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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ammmu

Hailaaa...!! Am loving the KKHH fever here😳😳 uff, great preview Soni ji, can't wait to read it tomorrow, am sure it will make my day !!😳

And about the symbolism.... i thought you made it V-shaped on purpose..!! 😉I can't wait..... to see Sagar nervous in front of Vidya... it will be too cute !!😳

I feel left out... I'm not Gujju😆 kem cho ? 😉

I am a big bookworm too.... I read a lot, have always loved to read..!! i think that's why i enjoy writing so much, but i write a lot better than i type😛 so that's why my FF is so scattered....

I'll be glad to make your day ammu! 😳 don't feel left out ammu, hindi and english is common still😳😛 in fact, I think I know more hindi than gujju.. to your question "hun majama chu" - it means I am fine!

you ff is not at all scattered, in fact it's pretty good, I love your dialogues and the concept! in fact the reason I love reading others ff's is because their different from mine and have different imaginations! 😳 Actually me too, my typing got better when I started to chat on msn and post on IF!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: soni595

I'll be glad to make your day ammu! 😳 don't feel left out ammu, hindi and english is common still😳😛 in fact, I think I know more hindi than gujju.. to your question "hun majama chu" - it means I am fine!

you ff is not at all scattered, in fact it's pretty good, I love your dialogues and the concept! in fact the reason I love reading others ff's is because their different from mine and have different imaginations! 😳 Actually me too, my typing got better when I started to chat on msn and post on IF!

Oohh, majama chu ! I know that one too... and "maru naam Ammu che"😛 hailaaa you know more Hindi ? aww... yap, it's mainly Hindi and Tamil for me... bits of others😃

Thanks so much😳 !! yap, eggjactly, i love to read such different fanfictions because i get to see everyone else's insight, which is cho interesting..!! in fact, i would have never known because i didn't start reading FFs until i came here.... so am very lucky !! yap, until IF and chatting came along i was not a great typer😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

ya so let me go by the writer's words and forget about exploring dictionary; hopefully it wud follow up soon as u say!!!!!! 😛 now to tell u the truth, though i studied in gujju, in childhood i used to have a lot scattered reading but no proper novel. i started reading novels in english, but they seemed nth to me when i read "Patan ni Prabhuta" and "Gujarat no Nath" before 1 year(i too love romance and these books have plenty of that😳) I admit I might be biased, may be i have grown up with too much of gujju language......... but believe me if u can try reading these books some day and i guarantee u, u wud also say the same words! 😛omg, I feel as if i have been paid to promote these novels 😆


U r perfectly right!!!!!!!!!! Infact when i want to relax, I go ahead and write sth (though till now haven't gone beyond writing detailed emails to friends or writing some stupid blog) It's ultimate joy!!!!!!! 😳

forgot to ask; my memory is bit weak.......... i can't exactly recall the scene u r mentioning from KKHH. as usual wud be waiting for ur sweet next thrilling and romantic episode.😕

Edited by CherryPrincess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
i'm not gujju 😭 but my aunt is (if that counts, but not really...) and so is my boyfriend 😃 though he's basically whitewashed and can't speak it 😆

_Gaurie
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey me too i am gujju too.. 😃 Hu bhi gujrat ni chu
Edited by rushvi99 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

A Trapped Bird - Part Nine
( Do listen to Dil Ka Rishta to get a better feel of this part)


He then goes closer to her, and kneels down on the floor right beside her head and then sits on the edge of it…caressing her soft silky hair…and intently gazing into her eyes…there was this electric current that passed through them that made her return his steady gaze with such passion and pure innocence, that on impulse he leans in closer, grabs her shoulders, and kisses her passionately…the lukewarm temperature rose to fiery hot heat and consumed them in it…


"arrrrrrrrrrrrrrghhh" the loud scream jolted him out of his fantasies…he mentally chided himself for letting such…such stupid thoughts enter his mind… He realized, he had accidentally hit his arm on her ankle…so he rubbs it ever so gently… "I'm so sorry, I didn't realize.." "it's ok, but where were you lost?" He just shrugged…"So you…want to eat something?" Vidya's eyes now sparkle "You know how to cook?" He stood up and boldly said "of course I can cook" Then he mentally kicked himself, how the hell was he supposed to cook, when he had never ever switched on a stove before..? And his servants were on leave too…what a fool he was going to look in front of her…


He heads towards the kitchen when she calls out to him "Do you mind if I.." He turns towards her confused "huh?" "Do you mind if I watch you cook, cause I'm really bored, plus I would love to see you cook…" Sagar bites his lip nervously. and says "Why don't you watch television, or listen to music, here I'll switch it on for you" Vidya frowns, "I don't like watching television, plus I want to see you cook.."

