AnSh OS : Haven - Page 3

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

Payaliyaaa🤗

Baby writer😲...it should be "baby, you are an awesome writer"😛

beautifully written and emotions so well interwoven...brilliant⭐️

Payal...🤗

Payali ... 🤗 ... Ohhh ... Amol's fear ... 😭 .. Nd than Ansh confort nd love ... Awww so beautiful,lovely ...amol sleep peacefully with his parents ... It touch my heart ... ..happy tears ... I really wish CV shold use this .. Payali .. Again ur os .. ⭐️ .. 👏 .. Thank u so much for this .. 🤗 .. I m so sry dear ... I realise that i forgot to comment on ur last os .. .. Soe i will do that too ...

Originally posted by: Payali09

Thanks Hema! I hope I satisfied your urge for a new OS 😊

The credit for not having dialogues has to go to Uma (adi2512). I read an OS of hers recently which had bare minimum dialogue and was still so heart-stirring. Was inspired to do the same and I'm happy you picked up on it.

It's all good that the 'like' isn't working because it means you posted a comment instead 😆

Originally posted by: adi2512

Payal...🤗

Feels, GREAT my story had been an inspiration for you, to create this beautiful piece...😳😃

This is so very beautiful...Payal..

Me myself, was thinking on lines of writing something on these lines of AnSh offering their love, warmth and comfort to Amol, in one of those moments, where he would be utterly scared and defenseless...those middle of the night moments...

Could not have written more beautifully than this..😳

Thank you once again, for including my name in this work of yours...am' overwhelmed...😳😃

Originally posted by: Mithi_vani

Payali ... 🤗 ... Ohhh ... Amol's fear ... 😭 .. Nd than Ansh confort nd love ... Awww so beautiful,lovely ...amol sleep peacefully with his parents ... It touch my heart ... ..happy tears ... I really wish CV shold use this .. Payali .. Again ur os .. ⭐️ .. 👏 .. Thank u so much for this .. 🤗 .. I m so sry dear ... I realise that i forgot to comment on ur last os .. .. Soe i will do that too ...

Originally posted by: love.sid

nice one...

update soon

Originally posted by: Payali09

Halwaaa!!!!! 🤗

Am totally a baby writer...see below!

Thanks for the play on words. Clever clever you! 👏

I'm perfectly thrilled that you enjoyed my little story. Totally not what I thought I was going to post but that's generally what ends up happening with me most of the time 😆

Payali its so so beautiful

You made my sunday morning, you are too good with your words.couldnt describe how i felt just reading this

So touching, ansh are in their elements, their essence which is evident in amol too,

When i first heard the song , ma from taare zameen par, i felt the same way, everytime i hear the song i had tear in my eyes, while reading this i had tears, no need of words u expressed the emotions so perfectly, so like our anshmol,

Thanks for giving us this perfect treat, actually in childhood we all must have felt the same way when we were scared and our mom gives us the assurance that she is there

Originally posted by: hisusmita

Payali its so so beautiful

You made my sunday morning, you are too good with your words.couldnt describe how i felt just reading this

So touching, ansh are in their elements, their essence which is evident in amol too,

When i first heard the song , ma from taare zameen par, i felt the same way, everytime i hear the song i had tear in my eyes, while reading this i had tears, no need of words u expressed the emotions so perfectly, so like our anshmol,

Thanks for giving us this perfect treat, actually in childhood we all must have felt the same way when we were scared and our mom gives us the assurance that she is there