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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWW SAKI HEHEHHE
CONT FRM UR PART


DM N SANTU STARE AT EACHOTHER N SANTU
LOOK AT HIS EYES


DEY WERE DEEP N BROWN MAKING HER LOST


DM WAS ADMIRING HER EYES
HER EYES WERE SO PURE BLACK LYK DOVE


DEY WERE JUST LYK WONDOW 2 HER SOUL
DM HAND MOVES ON HER HAND WEN SANTU


MOVES HER HAND AWAY N GLASS PIECE HURTS HER HAND


S:AAHH........N TEARS WELL UP HER EYES
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: priyankapatwa

AWW SAKI HEHEHHE
CONT FRM UR PART


DM N SANTU STARE AT EACHOTHER N SANTU
LOOK AT HIS EYES


DEY WERE DEEP N BROWN MAKING HER LOST


DM WAS ADMIRING HER EYES
HER EYES WERE SO PURE BLACK LYK DOVE


DEY WERE JUST LYK WONDOW 2 HER SOUL
DM HAND MOVES ON HER HAND WEN SANTU


MOVES HER HAND AWAY N GLASS PIECE HURTS HER HAND


S:AAHH........N TEARS WELL UP HER EYES


It was beautifulll preee... Auesome :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
This is the continuation from Nidhi's part :

They both sit and then..........................................................................................
Santu is looking at the jalebi and then towards dm...
Dm seeing all dis ask her- ee santuri kem, what r u looking at me? You like jalebi na...
Santu nods her head in yes bt does not move her hand....
Dm- So comeon have it, its hot now or else it wil turn cold. Eat it fast...
Bt dis time santu moves her head in no direction, she was telling a big no to dm....
Dm asked what you dont want to eat jalebi...
Santu- who said u... I want to have it, i lovee jalebi
she said this with a huge smile.. With a naughty smile.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: luvrr

awseum priyanka n sakhsi...

hey thanx nidhi...
but where is your next ye dooriyan part????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
from priya's part...
DM is really very worried now ,,he cant take her pain...
santu is still crying..ehehehehe
DM make her sit on the bed and run towards the almira and bring first aid box from there..
DM - calm down dont cry everything ll be allrigh( in a very caring way)
tears faal down from her eyes on hs hand ,,,she cant believe that his malik cares 4 her soooooo much
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
from ushi's part...
DM can feel that naughtyness in her eyes😉😉
DM- hmmm so u want to eat it with my hands na😳😳😳???
santu- umnnn i dint say that but i think u want that na😆😆??
DM pick one jalebi and keep half in his mouth and half left outside his mouth,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKSHIGOEL

hey thanx nidhi...

but where is your next ye dooriyan part????

sorry yaar,,,my exams r coming ,,,so i m not writing now....
aftr exams,,, i will be free for arnd 2 3 months...so....i will definetely write thn...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
frm sakshi part....
dm leaves half part outside....
santu looking at dm,,,not able to get what he is tryng to do....
now,,,dm bends littlen cum near her face,,,too near...
now santu get it !!!!!
she is looking at him,,,,he already lost in her eyes....
both looking at each other...
simultaneously dm is bringing his face close to her...
his lips almost going to touch the left part of jalebi,,,whn....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
DIS IS FRM SAKIS PART


DM LOOK IN2 HER EYES


SHE HAD TEARS HE COULDNT SEE HER IN PAIN
DIS ALMOST SHOCKED HIM


DAT HE WAS FEELING SOMETHING FOR HER


SANTU FEEL MORE PAIN AS GLASS PIECE WAS HURTING HER..........


DM HOLD HER HAND IN HIS VERY GENTLY........


TAKING CARE DAT SHE DONT GET MUCH HURT

s:aaaaaaaa....eehhee......

D:SANTU..........HIS VOUICE WAS DEEP N AMAZING
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvrr

sorry yaar,,,my exams r coming ,,,so i m not writing now....

aftr exams,,, i will be free for arnd 2 3 months...so....i will definetely write thn...😊

ok i m eagerly waiting yarrr.....😳😳

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