FF:Tumharey Naam-(Update pg. 155) Part 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good Job Arooj 👏 I absolutely loved it. Cant wait to see what Vidya does next....obviously argue with Sagar 😆 ne ways its a really good FF 👏 pleeeeeeeaaaaase continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Arooj first of all sorry for replying late ...

But that was amazing 👏 👏 👏 ...I love the way Vidya's character is...I think Divyanka would do a really good job in that role too...I am excited for the love hate relationship they are going to have 😳 ...and Sagar in a towel 😳 ...I would die if I acutally saw him on Tv...Plz continue soon...I want to know Sagar's reaction 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanx to all of you for reading it and liking it
I will definately continue writing it asap now that my exams are over 😃 finally!!! 🥳 🥳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Arooj are you gonna do one today? 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: noodles

Arooj are you gonna do one today? 😊

I will surely try I should be able to post it in an hour or so 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part III

Recap: Shalu and vidya are walking as sagar's bike passes by and he causes vidya to tremble and almost fall. Vidya calls him from the back and he stops to turn around and looks at her.

Sagar is still staring at Vidya thinking who is this chick? Must be new in college, He is thinking to himself as vidya walks towards him. Shalu hits her forhead with her hand and says "not again". Vidya walked up to sagar and stared at him. Sagar still sitting on his bike did his eyebrow thing that he does and says

Sagar: Kya hai

Vidya: aik to ghalti karte ho aur uper say puchtey ho Kya hai?

Sagar: maine kya kiya?

Vidya: dekh kay bike nahi chala saktay?

Sagar: main to dekh kar hi chala raha tha, shayad tumhara dihaan kahin aur tha..

Vidya: mera dihaan kahin nahi tha

Sagar: dekha tumhara dihaan kahin nahi tha isi liye tum dekh kar nahi chal rahi thi aur isi liye tum almost meri pyaari bike say takra gayi

Vidya: Pyaari bike my foot……. Shakal say to ameer baap ki bigri hui aulad lagtey ho……

Sagar: aye baap pay maat ja

Vidya was about to respond when shalu comes from the back and grabs vidya and says lets go from here. Everybody is staring at us. Vidya says I don't care, I cant believe how rude this guy is? Shalu apologizes to sagar and says I am sorry meri behan ko maaf kar dijye. Shalu starts to pull vidya and they are walking now when Chinu comes in to the picture. Chinu comes and stands next to sagar who is still on his bike. Sagar again decided to talk and yells "aap ki behan paagal hane say kab chuti?" Vidya turns around and looks at sagar as if she is going to kill him but shalu keeps pulling her and they keep moving. Everybody gets back to what they were doing? Sagar is laughing when Chinu asks him who was that?

Sagar: pata nahi? Lagta hai new admission hai, par tu is say door rehna bari garam cheez hai

Chinu: acha aik mulaqaat mein hi pata chal gaya kay who kya hai? Aur mein kyun us kay paas jaonga, garam cheez to tujhey khane ka shouk hai

Sagar: No way not her yeh kuch ziada hi garam hai… yeh to muh jilanay wali cheez hai……. Anywayz she doesn't look like my type. Aur haan sagar partap singh ko ziada waqt nahi lagta girls ko samaj nay mein

Chinu: arey yaar college mein atey hi girls kay barey mein sochney lag gaya. Look this is our final year so you better not mess up anything

Sagar: don't worry chinu I will manage. U know some people have to work hard to get good grades but u know me it naturally comes to me.

Chinu: yeah I have noticed that. How do u do that?

Sagar: well(Pulls his collar up with both hands and says) u gota be born like that.

Chinu starts to think to himself as if he is buying what sagar is saying

Sagar: Tu ziada sochna bandh kar aur chal.

Sagar parks his bike and now is walking towards the college main building along with chinu. Sagar is spinning his keys on his finger while saying hi to everybody who passes by. He drops his keys accidentally and bends down to pick them up and notices a figure that appears and stands next to the keys. Sagar picks up his keys and looks up…… it's a girl wearing a black dress that is down to her knees. We now get to see her face its surili. Sagar gets up and they are now standing face to face. Chinu now looks at surili and sagar than says "yaar mein tumhey baad mein milta hoon mujhey kuch kaam hai" and he leaves.

