R v creative..... Continue d story...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys.... Came up vid d old idea of writing a phrase or can even b a line or just a word (senseful) n d rest member will continue 4rm whr d last membr left.....
For eg: i am taking d scene whn dm agreed 4 khemi's marriage vid his worker just 4 d happiness of santu...
So i am starting vid:

he agreed for d marriage of khemi n his worker jst for santu... He was happy bcoz she was happy n dat 2 bcoz of his decision... He watched his wife enjoying d rain from d corner of his window...
When she saw him... She saw him staring her.... Hope u guzs wil continue d scene

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here is my share of imagination,

'.... She saw him staring at her which was indeed very new to her. She never saw him like that earlier. She has a mixed expression on her face , that of surprise, confusion,delight as well as fright the reasons for which probably she too was unaware of!! .......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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here's d continuation: 😊

she thought (is he looking at me.. or sumone else...
but no..... its only me here... it means he is watching me....
oh god!
whts happining to me??...
why am i feeling so excited??so nervous??
so so... so happy???.....
y? y? y?)

she again looked up from the corner of her eyes.....
he was still looking at her... she immediately lowered her eyes as a reflex action.

Edited by ushmi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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He decided to join her in the rain, but when he left the window dejected thinking that the moment they had meant nothing to him.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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but still her payal sounds makes him restless and he want to see her only her...hehe..
ihope u like my part ushi..lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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....the sound of the payal is making him restless and , and then finally he could not resist but walk down to her.

Santo , she was dancing around , in the rain . ...splashing the water with her feet. When she turned around she found her Maalik ,standing still, over there in the rain with his gaze fixed on her...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKSHIGOEL

but still her payal sounds makes him restless and he want to see her only her...hehe..

ihope u like my part ushi..lol


its beautifullllllllllllllllllllll saki.... muahaaaa👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so here is from me....

his gaze fixed on her.........
She was shoked to see him, she immediately lowered her eyes..... bt den agn looked up... towrds him....... n gave him a small smil
e
she den turned to leave the place... but stopped with d hope he would call her.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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and when she about to leave....

DM - ey chookri.....

santu is like OMG is i m dreaming or what😳😕

santu slowly turned arround and
santu- ji malik...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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when it comes to sanraj how can i be not here😆

santu slowly turns around....

while turning her heart was racing fast....
deep inside her were some feelings flowing...
the feelings she herself was unaware of...
the feelings she wasnt able to understand...

santu to herself- whats happening to me...
y....y am i so....

santu was looking down....
she could never meet his gaze...
coz he was maalik...
but that moment it wasnt that....
that moment something else was making her shy😳

dm-aye chokri.....wh......he was about to continue when

santu manages to look at him.....their eyes meet.....

SANRAJ lost in each others eyes......

dm-wo........
dm unable to speak he was lost in her eyes...
in her look,,..
her innocence....

🤣 i think mene kuch zyada hi bada chada l likh daya😆 hope its ok ushi di:p
Edited by Anjali.smiley - 14 years ago

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