FF-Dosti Hain ya Aur Kuch~-Part12/Pg18/Sept.2-~ - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i was waitingfor ur update since nearly a month but never mind, and this was fab, looking forward to see how SD becomes friend and then lovers....hopefully,...........i understand what you mean like 4 project that a lot, wish u luck....

and if u can or poss continuee soon.
thanks for updating.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hot chilly

i was waitingfor ur update since nearly a month but never mind, and this was fab, looking forward to see how SD becomes friend and then lovers....hopefully,...........i understand what you mean like 4 project that a lot, wish u luck....

and if u can or poss continuee soon.
thanks for updating.....


don't worry yashika is doing the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Kiran and Yashika I just finished reading the parts...I really like it...keep up the gud work!!!😃 can't wait to see what happens next....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
Hey Kiran !
Fantastic update...
Sharad is cho chweetttt....😊😊😊 Such a sweet nature he has....
I loved the update !
Hmmm.... and the ending was superb...😉😉😉
Very Nice Update !
Thanks a lot !!😊
You both are doing a great Job !
Vidya😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
thank you guys so much!!!!
I am doing the part 5 right now!!!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HI KIRAN!!!!
LOVE THE UPDT!!
SPECIALLY THE END!!
BOTH ARE DOING GREAT JOB!!!
CONT SOON WHEN AS POSSIBLE!!!
SEE U SOON!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
yeah *nodding head*
i don't think it's that good
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Wow wonderful ff. Can't wait until u guyz update again!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
Sharad= Kanjoos ? 🤣

Hehehe, great update Kiran .. or maybe this was yashikas update? Hmm anyways it was lovely dear !

Continue soon .. Hmm Divya in online dating, I wonder who will be "her guy" ? 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dosti Hain Ya Aur Kuch

(Part 5 )

Sameer: Hello

Sharad: ummm'..

Hi, It's me Sharad'. look Sameer I'm sorry I didn't mean to hit you

Sameer: ya I'm sorry it's my fault not yours, I left--

(Neira interrupted him)

Neira: Who is it Sameer?

Sameer: Oh it's Sharad, you know my friend

Neira: Oh him',that kanjoos, let me talk to him

She grabs the phone from him and starts talking to him

Neira: Hey what's wrong with you man?

Neira: Koi tareka ha apna dost ko marina, idiot, kahein ka! *blows hair off her face*

Sharad: Hello, who is this Sameer?


Neira: This is Neira, Sameer's friend after you left him I helped him *she looks angry*

Sameer: No Neira he called to apologize!! Can you give me the phone back now? (After all it is his cell phone)

Neira who was talking so loud didn't hear him

For another 4 minutes pass by, Neira keeps on talking and talking and saying stuff getting everyone bored until Sharad interrupts

Sharad: Look thank you for helping him Neiraji

You are a very kind lady. I called to apologize for what I did. It was my fault but he did leave me!!!!

Neira: (admiring what he said)

Neira thinking in her head: Neiraji, He's not bad.

Neira: Oh my bad, sorry in that case it's okay


Sameer: Wait tell him we are cool


Neira: Oh well bye oh and by the way Sameer said we are cool, well not me and you, you and him, but it's not like we don't like each other but never mind!! Bye nice talking to you!! ( cuts the phone)

Sharad: I wonder what he's doing with that girl''

Neira: Sorry Sameer


Sameer: it's okay, but next time don't


Sameer: I have to go now (at least take back your cell phone!!!)

Next scene

Its morning, all characters classes don't start until 2 more days because they have to get settled in and get ready for classes to start.

Divya get's up and heads to the washrooms

There she see's the devil her self, the one and only Nickkie

Divya: Great here comes the drama

Nickkie see's her and bumps into her on purpose'..

Divya: hey watch where you're going

Nickkie: Oh sorry


Nickkie: Wait is that you Divya

Nickkie: Never mind I take back my sorry

Divya: Oh ya Nickkie (she has a angry look on her face)

Nickkie: Wow poor girl has to walk to the in the halls in her pjs

Divya: I was going to the washroom


Divya: So where's Kajol, let me guess she finally figured out your not worth her time (rolling her eyes at her)

Anusha come out of no where

Anusha: Hey Divya

Divya: Hey, where did you come from?

Anusha: Just going to the washroom


Anusha: Who's that?

Divya: You wouldn't want to know

Nickkie: Oh please, I am Nickkie


Anusha: I'm Anusha

Nickkie: I heard that you are sharing a dorm with Divya & Neira, To bad you didn't get paired up with us

Anusha: Divya & Neira are nice, i'm happy to share a dorm with them

Divya: Anusha let's go


Anusha: Why?


Divya: Just come

Anusha: what's your problem? She seemed nice

Divya: That's Nickkie, you don't want to know her, ever since we were kids we hated each other.

Anusha: Hate is a harsh word, don't you think


Divya: Trust me. Just stay away from her

Anusha: Tell me the story


Divya: I don't have time


Anusha: Pretty please with a cherry on top

Divya: Okay fine but later

What happens next

Divya, Neira, Anusha get ready and are back in their dorms

Divya: Wow the second day at college

Neira: Ya it's soo much fun

Divya: Ya your probably saying that cuz of Sameer * says in a sarcastic way*

Neira: Divya, I am going to kill you


Anusha: Who's Sameer?

Neira: No one


Divya: He is Neira's special friend

Anusha: what do you mean (she says it on purpose although she knows what Divya means)

Divya: Neira likes him


Neira: No I don't!!!!!!!

Divya and Anusha laughed so hard they started crying

Neira tries to changes the topic, but just goes on the laptop

Neira: Hey guys come check this out

Anusha: What

Neira: Come here na

They come closer to see what see was talking about

Neira: Divya remember the day when we were going to leave for college

Divya: Ya what about it


Anusha: What

Neira: I told you that there is a online dating site were you can meet people

Neira: This is the site, its complete safe, only for students that go here. Why don't you guys sign up and meet guys.

Divya: Neira you know I like meeting guys the old fashion way.

Anusha: I think it's cool. Why don't you sign up for it Divya

Divya: I don't know


Neira: Come let will be fun.

Anusha: What's the site


Neira: www.ncbonline.com (not real website)

Divya: Hey guys want to go to this place I think it's a restaurant they sell all tapes of food kind of like a international place to eat. Want to go?

Anusha: Sure I'm hungry

They get up and get their stuff and were about to leave but Neira was still there sitting.

Anusha: Neira are you coming?

Neira: You guys go I will catch up

Divya: We can wait

Neira: No it's okay. You guys go


Divya: Are you sure?


Neira: Ya

Anusha and Divya leave

(Neira saying this to her self)

Neira: Divya I am going to sign you up. No matter what.


Neira: But I'm not going let you find out


Neira: I want you to find a guy, payback for telling Anusha everything and teasing anyways i'm doing you a favor!

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