My crazy imagination-Short FF,pg 8 part 8 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
I want the week to pass by quickly so you can post the next part.

Kab aayega weekend? 😔
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
^No need to wait, next part is being posted now!

Good news, next part will include Sin!

More focus on SV!

Part 8

The following night…

Hand was on the door, but he was hesitating to push it open. I have to do this, he thought. I must get my answers, and this is the place where I'll find them. Finally he gathered the courage to put some force into his hand. When he entered, he closed the door behind him. He stood in the middle of the room with his eyes shut, desperate to hear the voices, desperate to recognise the owners. He waited. Nothing. He opened his eyes, frustrated. In the far corner, he noticed a mirror, slightly shattered. He walked up to it and saw nothing but his own reflection. A few moments later, however, to his horror he no longer saw himself. A man, in a blue and white T-shirt and jeans, covered in blood. "He looks just like Sagar". "Sagar! My son". The comments ran through his mind. Unconsciously he lifted his hand, and stroked the ghastly man, astonished.

Some minutes later…

"Divya! Divya! Wake up", he called out frantically, shaking her. "Amar what's wrong?", she inquired, half asleep. "I'm…I'm Sagar. But wait, there was no Vidya. Could that mean you're…", he murmured, confusing Divya as well as himself. "What are you talking about?". "Look just come with me, I need to show you something", forcefully he pulled her off the bed, once she was on her feet he grabbed her hand and ran.

Outside the room…

"Amar wait, why are you taking me back into that room? Is this another prank?", she refused to move as soon as she saw where he was taking her. "This is really important. I need to confirm something. And no it's not a prank, it wasn't a prank before either, I lied okay". "What?". He ignored her, and dragged her into the room. They stood in front of the mirror, he could see the man but he waited for the woman to appear. Divya looked on, puzzled. "There she is! Do you see her?", he suddenly said, pointing to a woman only he could see, in a blue sari, also covered in blood. "All I see is myself and you. Who are you talking about?", Divya failed to understand. "Um…okay think about those weird dreams of yours. You see us wearing blue right? Close your eyes, think about it and then look back in the mirror". She knew this was crazy but she obeyed her insane fiance nonetheless. When she opened her eyes, she saw what he was on about. Horrrofied, she held up her finger, pointing at the woman. She took a few small steps back, away from the mirror and ended up stumbling. Amar held her, trying to console her. "What's this?" she asked, sounding like an innocent terrified little child who had no idea what was going on. "That's exactly how we looked in my dream!". "That wasn't your dream after all then. This room belongs to Sagar and Vidya, the people in the mirror are Sagar and Vidya, and we are Sagar and Vidya", he informed her, equally stunned.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
Ooo I'll edit this post. Need to read both parts. Can't wait! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
gr8 update....but where are all those hawt AD scenes gone...cont soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
omg omg omg he remembered!!!! YAY!!!!!
ThAt WAS jUSt MINDBLOWING...
u r such a talented writer....u noe aryan u should write more often eh....
anyways plez plez plez continue soon 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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olmgomgomgomgomgogm tht was amazing continuie like u HAVE to NOWW
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67



Omg yay! AD know that they are SV! 😃 Im glad both of them realized and not just Amar. =D

Thank you Aroo! 🤗🤗

Edited by Lead-Oxide - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
I loved their recollection 😳

And not they know they have been reincarnated as SV

Aryan I loved the part, continue soon 😛

Creatives should learn from this and make it similar, more like exact 😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
awesome update! that was so awesome Aryan, totally wish the show was more like your fic! 😃

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