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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey guyzz...Back with the next update of this SS. Hope u guyz like it.

CHAPTER-5

Soon the wedding date was fixed and it was decided that the marriage will take place after about 45 days in a temple nearby. Anandi was in a state of shock and was not ready for marriage, but then later had to bend her knees for fulfilling her parents wish. That night was the first time when Anandi cried her heart out in the washroom, as she did not want anybody to know the pain that she was going through. Next morning as usual she started of with her daily routine of distributing newspapers. She went to suguna's house to take her cycle. Suguna already got up to get ready for her college as her college bus comes by 7 and she had to prepare for the test that day. Suguna found that Anandi had swollen eyes and on asking her the reason, Anandi replied that she is getting married to Jagya. It was a shock to Suguna and she could do nothing except hug Anandi and cry loudly. Suguna's parents were panicked on hearing the noise of her darling daughter cry and came to her and asked her the reason to which Suguna replied the fact about Anandi's marriage. Suguna's parents also were shocked on hearing this as Anandi was just 18 and was a very intelligent girl who had to suffer the worst than the worstestt in her life till date. Suguna's parents consoled suguna and Anandi both by saying that may be God has ended his period of giving tears and unhappiness to u and hence he sent Jagya as a life partner so that u can spend the rest of ur life happily with him. Suguna and Anandi were a bit convinced by her parents words. Anandi took leave of them and left for her work.

Suguna reached college and was gloomy hearing about Anandi's marriage. Shiv came to college in his bike and found that Suguna was sitting under a tree was all dull and was lost in thoughts. He went to her and tapped her brought her back from her lost thoughts and asked her the reason for her being lost. Suguna did not know what to say him coz she knew that Shiv had loved Anandi when they were in their intermediate classes, but was unsure if he still loved her. When Shiv asked her the second time, suguna could not control herself and started crying very badly. Shiv was scared as he has never seen his best friend in such a mood ever in his life. In their 15 years of friendship, suguna was always the chirpy, the bubbly girl with the positive attitude who lived life to the fullest every day. Seeing her in this state came as a shock to him. He consoled her and asked her the reason. Suguna stopped sobbing and replied that Anandi is getting married within the next 45 days. Shiv was shocked and could respond nothing. Suguna was still crying when she said the matter to Shiv and was not looking at Shiv's face.

After revealing the fact to Shiv all that suguna could feel was her hands felt cold with two drops of water. Suguna opened her eyes and looked at Shiv's face and she was shocked to see that Shiv had tears filled in his eyes. Suguna shook him up and brought him back from the lost trance. Shiv suddenly realized that he was crying and wiped his tears. Suguna asked him the reason for his tears and he just skipped that question and asked her to get up and move to the class as they were getting late for the class. Suguna was adamant on knowing it and Shiv could not hide but express his love towards Anandi to her. Suguna was shocked and also happy, but again sad and she just sank to the ground and started crying loudly. All the other students entering in the campus were shocked on seeing her cry like this. Shiv grabbed her and consoled her and asked her to control herself. They bunked the college for that day and went to a coffee shop nearby and sat there coz both were not in a stable state to attend their college for that day.

After about 20 minutes of silence Suguna broke the silence and asked him why he hid this fact from her. Shiv had no answer for that question. There was still silence for a long time, later shiv said that he loved her from the very first day he met her and was confused as it was love or infatuation. Then he said that he thought many a times to share it with her but dint had the courage to as he was scared of losing her friendship coz of this. Suguna cried bitterly for a long time. Shiv tried to console her, but was unable to coz even he was in the same state as was Suguna. Suguna then stopped crying and felt that even Shiv was equally shocked and even he needs to be consoled as he has lost his love. Suguna and Shiv were consoling and comforting each other for about the past 2 hours, but no one could succeed. Shiv then asked about Anandi's would be and his job and his family. Suguna could not control but said everything from her suffering since her childhood days until the present. Shiv could not take any more of the history of Anandi and he scolded Suguna for having hid this fact of Anandi to him.

Suguna said that he was a boy very well settled in life whose parents had a very good reputation in the society and he was handsome and also intelligent enough to b more successful in his life. She also stated that the day he expressed his feelings for Anandi to her, they were young enough to know whether it was love or infatuation and she did not want to give false hopes to either Shiv or Anandi as both were just 16 or 17 and attraction was a common factor at that age. After passing time for about God knows how long in the caf , both decided to move back to their houses. On their way Shiv said that may be Anandi's trouble in her life might come to an end with this marriage and that he is happy that she is going to settle down with a guy who loved her at her first sight. Suguna is happy on hearing this and both sent silent prayers to GOD to keep Anandi safe from all the trouble and evils in her life in the future.

