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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

Chptr 34

Alisha is such a sweetheart

The friendship band thing was too cute when she said wada karo jab tak us ki bahoon mai nahi ao gay isse utaro gay nahi. . .👍🏼

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manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Loved the updates, aliya is getting stronger and im glad everyone is there for her even that altaf lol there is no blame game. So aliya got a clue and now the made a plan to find zain but seriously where is he lol he better be ok . Cant wait to read hw aliya rescues him in her ne get up lol waitning for the next chapter

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chptr 35

The whole chapter every single word was outstanding👏👏👏

Aaj kuch cheeze bhool nahi rahe ho...referring to his rose and I love you Da ...his daily routine..he didn't show her his smile...and turned back...

Ab zaroorat nahi hai..Gulab ...roz ..kachre mai hi fekti ho...so aaj maine wahi rakha hai..she looked down,

Apne tent ke bahar dekh lena ...dustbin mai rakha hai ...uski jagah wahi hai ...haqeekat wahi hai ...words that pinched her raw pulse ...one bite at a time

..aur jaha tak kuch bolne ka saval hai ...aaj nahi ...

aaj meri sazaa nahi dogi na tum, birthday hai na...isliye mujhe choot di na...subhah se kuch bhi nahi bola...nafrat nahi ki ...

Par mujhe toh adad hai...yu kaho ab toh lat lag gayi,

jab tak koi jurmana bhugat na lu ...neend nahi aati ...

toh maine hi aaj khud koh sazaa di...aaj nahi kahunga ...tumse ...

aaj who baat is chote se dil mai hi rahegi ...

he put his closed fist on his chest

bechain hai ..machlega bhi ...par shanth ho jayega ...nahi aayega tumhe tang karne ...aaj ka jurmana iska ..theek hai ..

Tears were brimming from my eyes profusely😭

Cake,gift,Zain fasting for Aaliya fireflies everything was adorable I was visualizing the whole scenario.

The line written in the letter when he said:Tumhara ...aur sirf tumhara shauhar

Zain❤️

And last but not the least the conversation between ZAYA:

Kyu rahe bhooke ...subhah se sehri bhi nahi ki na ...tabhi chai, lunch, dinner mai kuch nahi kha rahe the ...she was crying now

as he smiled ...ab adaat ho gayi hai ...

agar khuda mere itni si bhook se meri zindagi bhar ki bhuk mitaye ga ...toh kuch bhi kar lu ...

choo sakta hu ....

the words plunged her from the cliff ...how will he survive after 5 days ...she nodded

He wiped her tears ..aaj nahi ...aaj tumhara janamdin hai ...mere liye bahut khaas ...he recited the dua and blew on her face

When she gave the cake he held her hand ...taking her second hand on his heart ...

Sirf tumhara hai...sirf timhara ...isse dhadkana sirf tumne sikhaya ...

Jee chahe kitna bhi todo ...par isse tanha mat chodna ...ruk jaat hai tumhare bina ...

She fed him the cake as she smiled ...the fire flies still drizzled their spark as they sat close to each other ...looking at the dark sky ...the scattered stars ...and the faint moonlight ...❤️❤️❤️❤️

I have no words to praise these lines

May God bless you

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deepika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

Amazing updates...
loved it..
aaliya is gng to search her kitkit...
hope she will find her soon...

Yeah...zain's princess is back..
aaliya's convo wid rehman was very emotional...r
Thnx for d pm..
Cont soon...

Edited by Deepika_Zaya - 10 years ago

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#715

Chptr 36

Aaliya's own way to protect him her care their selfless always make my eyes wet

She wanted to share the blanket with him ...but wasn't she giving him more pain ...on Saturday when she would walk away ...he would be heartbroken...she decided not to share it...

And the line when Zain said:

Da..kya mai zindagi bhar aise hi rahunga ...kya tum mujhe kabhi pyaar nahi karogi...kabhi apni marzi se nahi chuogi ...kabhi pyaar se nahi dekhogi

Oh My it was like someone is punching my heart hard😭

SIM You have stolen my heart again here:

Har tarre ke saath ek ankahi noor simti hai ..mai bhi wahi hu ...

tum bhalle mujhe mehsoos na karo...mai har lamha tumhe apni bahon ki hifazat mai rakhunga ..

mera ...kareeb hona na hona ...ab koi mayne nahi rakhta hai...shayd isse pyaar kehte hai❤️

A new twist in story hopefull my ZAYA will be safe and sound

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Riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#716

Mind blowing SIm!

Okay, i know, I just did not give a proper reply to your previous chapter, but i was dazed... I was just feeling so numb after reading it that I was shocked about how I could manage to read the whole chapter...

I was definitely in a daze, and i would like to call it your daze...

I was amazed at how much effect mere words could have on me, my whole heart...

Oh God, I just can't say anything Sim!!!

