FF:Tumharey Naam-(Update pg. 155) Part 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: stargirl345

gr8 job arooj! cant wait to see wat happens next! 😛


-Ruchika

Thanks Ruchika i am glad u like it😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: rushvi99

Great update Arooj...that was too funny...Hmm...is something going to happen between Chinu and Shalu?? Thats sooo cute....can't wait for the next update 😃

Thanks, i am glad u find it funny. My stories always start on a funny note and than go to romantic stages. hmmmmmmmm may be something will happen between chinu and shalu😉 u will find out soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

Recap: Vidya, shalu, sagar, chinu, and rohit are all at the theaters. Sagar discovers they are half an hour early and when he sees surili walk in and hides behind Rohit.

Rohit notices sagar's action and says "Kya hua"

Sagar: Kuch nahi aur yeh chinu kahan chala gaya

Rohit: yehin kahin hoga, but why are u hiding

Sagar: yaar samney dekh

Rohit sees Surili approaching towards him and says "oh to yeh baat hai, yaar tu surili say bagta kyon hai"

Sagar: because she is just weired, she use to be interesting, ek do baar us say haas kay baat kya karli who ziada he free ho gayi hai, and I don't like girls like her. Dude did u know she started spreading rumors about us.

Rohit: yeah I know I heared a lot of stuff about you two

Sagar: ab yeh sab chod, aur yeh soch kay mujhey kya karna chahiye. She is coming this way what do I do.

Rohit: ah I don't know let me think

Sagar hits rohit on his head from behind and says jaldi kar she is coming this way, an I really don't want to spend my evening with her

Rohit: Idea

Sagar: Kya?

Rohit: tu aik kaam kar yahan say ja aur kisi be film kay hall mein gus ja

Sagar: what?

Rohit: yeah, look this side is where the hindi films are playing, she would never suspect you to be watching a hindi movie. Everybody knows u don't watch hindi movies and u tend to get bored with them a lot

Sagar hits rohit's head again and says "so u do have a brain thanks yaar, ill see ya tomorrow at college and u have a good time with Surili bye." Saying this he runs while surili sees him running and calls out to him. But he totally ignores her and keeps on running.

Inside the show room Vidya and Shalu are sitting, Vidya is enjoying the film while Shalu keeps on looking at the time, She is sitting at the last seat of the row and vidya is sitting right next to her. Shalu looks at Vidya who is totally in to the movie,

Shalu: Vidya, I think we are getting late.

Vidya doesn't respond at all; it is if she can't hear a single thing. Shalu still continues to talk and says " I am going to the bathroom I'll be back" Vidya did not hear that because she was lost in to the movie. As Shalu leaves through the door Sagar enters. He is looking around hoping to find a seat but sees that the house is almost full. Sagar says to himself "god this many people actually come to watch these hindi movies" as he says that he spots a empty seat. This seat is the seat that shalu was sititng in. He immediately goes and sitts next to Vidya. Without realizing that its her of course. He is sitting down, trying to pay attention to the movie but he cant because back of his head he still worried about surili. He turns around to peek at the door and he sees surili standing. He thinks looks like surili is going to see me any minute so he grabs vidya's dupatta and puts his head on to Vidya's shoulder and hides his face under her dupatta. Vidya thinks that it is shalu. She is still looking at the screen and says "Arrey shalu scene tu comedy chal raha hai aur tu darr rahi hai. She pats sagar's head and says "its okay" and than continues watching the move. Surili spots sagar and thinks that cant be him. That girl would have beaten him up if he put his head on to her shoulder or at least would have created a scene. Plus she couldn't see his face clearly so she gives up and leaves. Now sagar who still has his head on to Vidy's shoulder hears a beautiful laugh, he slowly removes the dupatta downwards from his face and sees Vidya laughing at the movie. He remembered her of course but this time he was looking at her differently he couldn't keep his eyes off of her. He couldn't help himself but get closer and closer to her and he ends up kissing her cheek and than gets up and leaves. Vidya rubs her hand at the part where sagar kissed and turns around while saying " arrey shalu yeh kya ………" she sees no one on the seat and thinks to herself "yeh shalu kahan gayi"

She gets up and goes outside to find shalu.

Shalu is walking back when Chinu spots her and looks at her from far and smiles to himself. He thought of going up to her and saying hi when sagar comes and says to Chinu "arrey chinu mein chala, movie program cancel, chal yahan say chaley." Sagar and chinu both start walking outside when sagar spots vidya coming towards shalu. Sagar stops and says to chinu "aye chinu aik minute ruk" he stands and looks at what Vidya is about to say to shalu.

Vidya: shalu tu kahan chali gayi thi

Shalu: kuch nahi woh I think we should leave, we are getting late

Vidya: what movie aadey mein chod kay

Shalu: I don't care, I came here with you, now if you don't wana go than stay but I am going and if mom asks me where u r I am not going to lie

Vidya: Kya?

Shalu looks at Vidya and says "VIdya tujhey meri baat aaj maan ni parey gi

Sagar smiles to himself and says "VIDYA" and than looks at Chinu and says lets go.They both leave and now shalu starts walking towards the door and vidya just follows her but is not very happy about it.

Next Scene Vidya's house:

The phone is ringing and kaushaliya picks up the phone and listens to what the person has to says and than says "Kya, tum sach kah rahi ho, aisa kiya vidya nay" she listens to what the women on the phone had to say and than replies "kyat um janti ho woh ladka kaoun tha" than she hangs up the phone and says to herself " aaj Vidya ko mein nahi chodo gi, yeh to hadh say ziada bigarti jaa rahi hay"

Edited by Arooj_007 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
[COLOR]wow arooj!!! lub the part where sagar kisses vidya! 😳 ohhhhh, i cant wait to see wat happens next.
i wonder if sagar mimicked a voice nd called. 😆 how'd he get her # though? 😕


-Ruchika
Edited by stargirl345 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
probably through her name... Uh-oh... Vidya is in trouble! I love the FF arooj, very new/different! 😆 😆


😳 😳 Gaurie
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
hey Arooj good stuff 👏 😉 cant wait for your next ff 😃 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG Arooj i am totally addicted to your FF....that was sooo cute how Sagar kissed Vidya...that was sooo much like movies... 😳 😳 😳 ...Plz continue with this hot scenes...and make them even hotter 😳 😳 😳 ...Looks like Vidya is in trouble....ahh can't wait till the next update.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: stargirl345

[COLOR]wow arooj!!! lub the part where sagar kisses vidya! 😳 ohhhhh, i cant wait to see wat happens next.
i wonder if sagar mimicked a voice nd called. 😆 how'd he get her # though? 😕


-Ruchika

Ruchicka u really think its Sagar who called? Thanx for liking it

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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Gaurie

probably through her name... Uh-oh... Vidya is in trouble! I love the FF arooj, very new/different! 😆 😆


😳 😳 Gaurie

Thanks Gaurie for liking the FF and yeah it is different isnt it?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: rushvi99

OMG Arooj i am totally addicted to your FF....that was sooo cute how Sagar kissed Vidya...that was sooo much like movies... 😳 😳 😳 ...Plz continue with this hot scenes...and make them even hotter 😳 😳 😳 ...Looks like Vidya is in trouble....ahh can't wait till the next update.... 😃

Thanks Rushvi and dont worry i was just getting started, now my FF is going to be filled with sagar and Vidya scenes you just wait and watch what turns my story is going to take😛

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