Days passed by and the day of the wedding arrived. It was a very small function attended by few close relatives and few neighbors'.Shiv was aware of the venue and the time of the marriage as it was passed on to him by Suguna. He slowly sneaked into the temple and hid behind a tree to watch his first love and probably the last love of his life in this birth getting married. Shiv was happy seeing Anandi getting settled and tears of happiness ran down his cheeks and prayed God to keep her safe and healthy and to protect her from all sins and troubles.

After the wedding everyone dispersed to their respective houses and the bride and the bridegroom to Jagya's house in their car. Suguna noticed Shiv standing behind the tree and watching the whole marriage but she did not have the courage to come to him and comfort him or to support him as she herself was weak because somewhere deep below she felt that Anandi's trouble is going to get even worst.

Precap: Anandi and Jagya's SR'.

Hope u guyz have enjoyed it...Be positive with the updates as things will settle down in the best way from the 7th chapter onwards. All comments both positive and negative are wholeheartedly appreciated...Plz comment on my work...

Edited by Kurup - 12 years ago

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roberoi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Start with chapter 7 then please 😆

Nice update...although not what we would hv wished but you are the boss😎

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey guyz back with the update...

CHAPTER-6

After the wedding, the bride and the groom took leave to their new destination. Anandi was welcomed by her in laws and after all the postwedding rituals, Anandi was led to her room. Anandi was just 18, she did not have any friends except for suguna, and with whom she shared very less time, never got to discuss on topic of love, marriage, or life after marriage with anyone. The only thing that she knew was to work hard and help her family to earn their living and to study well. She was very far from the outside world. Anandi at first was shocked to see the room decorated with flowers and candles, because this was totally a new experience to her. Few of Jagya's cousins made Anandi to sit on the bed and left the room for Jagya to enter.

After about few minutes Jagya entered the room. He was so attracted to Anandi that he just wanted to pounce on her and attack her, but he controlled his emotions. He slowly went to Anandi and sat beside her and held her hand. This was the first time that a man was holding her hand and she felt a strange feeling. She did not know why but tears rolled from her eyes and the tear drops made their way to Jagya's hand. Jagya was confused and asked her the reason for the tears to which she at first replied nothing, and Jagya was short tempered and could not hold this and barked at her. Anandi was scared, yet took courage and said that she is young enough to start a marital life and that she is interested in studying and if he could permit her to study.

Jagya's anger had no control after listening to his wife's words and that too on the night of their marriage. He lifted her face with his hand and said that he will definitely allow her to study. Anandi was happy on hearing this, but the next words spoke by Jagya brought big tears in her eyes…. I will definitely allow u to study, in fact I will teach U, I will teach u how to b a perfect wife, a perfect wife on bed, a perfect wife to fulfill the husband's physical desires. Anandi was hell shocked listening to this and before she could react, Jagya pushed her on the bed making her fall on the bed hitting her head with a bang sound on the headboard, removed her jewellery harshly and ripped her clothes and then removed his clothes and fell on her and attacked her with his lips and hands as if he was a hungry lion and Anandi was his prey. He was so desperate that he did not even think that Anandi would b hurt as it is her first time and showed least patience and violently abused her physically. He repeated this act for about 4 to 5 times till the next morning making Anandi weak physically, mentally, as well as emotionally. Anandi was even unable to get up to use the washroom because of the rude behavior of her so called husband. Jagya was least interested in knowing Anandi, all that he desired was a lust on her and wanted to have her in all the ways… Jagya's parents always pampered him and pampered him to this extent that they were with him in anything that he did be it good or bad. Good was hardly expected from him, it was only the worst that anyone could expect from him, as he being the only son of a filthy rich businessman. Jagya's mother was least happy with Anandi coz she belonged to a very poor family, such poor that they could hardly afford a wedding dress and basic jewellery for Anandi.

The next morning, Jagya woke up and ordered Anandi to get him the bed tea. Anandi followed his orders and was about to walk but could not. The moment she got from the bed and laid her first foot on the floor she fell down coz of the pain. Jagya got up from the bed. Anandi expected that he is coming to help her get up, but he came to push her up from the room to get a bed tea least bothered of her health. Jagya was a man who used to spend most of his time with his friends roaming here and there and flirting with girls and at times used to help his dad in delivering the clothes to their clients. Jagya's friends were also like him. It was almost about 8 months of their marriage and Anandi's life was even more hell than her parental home. Her morning used to start with Jagya's violent abuse on her physically and used to end up with that as well, irrespective of her health or her willingness, Jagya used to force her always to fulfill his lustful desire. He was never tired of Anandi.

