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Chapter 37
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Edited by KitkitMkb - 10 years ago
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Dard , i felt it in their souls , towering them like their own shadow , this update really hurt me , because i could visualise every scene , really i don't think i can do a review on this because the update said it all it sum ed up every hardships he went though , each thorns to reach to her , being so close to his destination yet so far ...
I wish Zain Abdullah existed in real !
This is one of the best one and the most painful update .

I can't say anymore , I just can't .

But i still Hope !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow didnt expect that. Was hoping for some action and daring rescue but this was good too lol Aliya is safe but zain no where to be found. glad that alliyas family and suri n fahad r there and also glad aliya knows the full extent of what zain went through after she left. The realization of aliya was ver important maybe zain leaving is what was needed but where is he is he ok. Great update and cant wait till aliya finds her zain.
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Jab kho diya tujhe Pata chala mujhe...
Ke kitna dard diya mane aur kitna pyaar mila mujhe...
Ek gustakhi huvi hein kya maafi nahi milegi mujhe...
Iss bhari duniya mein kyun chor chalein akele mujhe...

Aaliya.
This chapter was - realisation and the cure to Aaliya. He went away she realised how and what he went through...25 days, he pleaded and begged for his 'Love' which was his own! Yet he begged...being Aaliya, this would probably be a moment I'd hate to see myself in the mirror...each love story has flaws...Aaliya'slove had flaws too...there was only one, but a big one! She didn't find out the past...and now the past has obstacled in her present...and if the present dosent pass the future won't arrive...

Hadnt I said...If she dosen't forgive him now she might loose him forever...at this point maybw she did!

I always have sided her, she went through alot, bared alot but today I say...No, maybe Zain saw much more then what she did...
Now is when her love will arise...now is when she'll probably face the littlest parts of Zain's pain...

He is a man of words and bringing him back is surely a challenge...I don't want to predict where he is...

Because I want to curiously read what's yet to come ahead Sim, which is in your hands...go on spin the wand and chant the lines...Show us the Magic of 'Love!'


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woh ...shyad bahut purani scale thi..varna nahi tooti ...itne zor se bhi nahi clalaya tha tumne
Awesome line SIM
And the last scene when Zain was eating and the way he offered Aaliya a bite ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
i love hw u defined d chapters truly amazing aaliya's anger jst flew away in front of zain's love I just loved it cont soon
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😆😆😆
I dont know when this story is ending ...I thought I will upload one chapter ...it has multiplied into two
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I was supposed to update one,but I ended up writing a new one.Many people got confused with my last update ..this might clear her current state of health...

Dedication: Hmmm...To the earthquake victims in Nepal, the images are so gruesome ...please donate ...even any kind of supplies will help them. A country that has been shaken off the roots ...4000 lives lost and several still trapped in the rumble. If each of us do our part , the country will survive ..mankind will survive...

So please ...donate

Revealing update followed by the twisty one ...

Love you all

SIM



Chapter40

Aaina...

As Aaliya woke up it was Saturday, 4 days since Zain was missing, the police had intensified the search operations but all family members had strictly warned Aaliya not to step out of the room.

She walked towards the balcony ..her heart ripped open ...to see his rolled bed ...the dried petals from her birthday night ...

Da...Miss kar rahi ho na ...kaha tak mat tadpao ..ab bhugto ...as she turned around there was no one ...she wiped her tears ..how would she convince everyone to let her go out ...she felt trapped ...he needed her and she was just made to sleep the whole day ...as her energy was coming back, her anxiety was increasing ...

Who knows how badly he was being treated ...what if they have harmed him ...the images of the streaked red mark on his back now clouded in her eyes ...he had been beaten that night ...and he made a deal, why did he lie to her ...

they could have faced everything together ...

Together...when were they together ...

Not since they had divorced and the three months she had spent with him post her memory loss...she closed her eyes...as she again saw his face ...

Da...Huggie chaiye ...please ....their talks in Goa ...his gentle pleading ...Da ...thoda share karogi ...bhook lagi hai ...his love seeped in all the cervices of her heart

Zain ...she took his name as a sudden feeling that he was in pain ...a lot of pain ...she could hear his scream ...as she cried again ...and turned back to see Rehman ...

Aaliya ...beta ...theek ho...as he saw her sobbing again ...

