zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazing
Finally they talked and said sorry
Percap looks scary
Thank for pm
Continue soon

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Nandini

@cupcaked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazing
Finally they talked and said sorry
Precap looks scary
Thank for pm
Continue soon

thank you...
yeah i totally agree with u...
wish this happens in the show as well...
it will be awesome...
yeah getting stuck in the snow is really scary in real life...
but on the other hand really romantic in the reel life...
ur welcome...
next part will be up by tomorrow..
thanks...😃

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MyshaAlvi007

@MyshaAlvi007

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

jst went through d prologue...havnt read d update yet
bt let me tell u one thing dat i'm already in luv wid d title of dis Ff...its freaking ossom
brilliant work...add me to ur fan list ;)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Res
Will edit it SOON...Pakka

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Just love the first part
That Bakbak
I so waana kill her
Tum hi maar do usse yaar :p
Love ZaYa Kitkit
Finally Zain said Sorry
Can't wait for this trip
So plz do continue soon
And yaah,thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

thank you so much yaar...
i wish i could kill her but agar maara toh story bigad jayegi...
bak-bak ko jhel lo...
par pkka bta deti hoon... end mei bobby aur mir khan jail jayenge...
so u dnt wrry...
u jst enjoy zaya...😆
thanks...😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: MyshaAlvi007
jst went through d prologue...havnt read d update yet
bt let me tell u one thing dat i'm already in luv wid d title of dis Ff...its freaking ossom
brilliant work...add me to ur fan list ;)

thank you soo much...
thinking of a title is sooo difficult sometimes...
but glad that you liked it...
read the update as well...
thanks...😃

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MyshaAlvi007

@MyshaAlvi007

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

i wish u were d creative head of BI
i mean it was suppa ossom,d way he said srry to her n ordered her to do d same...bt aliya will b aliya akdu mkb ;)
m luking 4ward 4 thier long drive to shimla...car me hi kahi ek dusre ko na maar de lol jokes apart ;)
bt dis bakbak ye marr kyu ni jaati huh...go get a life dude bs din bhar bechare mamu ko marne ka plan banao
plz update nxt jaldi se ;)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MyshaAlvi007
i wish u were d creative head of BI
i mean it was suppa ossom,d way he said srry to her n ordered her to do d same...bt aliya will b aliya akdu mkb ;)
m luking 4ward 4 thier long drive to shimla...car me hi kahi ek dusre ko na maar de lol jokes apart ;)
bt dis bakbak ye marr kyu ni jaati huh...go get a life dude bs din bhar bechare mamu ko marne ka plan banao
plz update nxt jaldi se ;)

thank you soo soo soo much...
i didnt knew u liked this ff so much...
just glad...
and don't worry i wont let the story concentrate on bak-bak...
she will be over soon...
u jst enjoy zaya...
keep commenting...
thanks...😃

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome start

One month in Shimla is more than enough for two hearts in love with each other to confess their love.

Looking forward to read the story.

Thanks for the pm.

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

HEY PEOPLE...
SO SORRY I KNOW I AM SUPER LATE...
BUT I WAS KINDA BUSY...
BUT HERE I AM WITH PART-2...
HOPE YOU LIKE IT...

PART-2
I DONT THINK I CAN LIVE WITH THIS

zain and aaliya were done with their packing and were right now in the room checking for last minute left behind things... aaliya was getting all panicked and cursing herself for not being able to get out of this mess... now she had to stay with her kitkit... for a while... although they had said sorry but that doesnt mean she isnt angry anymore... of course she is.. how could he think that she was playing with him...

#aaliya's pov#
yeh kitkit... mujhe nhi jaana iske saath... pta nhi iski prob kya hai... pehle toh itna sweet behave krta hai... aur kal jaise paglon ki tarah drink kr rha tha... yeh pta nhi konsi duniya mei rehta hai... pehle itna sweet phir uske baad itna rude... pta nhi prob hai kya... iske dimag ka checkup krana padega... pta nhi ki yeh mujhse pyaar krta hai bhi ki nhi... agar meine usse bta diya ki i love him... toh kahi yeh mujhe reject na krde... pta nhi isse kya lagega... mera saara ego jayega bhaad mei... and then if he says he loves me too... then he gets the upper hand in the relationship... i wont let this kitkit get the upper hand in the relationship... jab tak yeh confess nhi krta tab tk mei bhi confess nhi krungi... haan...
#pov ends here#

