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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

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sushma89

@sushma89

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

payal simpy superb especially last line he slept peacefully that he was safe he was loved and he would never be alone again it touched my heart

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HemaG

@HemaG

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Oh...first Anshmol OS...great...the scene was so beautiful...first half nice...loved the 2nd half...no dialogues...only emotions...so nice...amazing work...pls do write more...and sorry like not working...

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libsrocks

@libsrocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Another wonderful os from you @Payal...really loved it 👏

i knew that i always have writers like you in forum when these CV don't know what to do...keep writing more such OS/FFs 😃

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BeingMahiway

@maahi11

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

wow... dis is superb...just one thng it's alwz so good to read ur os... y r great writter...

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Muktchand

@Muktchand

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Payali...

Its so very emotional...awww Amol 🤗

such brilliant writing by you dear 👏 absolutely worth reading 👍🏼

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looking forward not exactly but some how near scene like this in BV

Anandi Shiv and their bundle of Joy

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-poloenigma-

@-poloenigma-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

This is so so beautiful & heart touching... You're an AMAZING writer!

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umam

@umam

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Payali ⭐️

No words to describe what I felt. Just brilliant 😊

Yet to hear what Amol feels/thinks in BV - To me it felt like, you just have interpreted unspoken thoughts/words of Amol!!

and then those two sentence: She made a silent request - a request unsurprisingly that he was making as well - sums up Ansh beautifully

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anshurg5

@anshurg5

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Payaliya,🤗

I am speechless .😭(happy tears).

Still

-The bond btw the trio and unspoken understanding of the couple were wonderful.😳

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dixie123

@dixie123

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Payaliya: Beautifully written.. Great job ! Loved it..

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