Aaliya, hopefully she is perfectly fine now...

But reading about her seeing Zain's pain was something that took me again over there...

Like I was supposed to know it, right? you had already written this earlier...

But then the feeling intensified knowing that it was Aaliya who was getting to know all this...

I literally saw this from her eyes...

And THAT took my breath away...

And obviously now, Aaliya's search is on...

hoping that she finds Zain soon...

But i personally wish that Zain just doesn't forgive her so soon... like its her chance now to repent for what she did to him... not like the sorry thing... But repent in the sense seeing Zain in deep shit and then repenting for all she has done to him... Okay, maybe I am not making any sense right now, I just can't explain properly hats going on in my heart...

And finally...

KitKit ...tayaar rehna ...tumhari Malika E Zain ...aa rahi hai ..tumhari Da ...tumahre paas .....

this line got me... Smiling again!

Love you SIM!!!!!!

Please continue soon...

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#717

U all make me rush home n upload right now, had I not been in the lab wud hve dashed off right now
Love u all
Sim

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#718

CHAPTER 32

"Da ..mai superman hu...aise choti kharoch koh toh fook marke theek kar sakta hu ..par accha laga ..tumne poocha ...soyi nahi na raat bhar ..."

This is what i felt after readin this chapter..this is what sums up Zain's condition..A broken heart is the worst...

broken heart is like broken ribs(and you'll know how it feels to have broken ribs)..you can't see them..but they hurt like hell every time you try to breathe...

You know when you're broken..every single moment is a living inferno of fear and anguish...it licks your skin like a flame..Aaliya is trying hard to cope with the newfound discovery..her realization that the venom of her hatred was beyond her control..that he would..infact no one would be able to cure her..and it would eventualy destroy him..the little bit of him that was still grovelling in the sand and gasping for breath...

This chapter spoke of the unsaid words..of realisations..and pain of forboding separation..helplessness of a someone who has come to love her as a daughter and his apprehensions that the man who was just the embers of a fire that once used to burn bright would turn into ashes...

Love

Ann

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#719

Chptr 37

Oh girl what have you done to me i'm crying bitterly at this moment

though I liked the humorous one liners of Zain in the start of the chapter but after reading the whole I'm not able to mention those bcz the pain is immense don't know what to say

I was actually feeling frightened when Zain was describing the situation of rehabilitation center

Although I'm unable to pick one or two lines bcz the whole chapter was tremendous but these lines have done something to my heart

Haat kaape nahi tumhare mere naam waha likhte waqt ...mai 25 din se tumhare darvaze ke bahar tadap rah ahu ...taras rah ahu ...aur tumne mera naam lika waha ...jisse tum kabhi nahi milna chahti ...

Zindagibhar ki sazaa ...mujhe jeete ji ghot gayi aaj tum...

bas bhar diya form ...saup dogi apne aapkoh aise rehabilitation center mai ...poor zindagi ek band kamre mai guzaran chahti ho ...taaki mujhe sazaa mile hai na ...he clapped ...Wah Aaliya ..isse kehte hai asli pyaar ...jab tumne mujhe zallil kiya ...ya who scale se maara tab bhi aisa mehsoos nahi hua ..joh aaj ho raha hai ...mai tumhare zindagi koh is tarah se dekhne ka nazariya ban gaya hu ...tumhari sazaa hu mai....sharam aati hai mujhe ab yeh soch kar bhi ..ki maine shayad apni koi bhi sazaa theek se nahi kati ...tab bhi tumhara dard woh ka woh hai ...nahi sukun de paya thumhe

mat karo aisa ...khuda ke vaaste ...Har sazaa manjoor hai ...par yeh nahi ...Tumhe mujhe vada karna hoga ...tum waha nahi jaoge ...as he sat there folding his hands again ...

Your writing skills are Blessing of God on you SIM what else I can say👏

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#720

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
CHAPTER 32
"Da ..mai superman hu...aise choti kharoch koh toh fook marke theek kar sakta hu ..par accha laga ..tumne poocha ...soyi nahi na raat bhar ..."

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<div>This is what i felt after readin this chapter..this is what sums up Zain's condition..A broken heart is the worst...
broken heart is like broken ribs(and you'll know how it feels to have broken ribs)..you can't see them..but they hurt like hell every time you try to breathe...
You know when you're broken..every single moment is a living inferno of fear and anguish...it licks your skin like a flame..Aaliya is trying hard to cope with the newfound discovery..her realization that the venom of her hatred was beyond her control..that he would..infact no one would be able to cure her..and it would eventualy destroy him..the little bit of him that was still grovelling in the sand and gasping for breath...
This chapter spoke of the unsaid words..of realisations..and pain of forboding separation..helplessness of a someone who has come to love her as a daughter and his apprehensions that the man who was just the embers of a fire that once used to burn bright would turn into ashes...

Love
Ann