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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks you liked it. I am updateing the other part in a minute. Thank you😉 by: yashika
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Posted: 16 years ago
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If some of you don't know

Yashika wrote the first part

and I Kiran wrote this part.

What the girls were wearing: will be posted by kiran under this update😊



Dosti Hain Ya Aur Kuch

(Part Two)

At last they reach the college

Neira and Divya just got out of the car after a long ride, After arriving Neira's dad helped them take out their luggage.

Neira: Wow!!!!!! Inta bara campus. (such a big campus)

Divya: Ya it looks even bigger then how it looked on the

brochure.

Neira: Mujhe nahein pattha (knew) tha intnan saare guys yahon hain

Divya: This time I agree with you. So many boys!!

Neira's dad: Bye divyanka beta, make sure Neira doesn't get into trouble. ( he says as he hugs them)

Neira's dad leaves

Neira: Divs come on, what are you waiting for! Quickly come so we can meet some boys!!!!!!!!

Divya: You go I'm not in the mood; I'll stay in the dorm and unpack

Neira: Ok! But get up first!

Divya: There, happy?, now go get your bags and hurry to our dorm

Neira: *eyes pops out* WHAT!!! *faints, about to fall but'*

Sameer: Gotcha, what happened to her? (asking divya) *raises his eyebrow* (did I mention it's a habit)

Divya: (thinking is her mind) Who's this dude? it hasn't even been an hour and Neira already fooling around.

Divya: Don't worry, it's nothing, I'll just--pauses--there, she's awake

Divya: Oh sorry, I'm Divya, you are?

Sameer: Oh I'm Sameer. This is my first year of college

Divya took a water bottle and poured the water on her

Neira: What the'(she sees herself in some handsome guys arms) hye! Mera dil! (she said it as if her heart was hurting)

Sameer: Kya, tum kuch ka-ha? (what, did you say something?)

Divya: Nay!, Neira didn't say anything

Neira: Yeah, what she said! (she said quickly)

Sameer: Why are you sweating?

Neira: No, it is the water divya poured on me! (giving an angry look at divya)

Neira: By the way what's your name?

Sameer: My name Sameer

Neira: I'm Neira and this is my bestest friend Divyanka.

Sameer: Nice to meet you (he says as he stares at Neira)

Neira:by the way thanks. You're my hero

Sameer: no problem

Neira straightens up

Neira: Well Divya could you help me with my stuff?

Divya: No! I'm not your servant, what was the need to bring so many suitcases anyway

Neira: Daddy!!!

Divya: He left already

Neira: Nooooooo! (she glances toward sameer who's talking to someone) *smirks*

Neira: Ahhhhhh, meri leg! Divya, somebody, help, mujhe bacho (save me)

Sameer see's her and leaps to her rescue, with some of his friends

Sameer: You carry her to her dorm, you pick the luggage up with me

The guy comes to Neira, but Neira wants sameer to pick her up so'

Neira: Sameer!, could you help me to my dorm, please

Helplessly but happy sameer goes to her and grabs her shoulder, as she quickly makes a plan

Neira: I can't walk anymore, please

Sameer nervously picks up Neira and asks her dorm room number

Neira says room 101 as she gets lost in his eyes''

Sameer: We are here (making her stand up straight)

Neira: Oh thanks, could you just help me to the bed

Sameer: Sure

Divya purposely sticks her foot out so Sameer can trip, as this happens Sameer was picking Neira up, but because of Divya Sameer falls, landing on top Neira

Neira and Sameer have a eyelock''.

Divya disturbs them and has a good laugh

Neira: Thanks (standing up)

Sameer: Anytime (didn't he notice that before Neira's leg was hurting and now????)

Neira: Bye

Sameer waits for his friends to come after putting the luggage in the dorm

After Sameer's friends leave

Divya: Neira are you okay? (faking) laga tho nahein

Neira: Divs you know I was acting

Divya: Acting for him to put your luggage away, or to get close to him?? What do you say? Huh?

Neira: Divya stop, it's nothing like that

Divya: Ok, Divya sings Ishq huaaaaaaaa while walking to the washroom (from movie Aaja Nachlele)

Neira: Hey, I'm the wet person here, I need to change

Divya: Do it after I'm done

Neira: I'll just take my clothes and change here

Neira leaves to flirt with some guys, While divya stays in the dorm

'

Neira: Bye divya I'm going

Divya: Bye

After Divya comes out, she sees a girl in purple and greenish brownish pyjami suit

Divya: hi, who are you?

Mystery girl: Hi, my name is Anusha, you are probably my dorm room partner

Divya: Hi, I'm Divya, this is room 101, what are you doing here?

Anusha: I know, this is my room too, the college didn't have enough rooms so they told me to come to this dorm

Divya: Oh sorry, want me to help you unpack?

Anusha: Sure, I'll help you too!

Scene Fades' and goes to Neira

Neira: Hey Sameer!

Sameer: Hey! Wasn't your leg wounded?