#zain's pov#
yeh mamu ki bhanji soch kya rhi hai... pta nhi mujhe bhi kal kya ho gya tha... meine isse pta nhi sharab ki halat mei kya kya bak diya hoga... mujhe khud yaad nhi hai... kahi meine isse divorce dene ke liye toh nhi kaha... puch leta hoon... nahi nahi... maaf kr hi diya hai na... doesnt matter anymore... par ab confess kese krun? yeh mamu ki bhanji ishare bhi nhi samajhti... ek second... par mei kyun confess krun... pyaar toh yeh bhi krti hai mujhse... yeh confess kre... agar meine confess kiya toh she gets the upper hand... mei iss mkb ko humare rishte mei upper hand nhi lene dunga... she will hv to confess first... agar isne mujhe iss trip mei confess na kiya toh mei samajh jaunga that she doesnt love me... aur agar kiya then i will say i love you too... no biggy in that... haan... thts right...
#pov ends here#

they both were lost in their thoughts... zain took a look at aaliya who was folding his pressed shirts and keeping them carefully in the suitcase... she had a straight face... no emotions... no nothing... zain got confused...
zain: umm... mkb...
aaliya: hmm?
zain: packing ho gyi?
aaliya: haan almost... andhar se brushes leke aana...
zain: wait ill make a kit for the bathroom accessories...
aaliya: yeah sure... i am almost done here...
after 30 minutes they both were done with the packing completely... nothing left behind... they were checking if every thing is present in the bag or not...
zain: umm... mamu ki bhanji?
aaliya: bolo...
zain: road trip ka idea dad ko kyun aaya hoga? socha?
aaliya: haan... mei bhi wohi soch rhi hoon... yeh road trip ka idea... weird...
zain: haan... chalo im going to sleep...
aaliya; okay gudnite...
zain: tum nhi so rhi?
aaliya: ya i am coming... just have to go the washroom...
zain: okay good night...
aaliya: ya good night...

NEXT MORNING @4 AM...
since it was a road trip they had to leave early from their house... which zain was probably not aware of... while aaliya came out of the bathroom she saw him sleeping peacefully... she walked up to him and called out his name loudly...
aaliya: zain!
no response...
aaliya: zain! (she said a lil louder)
no response again...
aaliya: ZAIN!! (she said at the highest voice she could get)
he woke up in alarm...
zain: haan.. kya hua?
aaliya: jaldi utho we have to leave...
zain: mamu ki bhanji its only 4... abhi kyun jaana hai?
aaliya: kyunki tumhe pta na ho toh hum hills mei jaa rhe hai... shimla is a hill station na... toh agar sunset se pehle pehle nhi poche na toh sunset ke baad driving is very dangerous... chalo ab utho...
zain: mujhe nhi jaana...
aaliya: zain chup chap utho..
aaliya grabbed him by his one arm and pulled him up... and to his surprise she actually lifted him up with one hand of hers.. maybe she is too powerful!
yeh mamu ki bhanji hai badi strong, he thought...
aaliya: chalo ab...
zain: sure... chalo...

IN THE CAR...
aaliya and zain had settled the stuff and were in the car... zain didnt want to sit in the passengers seat... next to the driver... so he sat next to aaliya... aaliya looked at him.. with eyes wide open...
zain: kya?
aaliya: aage bheto na...
zain: mei kyun bhetoon?
aaliya: theek hai mei hi bhet jaati hoon...
zain went near her...
zain: kyun mere saath bhetne se apne aap ko rok nhi paogi?
aaliya: what??? shut up!
aaliya sat back on her seat as she pushed him back...
aaliya: idiot! (she mummered)

and the driver started the car... they both looked out of the window... they were bored in a short time.. lets say 15 minutes... the journey was of 6 hours... means 5 hours and 45 minutes still left... what could they possibly do?

aaliya then looked at zain... who then looked at aaliya too...
zain: getting bored?
aaliya: you too?
they both nodded then laughed!
zain: toh baat hi kr lete hai...
aaliya: umm.. ya sure!
zain: accha toh sacchi sacchi baat btana... did you have a boyfriend in college?
aaliya: no... mei sacche pyaar mei believe krti thi... not in attractions...
zain: wah! kya baat hai...
aaliya: accha now its ur turn...
zain: bolo...
aaliya: umm.. mera yeh puchna ki did you have any girlfriend toh bilkul useless rahega...
zain laughed...
aaliya: toh tum btao ki tumhari total kitni girlfriends rhi hai?
zain: well... umm... its hard to count...
aaliya's eyes go wide...
zain: umm.. 30... no no... i think 40... no wait a sec i think 50...
aaliya: 50 girlfriends??
zain nodded proudly...
aaliya: well thats... umm... surprising i think!
then they talked and talked about everything... their college life... their life in london and bhopal... the stupidity of their friends... and then everything else...

2 HOURS LATER...
they had finished talking an hour ago... after all how much they could possibly talk of?
both were looking out of their respective windows... zain glanced at aaliya who was looking out of the window... the next thing he knew was that aaliya had fallen asleep on his shoulder... she looped her arms around his and then heaved quite a peaceful sigh... then fall asleep... zain took out a jacket that he had put on his right and then covered aaliya with it... she was sleeping peacefully while zain was staring at her... the fall asleep himself after some time...

TO BE CONTINUED...
HOPE YOU LIKED IT...
ITS TOO TOUGH TO WRITE RIGHT NOW...
ITS TOO HOT OUTSIDE AND SWEAT IS COMING IN MY HANDS...
PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
CRITCISATION IS MORE THAN WELCOME...
NEXT PART UP BY TOMORROW...
THANKS...😃