She went and hugged him ...it was strange the love she had for her parents had been totally overcasted for Rehman now, that's the reason he was the only one who was able to pacify her questions...

Dad..Zain theek toh hoga na ..pata hai uss raat unhone usse mara hoga ...

pata nahi kaha hai ...kis haal mai hai who ...Dad...meri sanse ruki hai ...mujhe ghutan ho rahi hai is kamre mai ...

Aaliya ...davai ...as she looked at the tablets that Zain used to get for her everyday ...

She took it and starred back, Dad ...aap sab jaante the na ...aapko usse mere paas nahi aane dena chaiye tha...maine uske saath kitna bura behave kiya ...kitni baate sunaiye ...kitna tarasaya ...

Har roz ...mere kamre ke bahar khada hota tha ...har roz dad ...bina bhulle ...bina ruke ...Dad ...yeh mujhse kaisa khatta ho gayi...

Aaliya ..woh zidd par adda tha ..mai kya karta ...usse tumhe theek karna tha ...

Dad...uske choth khane se mai kaise theek ho sakti hu...

Aaliya ...yeh bhi ek theraphy hai ...jaha mariz koh kabhi kabhi sirf apni beete kal ke bure hadse yaad hote hai, koi insaan, koi cheez joh aapko is kadar ghussa aur dard dete hai ki aap be kabu ho jaate hai ...tumhare case mai who hadsaa talakh tha ...who insaan Zain ...

Yaha aane se pehle ...usne bahut kuch saha tha ...as he looked away ...aur uske iss faisle se hum koi khush nahi the ...par jiase usne khud se vaada kiya tha ...

Aaliya ...theraphy joh kai saal tak tumhe nahi de paati...Zain ke zidd ne kar diya ...

Dad...aapka matlab hai mai theek ho chuki hu...

Nahi beta ...tum zindagibhar ab theek nahi ho sakti ...

She looked up scared ...

Beta ...joh ghussa, nafrat tumhe uss hadse aur insaan se hua tha ...sirf who kam ho gaya hai..aur who bhi usike karan...

yaha mariz koh uski marzi karne dete hai ...bolne dete hai ...kai log toh maar bhi khate hai ..sirf isliye ki who jisko pyaar karte hai ...who isse bahar nikal paaye...

Sunne mai ut patang zarror hai...par kai mansik bimariyon mai aise theraphy use hoti hai ...

Mujhe pata hai ...uska who kabrasthan mai kaam karna...bhare jagah tumne uska tamasha udhana ...aur who Driver wali baat ...sab kuch Aaliya ...tumhare dimaag ne eke k badla liya ...apne zakhmao ka ...

Par Dad ...badla nahi chahti mai ...yeh mera wajood nahi hai ...maine zindagi mai kabhi kisi se ucchi avaaz tak baat nahi ki...toh usse dard kyu dungi...

Par tumne diya ...aur usse dard mai dekhkar pehle bhalle tumhe dard nahi hua ...par dheere dheere tum toooti Aaliya ...

Zain ne mujhe bataya tha ...jis din maine usse tumhare rehab ki baat batyi thi ..woh aakrhi zakhm ...usne tumhe badla...usme thodi ummed bandhi thi

Theek se socho...kya uske baad tumhe uske taraf utni nafrat mehsoos hui ...

She looked back ...and yes he was right she had mellowed down her hatred the venom ...maybe the physical hurt had changed her, his knees and those hands ..the wait ...

her last hurt ...subtle but she had not hated him after that ...healed him, fed him, wanted to spend her birthday with him ...spent the night with him ...yes she had no venom left ...

Dad...usse ghutan hui hogi na ...kitna akela mehsoos hota hoga na ...

Haa beta ...dard mai tha ...jab tumne usse bhukhar mai akela choda...usse jalaya ...usse bhooka rakha ...ya usse I hate you kaha ...har baar ek kadi toote ussme...

Dr.Das...se baat karvai thi maine ...aur unhe darr tha ki Zain khud koh andhere mai jhok raha hai ...unhone toh uski davai bhi shuru karvai thi, as she recollected she had seen him collecting medicines and he had as usual hidden from her

Dr.Das ne mujhe usse roz baat karne koh kaha tha ...tab kahi jaakar usne mujhe apni dil ki baatein batye hai ...

