FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#721

Kya hua wish nah karoge ...

Jab qabool hi nahi karogi..toh wish karke fayada hai kya ...mujhe pata hai tumhe ghussa ayeega ...tumhara mood nahi kharab karna chahta

Try karo..ho sakta hai ...koi intezaar kar raha ho..she

Ummed mat jago ...khair ...khuda tumhe mefooz rakhe ...har buri nazar aur chhre se pare ...sukoon de ..

His silence spoke a thousand words in the trembling darkness of the night...the only regret was that she never heard them..never heard the sound of his heart breaking every time she metted out the same silence to him..every time he looked for that other half of him,floundering like a man on fire..drowing in the sludes of pain...and in that process losing him in a way..in that very silence...

Spiteful words can hurt your feelings..but SILENCE just breaks your heart...

"Kisiko Kya Bataye Ki Ye Saza Kya Hai,
Is Bechain Khamoshi Ki Wajah Kya Hai,
Har Koi Chod Jata Hai Tanha Hume,
Aur Hum Smajh Ni Pate Hamari Khata Kya Hai."

love

Ann

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Chptr 37
Oh girl what have you done to me i'm crying bitterly at this moment
though I liked the humorous one liners of Zain in the start of the chapter but after reading the whole I'm not able to mention those bcz the pain is immense don't know what to say
I was actually feeling frightened when Zain was describing the situation of rehabilitation center
Although I'm unable to pick one or two lines bcz the whole chapter was tremendous but these lines have done something to my heart
Haat kaape nahi tumhare mere naam waha likhte waqt ...mai 25 din se tumhare darvaze ke bahar tadap rah ahu ...taras rah ahu ...aur tumne mera naam lika waha ...jisse tum kabhi nahi milna chahti ...
Zindagibhar ki sazaa ...mujhe jeete ji ghot gayi aaj tum...
bas bhar diya form ...saup dogi apne aapkoh aise rehabilitation center mai ...poor zindagi ek band kamre mai guzaran chahti ho ...taaki mujhe sazaa mile hai na...he clapped ...Wah Aaliya ..isse kehte hai asli pyaar ...jab tumne mujhe zallil kiya ...ya who scale se maara tab bhi aisa mehsoos nahi hua ..joh aaj ho raha hai ...mai tumhare zindagi koh is tarah se dekhne ka nazariya ban gaya hu ...tumhari sazaa hu mai....sharam aati hai mujhe ab yeh soch kar bhi ..ki maine shayad apni koi bhi sazaa theek se nahi kati ...tab bhi tumhara dard woh ka woh hai ...nahi sukun de paya thumhe
mat karo aisa ...khuda ke vaaste ...Har sazaa manjoor hai ...par yeh nahi ...Tumhe mujhe vada karna hoga ...tum waha nahi jaoge ...as he sat there folding his hands again ...
Your writing skills are Blessing of God on you SIM what else I can say👏

Kiran
Did I tell you " I love you "
Sim

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER 34

In the name of friendship..unsaid words and feelings...and once again..Sim you defined the bond between Aalisha and Zain..and all that I want to say is..

I don't need words to express,

I don't need tears to shed

I don't need to ask for a smile

or a hand to hold me

All I need is to be your friend forever...

Love

Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER 35

Kise poochu..
Hai aisa kyu?
Bejubaan saa ye jahaan hai

Khushi ke pal
Kahaan dhoondu?
Benishaan sa waqt bhi yahaan hai

Jaane kitne labon pe gile hain
Zindagi se kayi faasle hain

"Par mujhe toh adad hai...yu kaho ab toh lat lag gayi,

jab tak koi jurmana bhugat na lu ...neend nahi aati ...

toh maine hi aaj khud koh sazaa di...aaj nahi kahunga ...tumse ...

aaj who baat is chote se dil mai hi rahegi ...

he put his closed fist on his chest

bechain hai ..machlega bhi ...par shanth ho jayega ...nahi aayega tumhe tang karne ...aaj ka jurmana iska ..theek hai ."

Paseejte hai sapne kyun aankhon mein
Lakeere jab chhoote inn haathon se yun bewajah

"Rhea ...Aaliya se kehna ...aaj usse bahut miss kiya ...theek hai ..bye

She stepped back to her tent and got under the blanket sobbing ...walking away will be painful ...but she had to ..he deserved peace ..around her there was only hurt "

Jo bheji thi dua
Woh jaake aasmaan se yun takra gayi
Ki aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa

"Some love stories ...are meant to be tested theirs was one ...and they both were unaware of the big game that destiny was about to play with them ...

he smiled looking at her ..and she smiled at him...a respite for one day ...as the brain and heart mellowed down in the shadows of love ..hate and pain waited away ...just not today ..as this was their day ..."