Neira: Well, ummm--------End of Part---------Part by: Kiran--

*please leave any comments and criticize for us if needed*

Edited by kiran_yashika2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
the links are:

Neira: http://www.sarijewels.com/item-large.asp?icode=SJDITIA&ct=Cotton%20Salwar%20Suits&isS=True&isC=True&abp=4

Divyanka: http://www.sarijewels.com/item-large.asp?icode=SJKRAZYA&ct=Cotton%20Salwar%20Suits&isS=True&isC=True&abp=3

Anusha: http://www.sarijewels.com/item-large.asp?icode=SJCHANCHL&ct=Cotton%20Salwar%20Suits&isS=True&isC=True&abp=2


they wouldn't let her post the links because of the account being a newbie

and sorry it was updated yesterday but i couldn't change the title

Edited by kirancanada1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
Oh Wow !
Great job done yet again Kiran !
Loved the update!
Neira is so funny...
Great going !
👏
Vidya👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Vidyaa

Oh Wow !

Great job done yet again Kiran !
Loved the update!
Neira is so funny...
Great going !
👏
Vidya👏



Thanks, you read it so quickly!
i'm like that fast? but how
anyway it's up to yashika to do the next part
i thinks that to continue it won't be hard but yes ji it will be😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: kirancanada1



Thanks, you read it so quickly!
i'm like that fast? but how
anyway it's up to yashika to do the next part
i thinks that to continue it won't be hard but yes ji it will be😆

Well, I'm a expert in reading FFs..😛😛
Continue when you guys have time.
Vidya😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Vidyaa

Well, I'm a expert in reading FFs..😛😛
Continue when you guys have time.
Vidya😊


k
i'll tell yashika to hurry up quickly
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
Great update Kiran.....the story is developing nicely...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lexie

Great update Kiran.....the story is developing nicely...


thanks😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Dosti Hain Ya Aur Kuch

(Part Three)

Recap: Neira faints, Sameer catches her. Divya meets Anusha, Sameer and Neira meet again.

Sameer: Wasn't your leg hurting before?

Neira: Um ummm ya it stopped hurting

Sameer: So quickly? *raises eyebrow*

Neira: Well see, I'm sorry

Sameer: For what?

Neira: Umm woh mein ne jote bola tha, meri leg nahein hurt kare rahe thi (Um well, I lied my leg didn't hurt/sprain)

Neira: I'm so sorry

Neira: I just wanted someone to carry my suitcases (And secretly I have other reasons too!!)

Sameer: I knew it from the beginning (as he smiles)

Neira: What!!!!!!! (I hope he doesn't know the other reason!!)

Sameer: well mujia lagga tha tum budoo banare te, so I thought so why don't I play along

Neira: Neira starts laughing and says I guess you fooled me (and I thought I did)

Sameer: Did you know you are cute?

Neira: (Neira doesn't hear him) Did you say something?

Sameer: Huh?, no I said nothing (as he smiles)

On the other hand

Sharad is so confused, He reached college but had no idea what to do or go! Sameer just ran and left me. Sharad takes out his cell phone and calls Sameer

*Sameer's Voicemail picks up*

Sameers Voicemail: Hi this is Sameer, please leave a message as I am not available right now

Sharad: Sameer this is Sharad, call me back ASAP!!

Sharad: It's his voice mail great!!!, He cuts the phone.

Sharad: Now I am totally lost, how will I find my dorm? Woh Sameer ka bacha mein bach deko ga (I'll deal with that Sameer kid later)

Sharad: Maybe I'll ask someone for help.

Next scene

Anusha forced Divya into going outside to hang out on campus.

Divya agreed but she wanted to find Neira before she gets into any more mischief!!

Divya was trying to find out where Neira is

Divya: Did you find her?

Anusha: How could I? I don't even know how she looks like

Divya: Well that is true.

Divya: Just look for a girl wearing a Black frock suit, she is about my height, and has blackish, brownish hair.


Divyanka starting talking about all the trouble Neira and her get into.

Divya: Just this morning she faints, and lies about her leg just to get attention from some dude!

As Divya continues on, Anusha thinks she has spotted Neira and calls Divya but Divya keeps on talking

Anusha: (yells) Divya!!!!!!

Divya: Oh ya sorry

Anusha: I think I see Neira

Divya looks at Anusha direction and see Neira

There was a teacher standing in front of Neira now

Divya: (looking at the teacher) Are you sure that's her? I know that you never saw her before, but that's a man and I said she was a girl

Anusha: What? (she looks again but she still sees Neira)

Anusha: Are you sure? I think that's her over there

Anusha: Wait who are you looking at?

Divya: That teacher

Anusha: (she starts laguhing) That's not who I was talking about

Anusha: Look over there

Divya: ok (looks at that direction) ohhh, silly me! (laughs at herself silently)

Divya: Yup that's Neira

Divya: Come, let's go there

They walked towards Neira

Divya: Hey Neira I want to introduce you to someone

Neira: Oh hey, who's that behind you?

Neira: (whisper's in Divya's ear) Divya I think she's a stocker, I watched this happening in a movie!!!!

Divya: Neira no, this is our new dorm room partner Anusha

Neira: Opps sorry, you know me, well in this case you don't

Anusha: It's okay (although she never heard)

Anusha: Hi, I'm Anusha

Neira: Hey, I'm Neira

Divya: Come on guys, if we want to explore more we have to start now, we don't have much time, this college is really big and we only got a day!

Neira: Let's visit the Cafeteria so we can eat some food and see it!!

Part by: Yashika😊

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