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Posted: 14 years ago
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okksss... so i am continuing from where nidhi left :

he brings his hand forward n santu....surprisd!!!!
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DM had a big smile on his face... he was watching santu's face.... to see her reaction..
their was something rolled in 2 big leaves.... and then it was tied...
Santu saw it..... she saw small mogra flowers were coming out of the leaves...
She took it in her hand... n smiled seeing it..😳
yes... DM brought GAJRA for his pyari santuri......
she saw his face... it was shining.... he wanted to know hw she thought the gift was...
he was curious...excited.... just like a small 7 yrs boy
She raised her head.... n looking deep into his eyes said.....
Its beautifullll.........
But den She again gave the GAJRA in DM hand....
DM was shocked.... he thought she liked it... then y is she giving it to me...
is it that........ his thoughts came to a pause when she slowly turned.... nw hr back was facing DM
santu slightly turned hr face... . their was a small smile on her lips... her eyes were looking at the ground...😳
she softly uttered.....................



Edited by ushmi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: love2211

okk from priya part

she lost look at his smile he is just what she is dreaming whole her life of
her lover her malik .............he take her breath her peace her comfort
and here she begin to walk toward him her payal music make him turn look at her
she there standing with her innoccent her beauty and her shyness
S: malikk
DM: come and close door behing u
she do that and he the one who walk to her saying
DM: for once ..................dm moveing his hand on her hair
as she stand faceing door
DM: for once ...........u come to stay in whole
she she not understand .................and





sara di plsss... u write the next part also....... you certainly hav a concept would love if u write next one also...

bt if ne 1 else is int. in continuing it... even they r welcome...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvrr

hey this is on the ongoing track in bandini..... sanraj in mumbai....living in a small house....n get a small job....

living happily 2ghtr....😊
evening tymmm...
santu waiting for dm....he is late of his usual tym....n santu getting worried....
n thn dm comes....
his one hand is behind....hiding sumthing.....says...santuri....
santu immediately turns....n,,,,,go fastly towards him....asking him....
where were u ....i was getting so worried.....why u got late....u knw how much i got tensed...its a new city...noone knows us....n u....
dm listening with a cute smile....
santu:::now will u say sumthing or keep looking at me....
dm...ave tu bolne ka mauka to de....
ya...i got late coz....i brought sumthing for u...
th he brings his hand forward n santu....surprisd!!!!

what i thought....
santu surprised....
dm smiles to see smile on her face....
santu looking at dm who is holding plate made of leaves havng.....
santu...""JALEBII"".......
DM ...ya jalebi...whn i was on my way,,,i saw one man making it..so thought of taking it for u...u lyk it naa so i brought for u.....
sanraj looks at each other.....((backgrnd sanraj music)))
dm::ave obe obe mara mude su juaiue che?????....u will keep looking at it or eat it also.....
santu just nodds in yes....
they both sit...n thn....
sorry for the gujrati lines...dont knw the words exactly...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
USH.......NIDHI AWESOME


SARA YUP U CONT D PART :P N DEN SOME1 ELSE WILL........WAT DM WANTS 2 SAY HHEHEHEHHE
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
DIS IS CONT FRM USH PARTS


SANTU GIVE HIM A SMALL SMILES
N SOFTLY SAYS


S:MALIK........PUT IT


DM SMILES N WAS HAPPY DAT SHE LUVED IT SO MUCH..............


DM HAND RAISES N SLIDES HER PALLU
DOWN FRM HER HEAD.......


HIS FINGURE TOUCHES HER BARE SKIN


SHE CLOSES HER EYES.......AS DM MOVES HIS FINGURE


ON HER BARE BCK.........


FOR SOMETYMS SOFTLY.........DM MOVES ABIT FORWARD


MAKING HIS CHEST TOUCH HER BCK


DM HAND MOVES ON HER ARMS........


SANTU SHUTS HER EYES TIGHT


DM PUTS D GAJARA ON HER HAIR.........N SLOWLY


BRINGS HIS LIPS NEAR HER EARS


D:U LOOK BEAUTIFUL........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
okk from priya part
she lost look at his smile he is just what she is dreaming whole her life of
her lover her malik .............he take her breath her peace her comfort
and here she begin to walk toward him her payal music make him turn look at her
she there standing with her innoccent her beauty and her shyness
S: malikk
DM: come and close door behing u
she do that and he the one who walk to her saying
DM: for once ..................dm moveing his hand on her hair
as she stand faceing door
DM: for once ...........u come to stay in whole
she she not understand .................and
this conttt
and he kissed her neck in softly way
s: malikk what u do ?
as she closing her eyes
dm: i mean ........as he turn her to faceing him
..as he continue
i mean this...............and softely slowly
he come closer to her his lips touch her lips in softly way
she sigh
s:ahhhhhhhhhh.........malikkkkkkk
dm just make her lie on door kissing her more and more
she surprised and shivering
and happpy she happy


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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
this one is awesome saara......................😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
OMG HOT HOT SARA HEHEHHE


BUT SOON DM REALIZES HE WAS DREAMING


HE WAS SHOCK N SURPRISED FRM HIMSELF OF HE DREAMING ABT HER


AS IF HE WANTED HER CLOSE 2 HIM IN BW HIS ARMS........WANTED 2 CONFORT HER


MAKE HER FEEL PROTECTIVE N LUV.......


S:MALIKK......


DM COMESOUT OF HIS THOUGHT........YES.......


S:BREAKFAST IS READY


DM WANTED 2 SPEND SOME TYM ALONE WITH HER


D:BRING IT IN MY ROOM........SANTU SMILES N LEAVE FRM DER.......


N DM EYES WERE STUCK ON HER 2 COME BCK
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
U guyz r doing a grt work....it make all bandini fans go crazy....
plz cont ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awesome parts guys👏👏👏
now from priya's part.......
DM thinking oh wy i m so depend on her these days???
oh why i want to spend time with her??why?why?
santu- malik....malik...
DM back to his senses..wo santudiiiii i was just saying that....,,,
santu- malik u called me by my name 4 the frst time
SANRAJ EYELOCK😉😉
SUDDENLY GLASS FROM SANTU HAND FALL DOWN
both back to their senses and bend down to pick it up and their heads bang in to eachother thn a MAGICAL EYELOCL AGAIN,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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