A Trapped Bird - Updated Part 17 + 18 - Page 10

Loved it Soni!!! 👏 And on Vidya being illitarate i think it would be cute if she secreatly met him in the forest and her taught her how to read and write and they would come closer to each other that way... 😃

Hailaaaaaaaa...!!

Soni ji..!! What sizzling scene yaar....... Sagar falling for her..... ufff...... it's cho cute, how he mentally scolds himself and says he can cook 😆

Hmm... should she be illiterate ? I dunno..... i think with the way the story is going she shouldn't be, but it's your choice 😃

What a great update yaar...... was waiting eagerly for this, thankoo cho much !!! 😳

BTW.... this V shaped fountain.... hmmm... seeing some symbolism here😉😳

Brilliant!! Absolutely brilliant. I agree with all the compliments you have recieved above Soni!!1 👏 👏 It totally captures your attention!!

I think Vidya should illiterate, it would be cute seeing Saagar teaching her how to read and write. But either way, the scenes which you write will be sizzling!! 😳

sum - thank you for the wonderful comments...their so heart warming! 😳 😛

CherryPrincess - haila you're guju too? so am I...my english is better than gujju, but I still can write in gujju, and the upsetting part is there is no alphabet in gujju 😭 btwn who says your english isn't good, I can tell from the way you replied, that it is very good! Your description is great too! thank you so much for the lovely comments as usual! you all make my day with such heart warming comments.!

rushvi - thank you for your lovely comments and I love your ideas too!

ammu - thank you for your lovely comments as usual! make me go blushing every day! 😳 btwn, I just love your ideas, I never thought about the symbolism before, but maybe my unconscious desires are turning up in my writing... 😳

reemz - thank you too for your lovely comments! it's not my writing that's sizzling it's my imagination... 😳 my imagination makes my writing run wild...

I love your guys ideas about Vidya being illiterate or not, I have decided what it's going to be, but I'll leave you all in suspence for the time being, wait for part ten to read the revelation... 😳

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Hang on what? You're gujju??? So am I!!!!! Haila! 😆

If you write in Gujarati...toh ee vaat nai rye!! 😉

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

Hang on what? You're gujju??? So am I!!!!! Haila! 😆

If you write in Gujarati...toh ee vaat nai rye!! 😉

omg you're gujju too? 😛 sachu kahyu, aah vartha gujarathi maa lakelu majaa na avath.. etle saaru thayu aa vartha angreji maa che...😆

wow!!!!!!!!!! reemz u and soni both gujju????????? 😳 amazing!!!!!!!!!!!! what's ur real name btw?????? u both are making me proud now!!!!!!!!!!! btw reemz i loved ur FF also a lot, have u dropped plan of continuing the story or what❓!!!!!!

btw soni, thanks for ur compliments!!!!! may be after coming to US my weakest point has started to become my stronger point, but I still suffer a lot with letter 's' and 'sh'....... 😆 but i guess people don't mind it here after hearing chinkus 😉

about my writing? may b i wud start by trying to write my own biography (i dont have gr8 imagination like u guys!!!!!!!! 😭 ) i m still not that sure as i wanted to explore entire dictionary (ok to be realistic atleast 1% of it) when i write sth. didn't want to bore readers with same words again and again!!!!!!!!! 😆

btw if u want to write in gujju, u can download gujju fonts from http://kids.swaminarayan.org/gujarati/downloadgujaratifonts. htm and then type using MS word. but frankly even i dont know how to use it properly. plz let me know if u can figure that out😊

anyways, looking at the way u write, i think u must be a voracious reader too!!!!!!!!!!! so wud like to ask u, have u read "Patan ni Prabhuta", "Gujarat no Nath" and "Manavi ni Bhavai"? Excellent novels....... ya romantic too! 😳 (they even crossed my ever favorites Harry Potter and Da Vinci Code) 😳

i guess i write bit too long!!!!!! 😕 sorry!!!!!!

Here's a little sneak peak into my next part:

Chapter Nine:

Sagar is afraid of making a fool of himself in front of Vidya, and is really nervous...

Someone pops up at midnight at Vidya's bedroom window...ala kkhh style...aah the kkhh fever has still not evaporated from my system...Hopefully this part will display more intensity and passion..

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Originally posted by: soni595

Here's a little sneak peak into my next part:

Chapter Nine:

Sagar is afraid of making a fool of himself in front of Vidya, and is really nervous...

Someone pops up at midnight at Vidya's bedroom window...ala kkhh style...aah the kkhh fever has still not evaporated from my system...Hopefully this part will display more intensity and passion..

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Hailaaa...!! Am loving the KKHH fever here😳😳 uff, great preview Soni ji, can't wait to read it tomorrow, am sure it will make my day !!😳

And about the symbolism.... i thought you made it V-shaped on purpose..!! 😉

I can't wait..... to see Sagar nervous in front of Vidya... it will be too cute !!😳

I feel left out... I'm not Gujju😆 kem cho ? 😉

I am a big bookworm too.... I read a lot, have always loved to read..!! i think that's why i enjoy writing so much, but i write a lot better than i type😛 so that's why my FF is so scattered....