Aaliya ...tumhe theek karte karte ...humara Zain kahi kho gaya ...tumhare paas bimaari ka karan hai ...uske paas toh who bhi nahi ...Aaliya ...who theek nahi hai ...

Dad ...mai nahi karti nafrat usse ..yehi baat batana chahti hu usse ...aap nahi jaante pehle yeh mehsoos karna ki aapka dimaag ab aake bas mai nahi ...aur phir aapne pyaar koh apne haato aise dard dena ...

Dad...Zain ...ne apna pyaar sabit kiya ...ab meri baari ...mai usse dhoondh nikalungi...yaha aise nahi baith sakthi ...please dad ...mujhe jaane dijiye...

Aaliya ...yeh galti humne Zain ke saath ki ...ab tumhe nah kho sakte ...Aalisha aa rahi hai ...uske saath aaram karo as Rehman walked out ...

Aaliya kept quietly on the bed ...remembering his words ...trapped ...and wanting to get out was the worlds worst feeling ...

Aaina dikh gaya mujhe aaj tere pyaar ka ...

Aks ghula tha jisme tere intezaar ka...

SIM

Pre-cap: The search ...will Aaliya get out of the house arrest she is in



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Chapter 41

Talash...

Sunday Morning

Aaliya had just laid still, for the next 24 hrs she could just see people around her moving. There was a hustle everywhere, but for Aaliya her heart was filed with an uneasy silence.

It was full 5 days ...and she had no news about him ..every time the police came her heart sank ...the anger rose ..more because of her care now ...

How can he leave her alone ...how dare he endanger his life for her sake...questions ...almost rhetorical ones that never seeked any answers were playing again and again loudly...

Her eyes finally set on Zaroon who was standing near her bed, holding a rose. Aaliya got up and wiped away the tears that had crawled down her eyes...

Aree Zaroon, tum yaha ...she tried to fake a smile ...a difficult one ...

Rhea Mam aap kaise hai, he asked. His tiny voice filled with a concern of an adult. Theek hoon she smiled...and looked up to see Altaf ...

Rhea ...as Altaf spoke

Aaliya looked up cold...Aaliya ..mera naam Aaliya hai ...Altaf ...

He looked down ...mujhe usse thank you bolna tha ...mere bhai ki jaan bacchy usne...uska ehsaan zindagi bhar nahi utaar paunga ...bahut bhaduri se lada who unse ...joh mai bhi nahi kar paya us din ...remembering how all of them were trapped in the auditorium room at gun point ..

Zain sir kaha hai...Zaroon asked

Aaliya was at a loss of words ...Zain ...who bhi aa jayenge ...she lied ...looking away towards the window and hiding away the sadness.

Aaliya ...Zain koh hum sab dhoonde ge ...mai jaa raha hoo...poore school mai search teams bani hai ...

Mai Aalisha Rizwan hum sab jaa rahe hai ...tum apna khyal rakhna ...usse kuch nahi hone denge ...as he walked out ...Aaliya was crying

When Zaroon came and held her hand ...

Rhea miss ...Zain sir koh meri wajah se us din aapne sazza di thi na ...maine unke liye sorry card banaya hai ...aap de degi ...please ...as she held his card ...she cried bitterly

Aur haa Miss Rhea... Yeh sir ne mere bag mei dala tha ... Saying that he showed her a phone ...

Aaliya looked back with shock and her hands shakily took the phone ...she switched it on to see the message ...a sms with an address and a code ...her heart leapt ...this was what they all had been searching for so long as she recollected the events what happened in the room ...

When she was reciting the dua, for the dead person ...Zain had searched for the phone and slipped in Zaroons backpack ...he knew all the time ...then why he didn't tell them ...they could have saved themselves ....

Holding the phone like a crazy women she jumped from her bed and rushed towards the door ...

Zaroon was all confused...what happened he had no clue ...as he ran behind her ...

Aaliya ran down ...almost falling from the stairs ...Looking at her the whole family stood up...

Aaliya kya hua...Suraiya asked concern...beta theek toh ho na...phirse koi bura sapna dekha...

Nahi Mami ...woh mil gaya ...woh phone mil gaya jise who log dhoondh rahe the ...ab hum Zain koh bacha sakte hai ...she almost screamed with happiness...

