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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwww loved
this my try\
when dm sayDM: ayi chokri ................what u doing under rain u will be sick come come
santo walk toward him her payal make him restless and his heart beat in crazy as her also
as she walk toward him her breath become sssooooo diffecult
and now she is in front him wet drops of water falling down make other music dancing in his heart
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😆my turn😆
awesome choco😃


she now stands so close to him.....
santu-malik....wo....i....was....just....

dm-ha i know you lve getting wet in rain....but how long will u do this....what if u fall sick

some of santu's hair fall on her face...
she was still looking down
santu starts removing them from her face making dm more lost😛😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continued from Anju's part ... 😉
some of santu's hair fall on her face...
she was still looking down
santu starts removing them from her face making dm more lost😛😆
santu embarrassed tries to move all her loose hair away from her face
one tiny strand flys out of her hand and gets still stuck on her lip
DM observing without taking away his eyes, reaches over and takes hold of the wet strand between his fingers and whilst doing so his finger lightly and gently touches Santu's lip
electric shoots through them both
Santu's not felt this before and so close to her looks up into her Malik's eyes which are fixated on her and both just freeze time stands still
and just as the rain begins to come down harder and colder, Santu jumps forward and bumps into DM nearly tripping landing right into his muscular arms which caught her..... 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shahara3

Continued from Anju's part ... 😉
some of santu's hair fall on her face...
she was still looking down
santu starts removing them from her face making dm more lost😛😆
santu embarrassed tries to move all her loose hair away from her face
one tiny strand flys out of her hand and gets still stuck on her lip
DM observing without taking away his eyes, reaches over and takes hold of the wet strand between his fingers and whilst doing so his finger lightly and gently touches Santu's lip
electric shoots through them both
Santu's not felt this before and so close to her looks up into her Malik's eyes which are fixated on her and both just freeze time stands still
and just as the rain begins to come down harder and colder, Santu jumps forward and bumps into DM nearly tripping landing right into his muscular arms which caught her..... 😍



omg shah di u rock⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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she bumps into his arms......
he holds her.....
and she grips her hands on his arms........
dm slowly brings her back making her stand by herself again....
again both trapped into each others eyes....😳
they were standing close their bodies almost touching....
and holding each other.....
both trying to figure out the meaning of that unknown feeling that was overcoming them....
santu feels little cold due to rain....she shivers and she comes foward...
making her body toch his...😳

😆plzzz cont😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OK Anji😊

Suddenly they hear a KRACK, some noise....
Santu scared. She grabbed DM's body with tight hug, like she was trying to hide her self in him. She bearly spoke "Malik..." with trembling voice and making her hands around his body, squeezing him tight and tighter. Her heart told him how much scared is she. Her head found place on his chests with eyes closed....that was her safe place...
DM looked around and so nothing. Small animal made a run....he smiled, put his fingers under her chin and looked in her eyes with his convincing look "there, you see nothing to be scared of just a little animal". Then he pulled a big smile under the mooch and laughed "Malkin of D-pur, malkin of all of this scared of little animal". He laugh again. Santu felt hurt of his laughing and pushed him away. Her face was all red of anger. She was so scared and HE laugh at her? She could not even speak. DM felt her anger and felt bad for his laugh. He made a step closer to her. She wanted to step back, but he put his both hands on her shoulders not letting her move. He closed him self slowly to her and whispered "now, now, you know I did not mean to hurt you, just a little laugh. And it was just that animal....if it was something else I would fight with my bear hands to protect you...you know, you are Malkin, but Malkin of my heart" as he was whispering that, his lover lips were touching her forehead. That touch made her forget everything else in a sec. She could only feel melody in his voice and the warm touch of his lips that melted her anger. Slowly her head rise up...their eyes met...he was felling her fast heart beats, but he knew that now they beat because of something else...magnetisam in their eyes was puling their faces closer and closer... the warmth of their breading was cuddling their cheeks..............


I better stop now and let somebody else to continue 😆
Edited by eli0103197 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
👏👏Fantastic, fabulous and awesome contributions from the members👏👏

Each and every one of us Sanrajians want to see Sanraj together and there is no doubt with that. But I fear we are bringing them too close ....😉 😉 and in this process we might get either stuck or get repetitive after some 5 or 10 pages and get short of the story to continue.Actually the beginner of this thread ushmi gave us a starting point that of Dm's agreement for the marriage of Khemi with Shambu some where in the episodes of second week of July 2009 at which point Sanraj had definitely love for one another but were not that close😊. I think it would be great if we gradually unfold the chemistry between them taking some good happenings from the actual story, adding our imagination to them and discarding those that we hated the most like , Arjan getting murdered,santu going to jail,the leaps, Birwa's secret that remained unrevealed to the family, Santu's abortion , Santu leaving the house after the dna report, Vishal being taken away and the most dreaded recent leap. In fact I say lets rebuild the story😊( Come on folks , lets prove that we are more creative and we are lot more better than the BT😉.)
Edited by prajju - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ PRAJJU 😆 oops we went far away...sorry
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thnk god.... Atlast possible 2 open my IF a/c aftr wha seems 2 b like eternity....
Hey thnx guys 4 d wondrful responses made..... Muahhhh :)
So.... U guys r experts in twists ri8, ne1 can continue it with d twist n continue like prajju said. Dats SLOW N STEDY.
Hehehe....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Let me continue it: 😃
magnetisam in their eyes was puling their faces closer and
closer... the warmth of their breading was cuddling their
cheeks...........
Santo slowly closed her eyes in anticipation.......
Her grip tightened on the cloth she was holding, she was breathing heavily....
Suddenly with a thunder sound she opens her eyes...
Whr was she... Oh! She was in hr room, holding the bedsheet tightly...

She thought "O god,i ws dreaming.. Still she ws breathing heavily...
Wht was i dreaming...
Me and Malikkk...

Den she thought... True i saw him staring at me 2day n he even came down bt whn i turned 2 go..
I wanted him 2 cal me bt no.. No he didn't stoped me
n later i came n i slept....

Bt... Bt wht was i dreaming...,i closed my eyes in my dream. I... I.... I wanted him to.. to... Kisss me.

First time in d 18yrs of hr life, she felt like this, she dreamed herself wid any man...
No she corrected hr self, nt ne man bt the man, the malik...
No she again corrected hrself... It was her man... her malik...her her...
A small smile crept on hr lips n she slowly uttered Her HUSBAND...n closed her eyes.

I knw its nt good as u guys bt cant help it u hav 2 bear it... I hope u guys like it
Edited by ushmi - 14 years ago

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