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MaxMayfield

@MaxMayfield

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Payaliyaaa🤗

Baby writer😲...it should be "baby, you are an awesome writer"😛

beautifully written and emotions so well interwoven...brilliant⭐️

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sushma89
payal simpy superb especially last line he slept peacefully that he was safe he was loved and he would never be alone again it touched my heart

Thanks Sushma 😊

I'm glad that it made an impact. Definitely something I wanted to achieve with the story.

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: HemaG
Oh...first Anshmol OS...great...the scene was so beautiful...first half nice...loved the 2nd half...no dialogues...only emotions...so nice...amazing work...pls do write more...and sorry like not working...

Thanks Hema! I hope I satisfied your urge for a new OS 😊

The credit for not having dialogues has to go to Uma (adi2512). I read an OS of hers recently which had bare minimum dialogue and was still so heart-stirring. Was inspired to do the same and I'm happy you picked up on it.

It's all good that the 'like' isn't working because it means you posted a comment instead 😆

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: libsrocks
Another wonderful os from you @Payal...really loved it 👏
i knew that i always have writers like you in forum when these CV don't know what to do...keep writing more such OS/FFs 😃

Thanks Libs 😊

I'll do my best to keep writing. Which shouldn't be too hard if the CVs keep churning out the half-baked things that they have been doing so far

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: maahi11
wow... dis is superb...just one thng it's alwz so good to read ur os... y r great writter...

Thanks a lot Maahi 😊

For the comment and the compliment 😳

I hope my future writings (if any) continues to make you feel the same 😛

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: blushing
Payali...

Its so very emotional...awww Amol 🤗

such brilliant writing by you dear 👏 absolutely worth reading 👍🏼

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looking forward not exactly but some how near scene like this in BV

Anandi Shiv and their bundle of Joy

Aww Aditi

Thanks for the comment. Means the world to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it...cried over it...in a good way 😛

I wish we something similar in the future but no bharosa on the CVs. Hence I wrote it instead 😆

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Theepetronauss
This is so so beautiful & heart touching... You're an AMAZING writer!

Thank you! 😊

For the comment and the compliment 😳

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: umam
Payali ⭐️

No words to describe what I felt. Just brilliant 😊

Yet to hear what Amol feels/thinks in BV - To me it felt like, you just have interpreted unspoken thoughts/words of Amol!!

and then those two sentence: She made a silent request - a request unsurprisingly that he was making as well - sums up Ansh beautifully

Thank you Gowri! 🤗

I hope I was able to capture Amol a little bit in this OS. But I feel like there is so much more to be explored regarding his character. Hopefully the other forum writers and the CVs (if they will be meherbaan on us) will do so.

As for AnSh, how could I not mention the bond they share and have always shared 😊

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: anshurg5
Payaliya,🤗

I am speechless .😭(happy tears).
Still
-The bond btw the trio and unspoken understanding of the couple were wonderful.😳

Thanks Anshu! 🤗

I'm glad you enjoyed the story and cried happy tears. Will aim for more happy tears in the near distant future 😛