Ek mudat se tarsa hu iss ehssas ke liye ..

.rooh bhi ab jism se bahar khadi hai tere pyaar paane ke liye ...

Saanson ne kahaan rukh mod liya
Koi raah nazar mein naa aaye
Dhadkan ne kahaan dil chhod diya
Kahaan chhode in jismon ne saaye

Yehi baar baar sochta hoon tanha main yahaan
Mere saath-saath chal raha hai yaadon ka dhuaan

Jo bheji thi duaa
Woh jaake aasmaan se yun takra gayi
Ki aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#725

CHAPTER 6

You know that its going to kill you..the apin being worse than the feeling of being stabbed...you know that he's going to cry..you know that he won't be able to accept your loss once again.maybe this time he won't even live through it..yet you're doing it...because you think that you're more posionous than your absence..more lethal to him he can understand..its always you..you are the one taking the decision..because you want him safe..you want what is best for him..but do you really..?

You know what is best for him...its that flickering hope which is slowly dying a painful death along with its pocessor ...its the fact that your hatred is pushing him into that darkness from where he won't be able to return..Zain is someone who can destroy himslef to heal you..save him before its too late..save yourself before its too late.because without Zain there's no Aaliya ..just the way without Aaliya there's no Zain...

That is what was going on in my mind..only to be disturbed by the sudden arrival of the terrorists...

It was sad..it was thrilling..but just like those sadistic cv's you had to leave us with a cliffhanger ;P

Sim,god's every single creation i special and then there are some who are that extra bit special..you're that rare gem..loved it!

Love

Ann

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Kiran
Did I tell you " I love you "
Sim

I love you too dear😊

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#727

Chptr 38

Restlessness of Aaliya about never seeing the love of her life again or I should say love hate every emotion of her life

And when she said:Chala gaya na who ...mujhe bola bhi nahi ...mujhe usse akhri bar milna tha ...dad please usse phone kijiye ...mujhe uski avaaz sunni hai ...please😭

And the line at the end

Zain ne jhoot bola ...jhooth bola mujhse ...usne sauda kiya ...apni jaan ka sauda ...meri hifazzat ke liye ...ya Allah ...mai kaha dhoondungi usse

Amazing SIM

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chptr 39

mera khuda toh waha Jaipur mai baitha hai ...khana toh khaya hoga na usne ...davai li hogi na ...jyada ro toh nahi rahi hogi na ...bahut yaad aa rahi uski ...mujhe uski avaaz sunni hai ...

These lines pinhed my heart and I was sobbing😭

To which extent his love can go I always wonder and wonder

Meri hai ...agar dard bhi degi toh bhi khuski khushi seh lunga ...par rahunga uske paas hi ...mujhe pata hai ...bahut ziddi hai ...

shayad bhaut ghussa karegi ...par mai tayar hu ...yaha se toh behtaar hai ...uske samne akela rahu ...tadpunga toh bhi uske haton se ...tabh sukun milega

aaj meri vajah se uski yeh halat hai ...nahi maaf karunga aapne aapkoh ...jab tak uski sazaa nahi bhugat lu ..tab tak

And the flash back from which Aaliya was going through the way she was biting fingers litteraly I'm out of words

And the lady Suraiya how much patience she have I mean the life of her beloved son has been devastated so badly in front of her eyes hats off to her courage you have done justice with every single character of the story👏

Edited by zaya.fatima - 10 years ago

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chptr 40

Dad...usse ghutan hui hogi na ...kitna akela mehsoos hota hoga na

The realization about her behaviour and his feelings described in this line was amazing

And The conversation between Rehman and Aaliya was twisting my heart especially this part

Aaliya ...tumhe theek karte karte ...humara Zain kahi kho gaya ...tumhare paas bimaari ka karan hai ...uske paas toh who bhi nahi ...Aaliya ...who theek nahi hai ...

Dad ...mai nahi karti nafrat usse ..yehi baat batana chahti hu usse ...aap nahi jaante pehle yeh mehsoos karna ki aapka dimaag ab aake bas mai nahi ...aur phir aapne pyaar koh apne haato aise dard dena ...

Dad...Zain ...ne apna pyaar sabit kiya ...ab meri baari ...mai usse dhoondh nikalungi...yaha aise nahi baith sakthi ...please dad ...mujhe jaane dijiye...

I think I'm going to be a heart patient soon for sure because this twisting of heart game is going on and on😆

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chptr 41

How can he leave her alone ...how dare he endanger his life for her sake...questions ...almost rhetorical ones that never seeked any answers were playing again and again loudly...

Her way of care with a mixture of anger was adorable and innocent😊

So, Aaliya is going to find Zain waiting for what will happen next

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