My crazy imagination-Short FF,pg 8 part 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Yes it can. =D

Aw, Div-Ya. <3 How cute! Sexxxyyy Amar. <33 . Wish I could hide in his room and spy on him. :$ Loved the end.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
that was amazing Aryan! keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
I love your AD! They're so adorable and full of mischief! 😳

So he's finally transformed. I'm glad that the stubble's gone 😛 Awesome part Aryan!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Aryan, I am soooo glad you turned this into an FF.

I love all the parts, and the lines are the most beautiful and of course their romantic scenes bhi 😛

Hiding under the bed, Mr. Kangaroo, Mr. Grizzly Bear, and the wonderful transformation. What more could I ask you for?

Yes, there is one thing. You don't have to update this often, but please continue this FF and don't end it soon. We will all be really veriii sad 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Aryan
Those three parts were awesome..how can you think of ending this and deprive us?

AD scenes were awesome..if only the creatives would steal from your FF...I loved how you showed Sagar taking over Amar...
And the "under the bed" drama was 😳 😳

Please continue...you write sooo well...loved it...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Aryan, I really like your FF, its just awesome, how AD interact with each other
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
tht was AMAZING...sooo good lol i loved it continue soon please...ur a great writter.! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
🤣 🤣 ...shirt over blazer. Hai hai.... 😆

Aww...blushing like a girl... 😆 😳 😳

Aryaaaaan! Your FF is too sweet! 😳 😳 😳
Edited by Little Foot - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
gr8 part..hope divya really changes him in the serial to...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
ur imagination is soo kwell....i jus luv readin ur short ff its jus fantastic 😊

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