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luvrr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

hey...u guys r doing so well....

so i coulnt stop myself.....

thought of a scene whn i slept for 5 min in lib....

this is not the continution of story going on here....

so,,want to ask,,,can i write it here???

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luvrr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

thnx anjali....

actualyy this thread is started bu ushmi...

so i think better she reply...onlt thn...

actually there r many rules on this forum....n i dont wan to brk any of them...

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IPSO_FACTO

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

hmmmm yeap but the thread is continue the story...so ushi di has asked us to cont:)

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luvrr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

thats why i m not continuing the story ongoing here...

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luvrr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

but 1 baat kahu....i cant stop myself.....

wan 2 write it down....

waise bhi its a long tym i wrote sumthing of sanraj....

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Ushma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Hi nidhi...
4 sure dear, u cn write a new part, theirs no such restriction... :-)

n if ne1 want dey cn also continue 4rm whr i left in last scene or v cn end it der itself.... Upto u guys....
:)

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prajju

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Posted: 14 years ago

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.........she uttered 'her husband' and closed her eyes.

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It's next morning!

Santu is making tea for Dm and she was still having the glimpses of her last night's dream . She said to herself,"I should now stop thinking about this , Malik must be waiting for his tea", but that smile on her face and blush on the cheeks are still there😳

In Dm's room:

" malik, I brought ur tea. "

Dm was reading the news paper at the coffee table. He looked up and said

"here , give me........and what were u doing last night? Have u lost it?"

" wh .. what malik?? What did I do?"

" Arey! I have seen it na!"

"What is that Malik"(Did he know about my dream?)

Dm by now finished his tea and handing over the cup to her , he said , " Oye Chokri You were getting drenched in the rain but still u were dancing there, weren't you?You left only when I came there..."

" Oh , u were talking about that Malik ? "

" What else did u think of?"

"its ...I thought of ... its nothing Malik and i'll GO"

Santu turned around and was leaving , She was just at the door when she heard,

" Ey Chokri!"

".....???????!!!!!!!!..."

" Today's tea is tasting so good than ever , What more did u add in this today?"

".........😳 "

As usual, She threw a smile over his questionmarked face and left, making a musical sound with her payals."

Dm to himself,"Oh why was she blushing so much? I just asked about the tea!!!!!!

Anyway, as they say, it's difficult to understand women.

Even Subhi was like this girl ,at times,......... oh why am I comparing Subhi with santu??????Now , Why are they both appearing similar to me"

He stood up and walked to the portrait of Subhi. For a second, he saw the smiling face of Santu in the portrait !!!!!! Or is it just his imagination?

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luvrr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

hey this is on the ongoing track in bandini..... sanraj in mumbai....living in a small house....n get a small job....

living happily 2ghtr....😊

evening tymmm...

santu waiting for dm....he is late of his usual tym....n santu getting worried....

n thn dm comes....

his one hand is behind....hiding sumthing.....says...santuri....

santu immediately turns....n,,,,,go fastly towards him....asking him....

where were u ....i was getting so worried.....why u got late....u knw how much i got tensed...its a new city...noone knows us....n u....

dm listening with a cute smile....

santu:::now will u say sumthing or keep looking at me....

dm...ave tu bolne ka mauka to de....

ya...i got late coz....i brought sumthing for u...

th he brings his hand forward n santu....surprisd!!!!

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priyankapatwa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

dis is cont frm ush's part

dm was so lost in seeing d potrait dat was showing santus image instead of subhi's

was it dat santu was taking subhi's place dm was thinking.......

is it dat lyk every1 has accpeted santu even he should?

he children were considering her as der maa......his baa n bapuji as der daughter

only he was 1 who was behind every1......even he need 2 take dis relation futher

dm was busy thinking dat he didnt notice her standing at d door.............she was lost in seeing him smiling