Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up !

Jasleen Atwal

@jasleen77

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Posted: 7 years ago

My first reaction to this chapter was DRAAAMAAA! And I'm here for every second of it! Poor Arjun! This Zoya is going to run to the mountains after hearing that confession! Also, that Bigg Boss line, Truer words have never been spoken! I love this universe that you've created for our beloved characters. It gives insight on what could be if things were a little (or a lot) different. Your writing has me hooked, and I'm left craving for more after every chapter! So please continue doing the fantastic job that you are, and update soon! :)

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Sonali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

awesome update, that was well done

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Adiyalove

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Awesome update... But where is Aditya 😭

Update it very very very fast plzzz... Waiting for adi and zoya moment

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@Coffee_Chips

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Zoya gone tipsy & Arjun plans to enter at that instant darn! I was quite expecting he would confess love to her, with the mention of his name the first time, in the chapter 😆 Geez, Zoya has a problem of trynna forget Adi but seems like he has the same issue too & hope to read a dramatic chapter ahead..

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Awesome update

I am so waiting for their back story

Loving the story

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saira

@sezo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

thanks for pm.

that was amazing. you leave such a good cliff hanger. cant wait to read next part

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ikhtiyar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Arjun loves Zoya, omg 😲 this was a splendid update! Please update sooner!

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mrymrauf

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Posted: 7 years ago

#108

amazing update! but no adi! :(

continue soon!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#109

I'm more of a silent reader, because I fumble with reviews, so chances are you won't see me commenting much, but do know that I am going to follow this story, and enjoy it too :) You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait to read more :)

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harsha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: jasleen77
My first reaction to this chapter was DRAAAMAAA! And I'm here for every second of it! Poor Arjun! This Zoya is going to run to the mountains after hearing that confession! Also, that Bigg Boss line, Truer words have never been spoken! I love this universe that you've created for our beloved characters. It gives insight on what could be if things were a little (or a lot) different. Your writing has me hooked, and I'm left craving for more after every chapter! So please continue doing the fantastic job that you are, and update soon! :)

Thank you for your stellar review. 😊

I am glad you like my writing style. It's the best compliment a writer could receive.

I never intended to make this story dramatic. I had a very straightforward storyline in mind when I started writing Toxic but then I suddenly started getting these crazy ideas and see what it has become. 😆

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