Everyone was stubbed ...Ya Allaha tera lakh lakh sukhra hai ...Suraiyas tears were falling uncontrollably...she hugged Aaliya tight...

Par sab toh Zain ki talash mai gaye hai ...chalo hum police station chalet hai ...mai aati hu tumhare saath as Rehmans phone rang ...the call from Police gave even more exciting news ...they had tracked where the people were hiding.

Rehman provided them the information of Aaliyas find...a plan was hatched...

Humein undercover kaam karna hoga ...hum kisi koh dhondte hai ...joh unki boli bolta ho ...shayad ek aur din lag jaaye ...as Aaliya shouted...

Dad...mai jaungi ...mujhe Marwadi aati hai ...

Par beta ...unhone tumhe dekha hai ...who pehchaan lenge ...hum dono ki jaan khatre main ahi daal sakte ...

Dad...mai apna chehra dhakh lungi...mai un sab koh jaanti hu...

Par Aaliya tumhari tabiyaat ...

Dad...Zain ki zindagi se jyada ...kuch mayne nahi rakhta ...aap please mujhe jaane dijiye ...nahi toh mai pagal ho jaungi...please ...

As Aaliya volunteered ...Suraiya Rehmaan Fahad everyone told her it could be dangerous ...but she didn't care...anything to get him back ...

Theek hai ...chalo police station .....

As she entered the police station and handed over the phone...the terrorist had a delivery on the address ..a nuclear one to be used for a bomb ...that could potentially used to spread more terror ...the parcel had reached the destination waiting to be picked up...now the police would raid and get it ...

School mai hostage lekar who yeh samman ki delivery lene wale the...shayad delivery der se hui ...aur hostage ka plan pehle ban gaya tha ...isliye who is phone koh paglon ki tarah dhoondh rahe the

Par Zain ka kya ...

Dekhiya Madam ...agar who unke paas hai toh humei savdhani barkani hogi ...

Agar humne raid maari toh shayad who usse maar dale...

Nahi mai jaungi waha ...aapko aaur kya pata laga hai unke add eke bare mei ...

As the plan hatched ...Aaliya Rehmaan Suraiya ...all nodded ...it was risky ...but she was willing to go ahead to fetch him back ...

7 excruciating hours later...Aaliya was sitting in a old white Maruti car ...riding on the Jaipur highway ...towards Delhi ...She looked in the rear-view mirror ...

As silently a police van was following her ...non -official regular cars ...

Aaliya gazed at the mirror ..the image surprised her too

A yellow ghagra(short lehnga) tied seductively on her waist ...the thread made as a loop ..to hide the weapon, her legs exposed for the first time, bare smooth skin ...as she still tried to pull it down ... the silver toe rings on the middle toes and silver anklets with attached bells made her feel uneasy...as her every moment was inducing music ...her anxiety was rising ...as the sweats beaded down the make-up...

The canary yellow kanchli(choli) with a big red Oodhni covering her head, all brightened with mirror work, her oodhni was held by a big forehead ornament ...a series of white ivory bangles , 10 on each arm...making her wonder how women actually carry such heavy jwellery

Every intrinsic detailing was done ...to avoid suspicion ...as Aaliya tried to adjust the big nose ring that was tightly clipped to her hair, the heavy earrings ...hair plaited and enhanced with artificial braids ..to give her a swoon when she would walk ...

Aaliya was sweating as the AC was on full blast ...the gulps were more tiring now as her neck adorned a unique styled necklace consisting of silver discs and a central square pendant and the heavy rajhsthani jwellery actually making her look down ...she would have no trouble just keeping her gaze down ...

Her heart within was racing ...she wiped off the sweat that was slowly forming on her forehead.

Will she be able to talk ...as the voice choked now ..the emotions overtaking her face ...as she pulled his nap out one last time ....KitKit ...tayaar rehna ...tumhari Malika E Zain ...aa rahi hai ..tumhari Da ...tumahre paas ......the tear trickled on his smiling face ...

Mudato baad ...aisa badla hai aapne aapko...

tujhe paane ki junnon mai ...aaj paaya hai khudkoh

Pre-cap: Goons and a Damsel ...the story ahead

Edited by Zainedil - 10 years ago
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Awesome chapter sim..👏👏
Very excited for the next chapter...
Thanks for the pm...
Continue soon..😊

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