My crazy imagination-Short FF,pg 8 part 8 - Page 2

You all are just too nice 😳 Many of you are amazing writers yourselves and you're praising ME? I'm seriously shocked and overwhelmed by the response, wasnt expecting it at all.I was actually hesistant to share this at first 😆 Thank you so so much everyone for your wonderful comments 🤗 🤗

A FF? 😆 I'm very bad at maintaining them.But um maybe, I'll see.I've got all the time in the world so I'll try to start one, if I get some nice ideas.

And thank you once again guys, I'm glad you all liked my hungry thirsty beast 😆

tht was soooooo good..ur a great writer, continue sooon 👏

awww....dats soooo hawt 😳 ......we can imagine divya...turning all red like a tomato 😆 😆 ..lol...plz make it into a ff....

haha Aryan that was amazing!!
LOL! Last sentence was funny 😆 😆 😆

dude .. DIRTAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY ... its so corny lol for sum reason i was imagining SRK .. HAAAAAAAAAAA SRK

I've edited the first page.I just feel like writing the dialogues in hindi now.

Part 2

The Occasion...

"Mubarak ho! Mubarak ho!", the enthusiastic guest grabbed Amar's hand and shook it wildly. "Arre bhai, bus karo.", Amar whined. His head sank lower, and he rested his chin on his palm. Considering that he was just about to be engaged to the love of his life, he didn't look very excited. Kya pagal aur boring logo mein phass gaya hoon, aise khush ho rahe hain jaise sagaai inki ho rahi ho. Dibyaji...kahan ho aap?, he complained in his mind, looking up anxiously at the stairs every now and then. "Lo, Divya aa gayi!", Mahua announced excitedly. Hundreds of pairs of eyes looked up to see his beautiful fiance, but when he saw his princess standing elegantly at the top of the stairs, he froze. She slowly walked down the stairs, being admired by all like a celebrity. "Wow!"."Kitni sundar lag rahi hai", many commented. Even when she came and took a seat next to him, he continued to stare at her in amazement. She looked at him, and was taken aback by his reaction. "Amar, moo to band karo", she spoke through her smile, trying not to make it obvious that she was speaking. He obeyed her order but continued to stare. She looked down at her lap, hiding her embarrassed red face from the guests. "Lag ta hai ke humme apna dinner aaj hi poora karna hoga", he spoke in the same manner as she did, nudging her arm gently with a naughty smirk. "Please Amar, sab dekh rahe hain. Kam se kam abhi to behave karo", she pleaded. "Kyun? Aakhir app humari hone wali patni hain, hum jab chahe kaheen bhi kuch bhi karen", he challenged. "Okay everyone, aab jab ke dulha dulhan aa gaye hain, sagaai ki rasam shuro karte hain", Rajeev announced, obtaining everyone's attention. The guests applauded as the love birds shyly exchanged rings. Rajeev handed Amar a microphone on his request. "Amar kuch kehna chahta hai".
"Sab se pehle hum aap sab ko er…thenkoo kehna chahte hain ke app humari sagaai mein aaye aur…", he was rudely interrupted by an eruption of laughter. He looked up to find several mocking faces. "Yeh koi mazaak hai kya? Thenkoo? Hum? Divya jaisi ameer, sophisticated aur intelligent ladki is gawaar se shaadi kar rahi hai? Bechari!", a guest shouted. "Suit mein to theek thaak lag raha tha par jaise hi moo khola to pata chala ke yeh to…", the guest continued to laugh. Divya clenched her fists and looked as if she would explode, she walked up to Amar and grabbed the microphone from his hand. "Excuse me, kisne haq diya aap sab ko yeh bakwaas karne ke liye? Amar mera hone wala pati ho aur us ke khilaaf mein ek shabd nahi sunoongi. Meri zindagi hai main chahe jisse bhi shaadi karoon, aap logo ko kya takleef hai? Amar jaise bhi hai main usse pyar karti hoon aur who bhi mujhse utna hi pyar karta hai. Haan hum dono alag hain lekin ek dusre ke liye humara pyar alag nahi hai. Samjhe aap log?", she was fuming, shouting and screaming. Pin drop silence. She turned to look at Amar who was staring down at his feet in shame. When they had eye contact she saw tears trapped in his eyes, waiting to escape. He was trying his best to stop them. "Amar! Amar! Amar...", she called after him, but he was already gone.

awesome start Aryan! I hope Divya can mano Amar! 😃

awww..its so cute...i only understand alil..because i cant read hindi...can u please write in englsh? 😕 😳

^Alright 😊 I'm gonna do just one more update in hindi, then I'll go back to English, ok?

