Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: MissRight

hmmm Are you sure the Chapter is Over Zoya Siddiqui? ;)

it was, as usual, so beautiful!

Adi is possessive about her but wont admit that he loves her. I'm sure that even if they left the bed after the climax, they had each other on their minds till after breakfast. they both have a magician-complex. they think they can easily hide, and manipulate things and life, but a third person can see ALL through it.

Stubborn dumbasses.

khair, it will be interesting to see how this locked door leads to Adi's bed since he was so sure about it!


PS: kisser ki mystery solved thank god!!!!



I like the word 'magician complex'.Has a nice ring to it. šŸ˜†

Don't we all have magician complex and consider ourselves to be the master of the universe? They just have a little too much of it. šŸ˜†

Thank you for the awesome comment.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: AkshitaWrites.

Love love love this! I love how you incorporate witty conversations in the middle of steamy scenes. I wanna know more about their relationship and how they stayed in touch these 8 years. Most importantly, I wanna know what's gonna happen next especially since Zoya seems to wanna close Adi's chapter in her life! Update soon!



Thank you dear ! 😊

I am glad you love my writing style. That's one of the best compliment a writer can receive.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: harsha..



Thank you dear ! 😊

I am glad you love my writing style. That's one of the best compliment a writer can receive.


I know, right? Genuine compliments about writing make every writer happy! This reminds me I responded to your comment on my story! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Ikhtiyar

They have quite a toxic relationship.. šŸ¤” but looks very realistic

Update soon!


Unfortunately, toxic relationships are more common than they seem. You should know when it is worth saving and when it's better to just let it go.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: SewwiVB

Adi is a hot mess sass šŸ˜Žā˜¢ļø The kind of sarcastic comments he shoots at Zo are impeccable. Poor stud LMAO He fell face flat when Zoya showed his place in her life. But yeah, this isn't that ending of a chapter of Aditya in her life, just a new beginning isn't it? šŸ˜‰

Pm the nxt..




I think I had achieved my goal if you feel that both of them are sarcastic. šŸ˜†

I am all for girl power. So my Zoya can never be lame and boring.šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 7 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sezo

Fab. Can't wait to find out how they will get back together. Will he get her a job working for him. Can't wait to read how you continue it. Plz pm when you next update.

Thanks



Thank you for the encouragement. 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: harsha..




I think I had achieved my goal if you feel that both of them are sarcastic. šŸ˜†

I am all for girl power. So my Zoya can never be lame and boring.šŸ˜‰

You are already added to my Buddy List. Let me know if you are not receiving pms.


Ah no.. LOL What I meant was when you write the nxt part, pm me. We are in each others buddy list, ik that šŸ˜† Zoya is head strong & that attitude is what's missing in the original too 🤪
If you write more stories on them, don't forget to pm me. Will tell ya my views šŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Love with this story... Please please update fast plzzzšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
I love it he wants her desires her yet he still does not understand he loves her or is it he himself does not understand what he feels .
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: SewwiVB


Ah no.. LOL What I meant was when you write the nxt part, pm me. We are in each others buddy list, ik that šŸ˜† Zoya is head strong & that attitude is what's missing in the original too 🤪
If you write more stories on them, don't forget to pm me. Will tell ya my views šŸ˜†



Got it. šŸ˜†

Confusion, confusion !!

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