Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 13

Originally posted by: jasleen77

Yet another amazing update! AdiYa's equation in this story is truly amazing, with Adi being the suave lawyer who doesn't give a damn about consequences so long as his motives are served, and Zoya as the girl with a plan, who knows what she wants in life, and isn't afraid to serve up the truth, or to confront anyone to ensure that she gets ahead in life. I love this constant battle between Zoya and Adi, even in the moments when they're not in the same room. And poor Arjun! I honestly thought that Zoya would be running for the hills after his confession, but you decided to make her stronger by having her own up to how she felt, and I love the fact that instead of having him as the jealous ass who'll do anything to attain her affections, you made Arjun sweet and understanding about everything! And coming to Zoya's promotion, I love how she already knows that she's not going to pass this opportunity up just because a few heads may turn. Sure, she's going to give Adi hell for it, but they both know that she's going to take up the offer, which is amazing! I loved the story so far, and can't wait to see how it progresses further, especially with AdiYa now working together! :)

Originally posted by: SewwiVB

Aditya was much sass & yep I could just see him through your story, just like a mirror image. He looked perfect with all the handsomeness he showered himself with 😆 Drop dead gorg ❤️ The witty Zoya is what I like in your story. She gives a darn to the world & specifically adi when it comes to taking her decisions. How she handled the situation with Arjun & her no nonsense attitude towards Ramona were solid.

Just waiting to see the impact Adi had regarding the tight slap..

Originally posted by: harsha..

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Your quote 'all the handsomeness he showered himself with ' made me snort and my co-worker was like 'Are u insane ' 😆

LMAO sorry abt that Harsha, hope many people didn't notice you except one or two 🤣 Had to exaggerate that dude in your story just with that exaggerated line 😆😆

I took the words literally - Adi is showering with handsomeness. I am weird. Ignore please. 😆

The slap is going to direct the whole next update. 😉

Originally posted by: AisiDeewangi

Awesome update...loved it

Originally posted by: MissRight

I so always wait for the updates to this story...its so beautifully written... #love