My crazy imagination-Short FF,pg 8 part 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
I read all four parts earlier Aryan, but I wasn't logged in so couldn't comment! You write so well and I love the bits of humor you add!

Cheeky monkey, hungry thirsty beast...I love D's nicknames for Amar 😆

continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Aryannnnn!! I didnt' know you were such a good writer yaar!!

It's so good, I love your dialogues the most, especially this cheeky monkey 😆 so cute.. seriously, it's really good, and dont finish it so soon please, I want to savour it for sometime!! 😳 Great work 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really cute Aryan, keep up the great work! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Thanku everyone 🤗 🤗 As I said I'm not very good at keeping FFs so thats why I'm gonna keep this short. And I have the time right NOW, might not have it later on.

Part 5

The following evening….

Arms folded across her chest, she paced up and down in her room worriedly. Amar could come from anywhere at any time, she thought. I have to be alert at all times, I cant let him win. If he wins then god knows what he'll make me do. Oh why did I have to say anything? Relax Divz! You just have to save yourself 3 times and you win. I already have a few plans in mind. Evil laugh. Hmm, I have to avoid him some how, if he can't find me then he can't do anything. Good idea! I'll hide for a while. She looked around, trying to find an appropriate place. She lay down on the floor and rolled under her bed. He'll never find me here, she thought proudly. "Aw, you found me", he whined. "What the….?", her mouth fell open. "Hello", he waved at her innocently with a bright smile. "Amar! What are you doing under my bed?", she demanded. "A better question to ask would be, what are you doing under your bed?". "As you said it's my bed, I can sleep on top of it or under it if I want to. Get out!", she ordered. "Why should I? I was here first!". "Excuse me? This is my bed and my room! By the way, why did you say you found me? I don't remember playing hide-and-seek.", she wondered. "You ruined my plan! I was going to grab your leg, freak you out and then pull you in. Now I only have 2 chances left.", he sulked. She stared at him, astonished by his plan. She really wasn't expecting that. She would have freaked out if someone suddenly grabbed her leg from under the bed. But she felt proud of herself at the same time. "Haha! Told you I was too smart", she pretended. "Oh well, I'll get you the next time. And plan or no plan, I was going to come under your bed anyways". "Why?", she asked, suddenly suspicious. "I told you, I can't stay without you for even a minute. And I wanted to spy on you. And I wanted to check if you hide anything under your bed, like a diary or something but all I found was dust. You should clean your room you know. And I wanted to take a nap, it's quite cosy here.". He gave her yet another shock. "Are you mad?", she asked. "Yes! Madly in love with you. By the way this is a pretty good place to have our little dinners, no one can find us, full privacy here". She realised what he was thinking. "Bye!", she said quickly and began to escape. He grabbed her arm, and moved closer. "Not so fast, I want my one last friendly kiss on the lips", he demanded. He began to bring his face closer to hers, their lips a mere 1 cm apart. Intense eye lock. Few minutes later. "AAAH", they both shrieked. "What are you two doing under the bed?", Rajeev asked. They looked at each other, not knowing what to say. "Rajeev uncle, I am going to murder you some day", was Amar's answer.


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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
😲 ... 😛

So manyyyy parts!!! 😛 😛
I sooo loved this fifth part! So romantic and funny at the same time! Hahaha....haila....I'm so blushing.... 😆 ...

I'm so happy you turned it into a FF. And you better not end it soon! 😉 ...varna....varna we'll be all veriiii sad!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
This is EXACTLY what we should see from the real AD. Awww she was outside his room the whole night, something very Vidya-like!! 😳 I love the teasing...I love it all! You right so well Aryan!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
AWWW THAT WAS SOOOOOO CUTE 😃 😃 😃
how can i totally imagine that aryan????? lol
ur such a good writer man 😊
omg i would sooo like to see that 😊 😊 😊
and hahahah i love the last line that amar said to rajeev....too good 😃 😃 😃
PLEZ PLEZ PLEZ CONTINUE SOON!!!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
hahahahahaha 😆 omg dat woz too funny! 😃
i loved it 😃
Edited by neha fan1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
OMG! tht was soo hilarous! u have to continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
LMAO OMGG AWESOME FF!!!! totally love it thats just too jokes!!!!! 👏

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