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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 6
Recap: Vidya and shalu had gone to see a movie where sagar and vidya met again. Vidya and Shalu leave the movies, While Vidya's mom receives a phone call from someone that informs her about Vidya and she is angry.


Vidya and Shalu are returning in the auto rickshaw when Vidya starts the conversation with shalu

Vidya: arrey shalu ek baat bata

Shalu: Kya

Vidya: woh jub hum film dekh rahe thay tum nay mujhey kiss kyoun kiya

Shalu looks at vidya and says "Kya, maine tumhey kiss nahi kiya"

Vidya: Arrey shalu jhooth kyun bolti hai

Shalu: mein sach keh rahi hoon main kyun tumhe kiss karoun gi aur tu janti hai mein jhooth nahi bolti unless someone pushes me to(she looks at vidya with an angry look)

Vidya: Haa woh tu hai, lekin agar tum nay mujhey kiss nahi kiya tu woh kaoun tha

Shalu: koi nahi tha, tu ziada hindi films dekhti hai na isi liye tera demag harab ho gaya hai. And these things come to your mind and I am sure this must be your imagination

Vidya looks confused and is still thinking to herself about who that was and than says maybe it was my imagination

Next scene Vidya and shalu both come home and walk through the door. Shalu goes to her room while vidya sees someone sitting on the couch with a plate of snacks in hand. Its chachi. Chachi has her back towards the door so she doesn't know that the girls have come home. Vidya sees chachi and smiles to herself mischievously and starts taking baby steps towards chachi. She is being very carefull so chaci cant sense that vidya is coming. Vidya goes near chachi's ear and yells on top of her lungs "CHACHIIIIII" Chaci gets terrified and looks back and sees vidya.

Chachi: arrey Vidya tujhe mujhey tang kiye beghar neend nahi ati kiya

Vidya now comes in front of chaci and sits in the front seat and grabs a snack and starts eating it.

Chachi: arrey Vidya aaj tu gayi

Vidya: kyun chaci kya huwa?

Chachi: teri maa ko kisi ka phone aya tha teri shikyaat ka

Vidya: KYA?!!!!!!!!

Chachi: haa aur phone suntay hi teri maa bahut naaraz ho gayi

Vidya is about to get up and run before her mom comes but as she gets up she sees her mom standing with shalu. Vidya now looks at shalu and thinks that shalu must have told mom everything.

Kaushaliya: Vidya tu aaj kya kar kay a rahi hai

Vidya with a scared look on her face says "mein…..um…….mein kuch nahi maa"

Kaushaliya: Jooth mat bol mujhe sab pata hai

Vidya: sab, lekin kaise maa?

Kaushaliya: yeh sab chod aur mujhey bta kay itna bara hungama karne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Vidya thinks to herself what hungama is her mom talking about and thinks that she cant be talking about going to the movies because I didn't create a scene there. She lets out a breath in relief and says "kaun sa hungama ma?"

Kaushaliya: jo aaj tuney bus stop pay kiya us ki baat kar rahi hoon maa

Vidya: woh hungama maa tu janti nahi who aadmi kitna bura tha aur batmizi kar raha tha

Kaushaliya: isi baat ka to darr rehta hai mujhey kay kisi din tu aisay admi say jagra karey gi jo hadh say ziada bura ho ga aur phir jo hoga woh to mein sooch kay hi darti hoon

Vidya: maa tu darti kyoun hai, mein aaj ki ladki hoon mujhe apna hial rekhna ata hai, aur aaj kaal ki ladki ko aadmi kay saharay ki zarrorat nahi hoti

Kaushaliya: aurat chahey kitni hi mazboot ho vidya usey iss dunia mein rekhnay kay liya aadmi kay shaharey ki zarrorat hoti hay par tu yeh aaj nahi samjhey gi jab teri shaadi ho gi tu tujhey ehssas ho ga

Vidya: maa mujhey shaadi nahi karni

Kaushaliya looks at chachi and says "iss ladki ka mein kya karoun?" and than looks at vidya and says "shadi nahi karey gi tu saru zindagi kya kare gi"

Vidya: kuch nahi, chachi ko stayoun gi aap say daant suno gi aur shalu kay satth sara din battein karo gi.

Chachi: lekin shalu teri batein sunay kay liye yahaan nahi ho gi

Vidya looks at chchi while she folds her arms and says "kyoun nahi ho gi woh yahan?"

Chaci: Kyoun kay us ki shaddi ki baat chal rahi hai aur kal usey dekhnay ladke wale a rahey hain

Vidya looks shocked and says KYA?!!!!!!!!!! She than looks at shalu and says "shalu yeh chachi kya keh rahe hai?

Shalu is looking down when Vidya looks at her and than looks at chachi and says "chachi yeh aap kya kar rahe hain app shalu say puchey begair us ki shaddi kaisey kar saktey hain?"

Chachi: hum nay us say pucha tha aur yeh sab us ki marzi say ho raha hai

Vidya now looks at shalu with a lot of questions in her eyes and than asks shalu "Shalu itni bari baat ho gayi aur tum nay mujhey btaya hi nahi"

Shalu says Vidya kuch bateein btai nahi jati unhein smjha jata hai aur tumharey paas na un batton ko samjanay ka time hai aur na interest

Vidya: shalu yeh kya keh rahi ho tum meri behan ho I am so happy for you lekin tum nay mujhey btaya kyoun nahi

Vidya than comes to chachi and stands in front of chachi and chachi has a scared look on her face

Vidya: aur chachi tum nay mujhey kyoun nahi btaya haa?

Chachi just stares at vidya

Vidya: acha ab yeh tu btao kay ladka koun hai?

Chachi: who log kal a rahe hain kal dekh lena

Vidya looks excited and says "kal, tu phir is ka mtalab hai kay kal hum college nahi jaye gay" she looks vey happy while saying that. Than she hears shalu's voice from back
Shalu says "hum kal college jaye gay"

Vidya turns around and looks disappointed.



Hope you guys like it. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
wow.... it was great
Can't wait for the next part
I just love ur ff im crazy abt it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
Lovely updat Arooj that was cute...You are a great writer its like i am reading un update for a real episode....great job 👏 and can't wait for SV scenes 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
Aww yay Arooj you started one..!! very nice yaar, good to see Vidya speaking English 😳 hehe! great job, can't wait for Sagar's intro!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Wow Arooj that was awesome!! 😊 cant wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
gr8 update arooj! 👏 after a longgggggggggg time. 😆
oo, shalu getting married, i would laugh if the guy was sagar. 😆 but it would be cool. 😉
cant wait to read the next update. 😛


-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: stargirl345

gr8 update arooj! 👏 after a longgggggggggg time. 😆
oo, shalu getting married, i would laugh if the guy was sagar. 😆 but it would be cool. 😉
cant wait to read the next update. 😛


-Ruchika

Ruchicka your predictions always crack me up😆 and yeah i guess i took a long time to write it i guess the summer vocation is having its affect on me dont worry i will continue tommorrow and from than on will try to write an update everyday😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
tommorow agaya par apka update nahin! Please update soon! Sooo bechaan to find out who's shalu's mystery guy! Chinu??

Gaurie 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
I am working on it 😛 I'll post it in couple of hours. 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
Maybe the mystery guy is Sagar!! 😛 😆

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