Surili: Hey handsome

Sagar: hey surili, what's up? Gosh it has been such a long time since we last met. Changes his expressions and asks By the way when did we last meet?

Surili: Sagar tumhari boolnay ki aadat kab jayegi. Yaad hai tum nay mujh say promise kiya tha kay mujhey film dekhnay lay kay jaogay……….

Sagar is now thinking to himself trying to remember and than says o haa yaad aya

Surili: to phir hum kab ja rahey hain?

Sagar: kahan?

Surili: sagar tum phir bool gay. Array film dekhnay aur kahan.

Sagar: dekho surili mujhey yeh hindi pictures dekhnay ka ziada shauq nahi hai par haan agar koi nice Hollywood film niklay gi to hum zarror chalengay.. okay

Surili makes a disappointed face as sagar looks around a spots a guy and says "aye Rohit ruk" the guy stops and sagar leaves. Surili watches him as he runs and she decides to follow him.

Sagar is now talking to this guy named Rohit

Rohit: abbey yaar maine tujhey aadey ghante pehle phone kiya tha dus minute mein milnay kay liye and you arrive now

Sagar: I know!!! For once I am late for something and everybody is taunting me

Rohit: accha yaar are we still going out for the movie tonight

Sagar: of course man that new hollywood movie I gota check it out
Rohit tells sagar what time they are meeting and at what place

Surili hears this and thinks to herself "what a liar don't worry baby I'll catch you at the theaters." She turns around and leaves

Rohit: R u bringing surili along

Sagar looks at Rohit and says " Why would I do that?"

Rohit: because she is your girlfriend

Sagar: What?!!! r u out of ur mind. She is not my girlfriend. She just wishes she was

Rohit: but the whole campus thinks that u two have a thing going

Sagar: let them think it makes no difference to me
They walk into a classroom and the scene shifts and now we see Vidya and shalu who just came out of class. Vidya is walking when all of the sudden she stops and looks at shalu and starts talking

Vidya: aye shalu mera aik kaam karey gi

Shalu: Kya?
Vidya: woh pay phone dekh rahi hai wahan pay
Shalu: haan
Vidya: wahan pay ja kar ghar phone laga aur maa say kah kay hum log aaj zara deri say ayengay kyunki naaye students kay liye college mein aik function hai aur humein who attend karna hai…
Shalu: kaun sa function Vidya? Mujhey to kisi function kay bare mein nahi pata
Vidya puts her arm around shalu on to her shoulder and says "dekh meri bholi shalu koi function nahi hai par tu maa aur chaci say kahey gi kay hai
Shalu: mein aisa kyun karoongi

Vidya: kyunki hum nayi hindi film dekhnay ja rahey hain( she tells shalu the same place and time that Rohit had told sagar)

Shalu: Kya?!!! Na baba mein jhooth nahi bhol sakti, tu hudh kyon nahi phone karti

Vidya: because my dear they wont believe me, they will believe there goody good shalu.

Shalu: nahi, vidya main nahi

Vidya: dekh shalu agar tu phone nahi karey go to main tujhey yahaan itne sarey logo mein akela chod doon gi….

Shalu looks worried and scared and thinks to herself what she should do.


That's it for now. Hope you like it
Do tell me if you like or not.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks!! It sounds really good...i am the first one!! Please continue... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 job arooj! yes!!! sagar hates surili! 😆 😆 😆
plz cont soon! 😛


-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
awesome Arooj!!!

Can't wait to see what will happen at the movie theatre!! Love how Sagar hates Surili....highlight of this part!!!

Continue soon!!

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
hey Arooj
i love this ff of yours, 👏 👏 , to tell you the truth i dont really watch BMTD but i have a sister who is crazy about it and she keeps me up to date even if i want know or not. 😆 😆 great job once again 👏 👏

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