reason behind it Im sure. Okay will read further and comment on it.

And yeah mandy you write beautifully.

Originally posted by: jenshadfan1

Mandy you made me cry yr!! Beautiful chapter. The way you potrayed every character's emotions are beautiful! So Adi confessed his love to zoya! I love their scenes! He proposed her wowww! All the things are going so good so what would have happened?

Arjun's words were bitter but this reality check was needed. Why he is punishing Aliya for the sins of zoya! This is not fair! Aliya is truly an Adiya's child. So loving and so giving. Loved thsi chapter so much. And finally Arjun's reality check put some sense in Adi's head and he ate the cake! Beautiful.scene it is! How much Adi shows that he doesnt care but deep down inside he cares! He truly cares! Where is Zoya? Where she has gone?

Originally posted by: jenshadfan1

Brilliant! Brilliant and just brilliant! Awesome writing Mandy! I have no words to describe your talent!

Noor is jealous😆 I find this scene so cute yrr!! And Adi has only one thing in his mind! Naughty boy😉 I love both the couples here! And that evening coffee to dinner to breakfast that thing cracked me up! 🤣 Amazing scene it was. And the most I loved was Adiya' s reaction. Both are adorable in this scene.

I think Roshnaq's attack is due to some big reason. May be its something related to Zoya. I hope she will discuss this with Noor. And I love Arjun in.this part. I have always wanted Arjun to be like this. The way you have shaped his character. So helpful, understands his brother and helps him to mend his broken relations with others.

Now coming to Aliya and Adi! You defined that scene so beautifully that it felt real to me. I felt Im watching it. Your words made ne feel all the emotions. The way Adi was so hesitant to even talk to her own daughter, you define his inner turmoil beautifully. But Im missing my Zoya! Where she us right now? Is she alive or not? And yeah nost importantly did she divorce Adi before leaving him? Had she chosed someone else over Adi? No no zoya cant do this! Well so many questions. Will read next part and comment on it.