I wrote this next part with part 2 actually but I split them into 2 different parts. I know this is no longer romantic or anything but I'll get back to all of that after this part.

Part 3

"Amar! Please darwaaza kholo! Mujhe aandar aane do, mujhe tumse baat karni hai. Amar!", Divya pleaded as she banged loudly on his door. He sat on his bed, hugging his legs and resting his head on his knees, sobbing uncontrollably. "Dekho main tab tak yahan se nahi jaoongi jab tak tum yeh darwaaza nahi kholte.Tum sun rahe ho na?", she was still punching the door but with less strength now, she was beginning to give up. He shut his eyes to ignore her warning, he switched off the lights and pulled the blanket over his face.

The next morning…

He was wide awake but lay perfectly still on his bed. He was aware of the time but didn't feel like getting up and facing the world, afraid that he would be humiliated again. The clock said 7:30am, he sighed and finally got up. When he opened the door he found a small surprise. Divya had curled up like a little child, she was leaning against the wall just outside his room, sleeping. "Dekho main tab tak yahan se nahi jaoongi jab tak tum yeh darwaaza nahi kholte.Tum sun rahe ho na?". He remembered her words, tears began to roll down his cheeks. Tears of appreciation that someone loved him so much. Tears of guilt as he ignored her and let her sleep on the floor like this all night. He bent down, and very carefully put her arm around his neck, trying not to interrupt her nap. He carried her in his arms into the room, then placed her on to his bed and covered her with the blanket. "Amar", she said softly. He probably wouldn't have stopped if she hadn't caught his wrist as he was clearly refusing to respond to her words. "Meri taraf dekho, please Amar". It was only when he recognised the sadness in her voice that he turned around and looked at her, realising that she may start crying. He sat down on the bed, looking away from her eyes. "Tum mujhe ignore kyun kar rahe ho? Mujhse koi galti ho gayi hai?". "Nahi Dibyaji, aap ne kuch nahi kiya.Aap ki koi galti nahi hai.", hearing her blaming herself he suddenly looks up at her. "Main aachi tarah se jaanti hoon ke kal raat ko jo bhi huwa, usse tumhe bahut chot paunchi hai. Par tum mujhse kyun door bhaag rahe ho? Mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahe?". "Kyun ke…hum aap ke layak nahi hai". "To tum sab kuch bhool gaye, maine kal raat ko kya bola? Tum kyun nahi samaj te? Main tumse pyar karti hoon, tum jaise bhi ho mujhe pasand ho. Tumhare pass kitna paisa tum kitne pare likhe ho iss sab se mujhe koi farak nahi parta. Duniya ko jo bol na hai bak ne do!", she was no longer speaking softly now. "Aap humse itna pyar kyun karti hain?". "Main koi bhagwaan hoon kya? Jo mujh jaisi ladki tumse pyar nahi kar sakti? Main perfect nahi hoon, koi nahi hota.Logo ko ki baat mat suna. Main hoon na tumhare saath? Log jo bhi kahen mere pyar mein koi farak nahi aayega." For a few seconds no one said anything, and then he heard her sniff. "Arre, aap ro rahi hain?". He tries to touch her face. "Mat haath lagayo mujhe. Tumhe mere pyar ki koi kadar nahi hai", she slaps his hand away. "Nahi nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai. Humme maaf karden". "Pehle vaada karo phir kabhi mujhe ignore nahi karoge. Phir kabhi nahi bolege ke tum mere layak nahi ho." "Hum vaada karte hain. Ab rona band karen aur hume Dibyaji wala smile di jiye." He wipes the tears from her face while she gives him a smile, and caresses her hair softly. She suddenly jumps on him, wrapping her arms around him in a tight embrace. "I love you Amar", she whispers in his ear. "Hum bhi aap se bahut pyar karte hain". A few minutes later they depart. "To Mr.Beast, apna dinner khatam nahi karna?", she offers playfully. His naughty smirk returns. "Abhi nahi, baad mein.", he winks at her. "Abhi aap thori der so jayi.Bahut thaki wi lag rahi hai.Poori raat sahi se soyi nahi." "Nahi main theek hoon", she protested. "Agar humme apna chota sa dinner poora karna hai to aap ko fresh lagna chahiye, warna tasty kaise hongi?". "Theek hai par sirf ek ghanta, okay?". He nods and kisses her forehead. "Goodnight!", she shouts when he's at the door. "Good morning, ache ache sapne dekhna, humare baare mein".