Sagar purses his lips with a slight tinge of anger and frustration…"You can't watch me cook. I I mean...you will put stress on your ankle if you walk around.." "But all I will do is watch you, I can sit and do that too right? Sagar shoved his hands in his pockets, and sourly said "fine" He then walked back towards the sofa and attempts to lift her but Vidya resists.. "I will manage on my own, don't worry" Sagar ignores her, and once again is about to lift her, when she pushes him back…"No I will walk on my own.."


Sagar stands up straight and shrugs.. "You're so stubborn.." Vidya ignores him, and tries to get up on her own, but the pain in her ankle soars tremendously...She desperately tries to disguise her pain in vain, because to her disadvantage her face was as transparent as water.. which Sagar had noticed...without further a do, he ignores her protests, and lifts her up in his arms...her delicate figure fitting perfectly in his arms... He carries her to the kitchen, and seats her on a coffee brown chair...


Sagar nervously begins looking for stuff, he opens three cupboards before he finds a pot, and places it on the counter…He once again mentally pinches himself, and tried to shut out his taunting, sour and bitter inner voice…Vidya watches him in amusement as he unsuccessfully tries to figure out how to make roti…

Vidya clears her throat loudly to get his attention…He merely looks at her… "If you don't know how to cook, why didn't you say it before?" Sagar confidently stammers "I..I know how to cook, it's just, these servants put things in the wrong places, that's why I can't find things.." "Oh really, then you know how to cook? So why in half hour have you not succeeded in making roti?" Sagar then unwillingly nods his head "I don't know how to cook" Vidya bursts out laughing, her melodious laugh rings in Sagar's ears… Sagar's frown deepens and the color of his cheeks turn a deep shade of red, he had never felt so embarrassed before, that too in front of a girl…He had been with so many girls, been friends with some, and boyfriends to some, but he had never, he repeated to himself, never felt so so…low in front of a girl…

Vidya abruptly held back her laughter, and squeezes her lips together, wishing she had never laughed at him…she mentally kicked herself for making fun of him, as she watched him look at her sourly…"Hey, you don't have to be embarrassed, not everyone in this world knows how to cook…I will guide you through the cooking don't worry" Sagar's mood lightens at the pure sweetness of her voice…

To Be Continued...

Preview: I know I said that kkhh scene will come in this part, but once I started writing, I realized, how long it would be, so that part will come in part ten!Sagar is afraid of making a fool of himself in front of Vidya, and is really nervous... Someone pops up at midnight at Vidya's bedroom window...ala kkhh style...aah the kkhh fever has still not evaporated from my system...Hopefully this part will display more intensity and passion..

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ammmu

Oohh, majama chu ! I know that one too... and "maru naam Ammu che"😛 hailaaa you know more Hindi ? aww... yap, it's mainly Hindi and Tamil for me... bits of others😃

Thanks so much😳 !! yap, eggjactly, i love to read such different fanfictions because i get to see everyone else's insight, which is cho interesting..!! in fact, i would have never known because i didn't start reading FFs until i came here.... so am very lucky !! yap, until IF and chatting came along i was not a great typer😆

haila you know some gujju!👏😛 it's not like I speak hindi, but it's just that I usually interact in English, and then I watch hindi serials no gujju ones, so in that way my hindi is better...

So true it's wonderful to read other's fan fictions and to gain insight on their perceptions and lengths of their imaginations!

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: CherryPrincess

ya so let me go by the writer's words and forget about exploring dictionary; hopefully it wud follow up soon as u say!!!!!! 😛 now to tell u the truth, though i studied in gujju, in childhood i used to have a lot scattered reading but no proper novel. i started reading novels in english, but they seemed nth to me when i read "Patan ni Prabhuta" and "Gujarat no Nath" before 1 year(i too love romance and these books have plenty of that😳) I admit I might be biased, may be i have grown up with too much of gujju language......... but believe me if u can try reading these books some day and i guarantee u, u wud also say the same words! 😛omg, I feel as if i have been paid to promote these novels 😆

U r perfectly right!!!!!!!!!! Infact when i want to relax, I go ahead and write sth (though till now haven't gone beyond writing detailed emails to friends or writing some stupid blog) It's ultimate joy!!!!!!! 😳

btw let me introduce myself too. I am Lajja, doing MS in finance.

forgot to ask; my memory is bit weak.......... i can't exactly recall the scene u r mentioning from KKHH. as usual wud be waiting for ur sweet next thrilling and romantic episode.😕

really are those books that influential/wonderful? I would love to read them then someday! I love your name Lajja! Truly beautiful! The scene I'm talking about in KKHH is when SRK climbs up a ladder late at night and enters Rani's room...😳

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

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Posted: 18 years ago
So many gujjus!! Haha...great to see!

OMG Soni, could totally imagine all of that. I can just visualise Saagar falling for Vidya, their faces are so clear to me!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaurie

i'm not gujju 😭 but my aunt is (if that counts, but not really...) and so is my boyfriend 😃 though he's basically whitewashed and can't speak it 😆

aww...it's okay if you're not gujju! I vow to speak in hindi or english!

rushvi - haila you're gujju too?

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago

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