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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
hi!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!
SD will meet pretty soon. We will try to
update asap!!!!! Thanks once again

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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: kiran_yashika2

hi!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!
SD will meet pretty soon. We will try to
update asap!!!!! Thanks once again

you're welcome hun!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
When are you guys updating?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: svforever

When are you guys updating?

sorry radika it's all because of my stupid teacher
he keeps giving us projects i have 4 projects
i 'll try soon
sorry!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

sorry radika it's all because of my stupid teacher
he keeps giving us projects i have 4 projects
i 'll try soon
sorry!!

I hate it when that happens! Anyways, hope that you get 100/100 on all of the projects! Good luck! And Continue when you can! Bye, luv ya!
Radika😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
Ya sorry. Kiran didn't have time to do it fast.
We will update soon. I just sent kiran the part that i
Edited!!!!!!!!!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47

Dosti Hain Ya Aur Kuch

(Part Four)

Note: Sorry guys I was really busy so I couldn't do the part quickly

Divya: Where are we!!!!

Neira: I don't know

Anusha: Will you ever listen to me, go left

Neira: But the map says that goes out to the field

Anusha: Just listen to me

Divya: I'm going with Anusha, she knows this place better than us

Neira: Fine! *blows hair our of face*

Anusha: Then come

They reach the Cafeteria

Divya: Anusha, you were right!

Neira: Yeah yeah you were right and I was wrong, big deal, a fisherman drowned*annoyed*

Anusha: Don't worry Neira I won't rub it in your face, come on let's eat

After Eating

Divya: I'm stuffed

Neira: Let's go home, We will come later to explore around more.

It's going to take some time this college is huge!!!!

They go to their dorm and after resting….

Neira: Come on Divu, let's go flirt

Divya: I don't want to go and where did this Divu come from?

Neira: It's your new nickname. Whenever you don't listen and be rude, I will call you Divu, to get you annoyed!! Now come on.

Divya: (she keeps trying to change the subject but neria won't give in)First my name's Divyanka, then it turns into Divya, then you start calling me Divs and now this. What is going on?

Neira: It's not my fault your name Divyanka and there is so many nicknames for you. Like my name, it's short, simple, and creative, and you can't really make a nickname with it.

Divya: Stop making fun of my name!! *gives an angry look*

Neira: Too bad darling! *laughs*

Neira: Anyways, we have to go, so come!

Divya: I guess my plan didn't work. *while Neira stared at Divya with glowing fiery eyes*

Divya: I gotta use the washroom!! *running to the washroom*

Neira: No you aren't, liar *her expression saying don't even try*

Divya's Thoughts: Oh oh I'm caught better agree

Divya: Ok! Neira let's go

Meanwhile…

Sameer: Please bhaiya, don't beat me!!!!!

Running out of dorm

He bumps into…

Anusha: Ahhhhhhhhhhhh *gets up* Oye! Mundiya, look where you are going!

Sameer: Sorry! *turns around and runs*

Sharad: Come back!

Anusha: Acha, this guy is running for his life, typical guy life *shrugs her shoulder and moves on*

Neira and Divya walk out of the dorm and sees…

(Bumps into both Neira and Divyanka)

Sameer: Ugghhh! Do I have to keep bumping into someone!

Neira: Are you blind? or do you need glasses anyways you are not supposed to run in the halls

Sameer: Huh?

Neira looks up to see who it is and finds out its Sameer

Neira: I mean nice clothes!!

Sameer: Okkkkk sorry, got to go

Neira: (whispers to Divya after he leaves) how can he not like me!!!!

Divya: *shrugs shoulder* His choice, you probably aren't his type

Neira: Shut up Divu!!

Divya: here we go again

Neira: Uff

Sharad: Sorry, did you see Sameer?

Neira: Yeah he went this way

Sharad ran in that direction

Neira: Let's go and see the kichari that is cooking!

Divya *sighs because she knows Neira won't take no as an answer* Ok

They see Sameer pleading someone to stop and forgive him??

Neira: Yo what's happening, are you alright Sameer! *rushing to him*

Sharad: Next time don't leave me alone here again!

Sameer: Yes bhaiya, I won't

Sharad walks off

Neira: Did you see the guts of that man!!!

Divya: Yeah *tilting her head as she imagines…*

Neira: Sameer get up, Divya help me hold him straight

They go to Neira's dorm

Sameer: Ow! ow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Neira: Why did that stupid guy hit you!!!

Sameer: Because I left him to go to you, he's my best friend

Neira: Oh so people started hitting their best friends *getting sad that he got hit for helping her*

Neira: Sorry, I will do it softer (Neira is bandaging his wounds)

Sameer: Ow!!!!!!! Don't be sad, me and him fight all the time, by the way he didn't hit me hard, and we are guys, that's what we do.

(Note: now scenes will switch)

Sameer: Neira, don't worry, I know he is feeling guilty right now

Sharad's dorm

Sharad: I shouldn't have hit Sameer, I should go apologize

Back to Neira's dorm

Sameer: Watch he's going to come and apologize

Sharad goes to find Sameer

He thinks again

Sharad: I'll just call him

Sharad calls Sameer on his cell phone

Ring ring ring ring

Sameer picks up

Sameer: Hello

Yashika just pick up from here in your part. I won't be able to do any further for now!

Please criticize and I know it was boring

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ATB reserved !

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Haiiii Gullbadan, finally you update !! We have been waiting soooo long. Anyways, it was the worth the waiting !
Great update hun, I really liked it 😊 Liken I have a question ... Hmm well not a question more of a thought/idea about where this is leading. I wonder if I'm right 😳 Hmm I think I'll just wait and see !
Great job once again, and please do update more often !

I guess it's your turn, yashika 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: svforever

I hate it when that happens! Anyways, hope that you get 100/100 on all of the projects! Good luck! And Continue when you can! Bye, luv ya!
Radika😊


i hope so, thanks for the cheering me up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

ATB reserved !

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Haiiii Gullbadan, finally you update !! We have been waiting soooo long. Anyways, it was the worth the waiting !i think it sucked, i didn't want to drag it
the new ff i'm making won't drag i even wrote it and read it 100 times

Great update hun, I really liked it 😊 Liken I have a question ... Hmm well not a question more of a thought/idea about where this is leading. I wonder if I'm right 😳 Hmm I think I'll just wait and see !
Great job once again, and please do update more often !sorry tina for taking long it was all my fault, yashika was practically yelling at me to send her the part!

I guess it's your turn, yashika 😊

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