My crazy imagination-Short FF,pg 8 part 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Edit: Since many of you insisted I've attempted to turn this into a fanfic. As I said earlier I'm not really good at them but I'll give it my best shot.And I'm gonna try and make it quite a short FF.

This is something that I dont usually do.It just came to my mind when I saw the precap for today. Then I felt the desire and urge to write it down because I didnt want to lose it, I wanted to imagine the scene in my head and thats why I went crazy and wrote so much.The DA in my scene are not really like the real DA, Amar seems to be more romantic here.Since we didnt get a scene today I felt like sharing it, I must warn you guys though I'm not fantastic at writing but I tried my best!

A few minutes before the occasion....

The full length mirror reflected her beauty as she adjusted her hair and clothes, ensuring that everything was absolutely perfect for the special occasion. She tilted her body 45 degrees to the right and then 45 degrees to the left. A warm smile was glued on to her face once she was satisfied. She lowered her head slightly and held up her arm, her fingers brushed along the bangles which matched perfectly with her bottle green outfit. The huge grin which was never going to leave her face now faded, she tapped each bangle with her index finger. 1...2...3...4. She lifted her other arm and repeated the same process. 1…2…3…4…5.A missing bangle. Her frantic eyes glanced up to search the dressing table. Before she could turn around and start searching the whole room, the cause and the solution of her problem appeared before her, placed on a palm. She heaved a sigh of relief and took the problem bangle to make both her arms equal. Along with her bangle the sticky smile returned too. She headed for the door but froze when her hand touched the door knob. Wait a minute, she thought. Was that a hand that she saw and….aah…sshh. A black figure suddenly shot up from the ground, waving it's arms about in the air, placing it's hand over her mouth to halt her screaming. Sshh, it hushed again. It's free hand grabbed her shoulder and pushed her backwards until her back gently hit the wall. The hand covering her mouth now moved on to the wall, above her head. The other hand also placed itself on the wall, next to her shoulder, leaving no escape for her. "You idiot!", she whispered furiously. "Sorry about that, I hope I didn't frighten you too much. Wasn't my intention to do so anyways", he breathed back innocently"."Oh no you didn't scare me that much, I just nearly had a heart attack, that's all", a bright sarcastic smile appeared on her face."I had no other option but to sneak in, if you had seen me you would have kicked me out of the room the very next second. Doesn't look good, future husband sneaking into his future wife's room while she gets ready for the engagement." Amused by his justification, she wraps her arms around his neck. "What's the hurry? I would have been downstairs in a couple of minutes anyways, and then you could stare at my beautiful face all night." "True but I wanted to see you enhancing your beauty. I wanted to see what was going on in your mind just before the engagement. I was curious and just couldn't resist. Cant stay without you for even a minute". "Okay okay, but now its time for you to leave Mr.". "Um I don't think so. I still need to satisfy my thirst first". He leans in closer, gazing intently into her eyes, and then rubs his nose along her neck. "Mrs. Amar Shivdhar Uppadhay, you look amazing...you smell mouth-watering and you feel…..oh I just want to gobble you up, yum!"."Amar please…behave yourself", she whispers with her eyes closed, enjoying the passion but feeling shy at the same time. "Have you seen Amar? He was here just a few minutes ago. And is Divya ready yet?". Amar moves away from Divya, rolling his eyes and sighing with frustration. Rajeev's voice, who was probably talking to Mahua ruined their intense moment, making Amar really irritated. Divya giggles and feels relieved as she was saved by Rajeev. "Okay you Hungry Thirsty Beast, that's your cue to leave. Get out!". She begins to push him towards the door. He stops when the door is half open. "Don't worry, we'll finish my dinner some other time and no one is going to come and save you". He leaves the room, leaving Divya red as a tomato.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay you Hungry Thirsty Beast

🤣🤣 What words!!!

Aryan that was FANTASTIC!! 👏 👏 Seriously really good. I could totally imagine it. Whats this about his nose rubbing along her neck?? Haiiiii!!! I wish we get some close moments like this!

You should write a FF dude!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow! That was awesome! 👏 😃 You should surely continue and turn this into a FF 😃 😃 😃 And that's the perfect name for Amar 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oooo Aryan that was soo cute. 😃Love it! I took a break from studying to read this. 😛

The whole "thirst" thing reminded me of Edward and Bella. 😳 😆 It was adorable. Please make yourself the first guy on the forum to have a FF. 😛 It would be amazing! 😳

Great job once again! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is BEYOND FANTASTIC! Loved it loved it loved itt. :P :P This is so cute. <3 .
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG THAt WAS SOOO CUTE 😃
I LOVED IT! I WISh THAT HAD HAPPPENED 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So Aryan....you NEED to write a FF! 😳 😳 😳 This was totally completely amazing! 👏

You write so real, it makes us feel like we're watching it! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg, Aryan what are you saying? Your writing is sooo good. I could imagine the whole scene with SD. you NEED to write a FF ASAP! 😳 😳 😳 If you have time please start one! 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ohhhh Hungry Thirsty Beast!!!!!!! 😉

Super cool ...nope hot scene....Aryan u really have to turn this post to a FF....u r a Fantastic writer.... 😳 👏 👏

Hope we will get these type of cool ..Oops again...Hot scenes soon...in future.... 😳 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg! dat woz really good! 👏 👏
i could just imagin AD! 😳
must say ur a very good writer! 😃

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