Apart from her husband her inlaws were also mean to her in all the ways. After the physical torture from her husband, she used to b in a position where she could not even stand properly and she was forced by her mother in law to do the whole household work and used to even beat her harshly for any delay in the work or if they find that the food was a bit tasteless. Her mother was so rude that she being a female never understood a female's problems and used to bash her to blue and black even when she was physically weak. One day Jagya's parents left the place to attend a cousin' wedding to which Jagya and Anandi did not join.

After his parents left, Jagya called 3 of his friends to come home and they were introduced to Anandi and Anandi welcomed them and served them tea. Jagya found that even his friends had a lustful desire to his wife and he agreed to their command wholeheartedly and at once. Jagya at once went to kitchen picked Anandi in his arms who tried a lot to get out from his hold but in vain, and took her to their room and threw her on the bed. Anandi was shocked and scared and before she could respond Jagya and his 3 friends pounced on her just like male dogs pounce on a female dog. Anandi felt like she was dead at that very second. She was a living corpse since that incident. She used to behave as if she was a robot. No sort of expressions on her face and no emotions at all. Her eyes hardly blinked, her tears dried up, her voice completely lost. When one day she was found by in her mother in law lying on the floor unconsciously. She just checked on Anandi and confirmed that she was pregnant. Jagya immediately took her to the hospital which was run by one of his friends and with his help aborted the baby. This was Anandi's life for 4 years after marriage. After spending 4 years of her life with jagya and abused physically by Jagya and his friends with the permission of her husband and in laws and after undergoing 7 forceful abortions, Anandi lost interest in her life.

Precap: ANSH meet after 4 years.

I promise u guyz that with this chapter the darkest part of the story has finished, there are yet some more dark parts but tat wont b as hurting as this is.

Do comment on the work. Both positive and negative comments are appreciated wholeheartedly.

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vrinda9183

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Hmm can't say that it was nice update as it was painful description of somebody's ill fate...but still hope to read something good happening in her life...

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nirankesan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

pls why u want to run the show full of negativity. it would have been more better that anandi would have run after his first abuses..

pls dont show all characters are negative... the way u r portraying anandi is not realistic

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VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

This is extremely sad and violent Kurup. Although I know that life is full of such instances, I wish you could perk up A's life. We don't like to see her in this (worse than in BV's) situation.

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tistaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I must say that it is a very dark update indeed but somehow it's a true story of many girls who are still now going through from this situation and they are more unfortunate than your story's Anandi because they dont get Shiv in their life.It's very pathetic.Shame on the Lawmaker of our Country who have failed to make law on Marital Rape.but come to your story plz update soon so that our Anandi can get rid of that animal so soon

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey Guyz...Back with the next chapter of this update..Hope u guyz enjoy it...

CHAPTER-7

Anandi was more like a robot now. She was a living corpse, a woman who was meant only to fulfill the lustful desires of her husband and his friends. One evening Jagya came home all drunk and went to Anandi who was always in their room, never saw any other room for months together and always stayed in that room. Jagya started to force upon her. Since he was drunk he was being more violent and he found that Anandi was not responding to him the way he wanted her to be, he became more furious and arrogant. He started beating her black and blue and was so harsh that he dragged her out of the house and brought her outside. It was after many years that the people in the colony were seeing Anandi and everyone was shocked when they saw her. She was very beautiful when she came in this colony after the marriage but today she looked horrible with bruises of black and blue from the biting and the beatings all over her body. She was being beaten mercilessly by Jagya and her in laws were also supporting him and threw her out of the house.

After many months a first drop of tear rolled down her cheek when she was thrown out of the house. God and only she knew what the tear meant; whether it was a tear coz she was homeless now or was it a tear of happiness because she was free from the devils now. She wandered the streets the whole day and finally ended up at a temple and spend that night in the temple. The next day was Ganesh Chaturthi and Anandi woke up with the first ring of the temple bell by the temple priest. She went to the tap near the temple washed her face and sat at the temple premises with the support of the pillar. As the day progressed people came to the temple to offer their prayers and also for the Ganesh Sthapan at the temple.

The pooja progressed and people were offering their prayers when one woman noticed Anandi sitting there and the lady started abusing and cursing her loudly. Following that lady there were many other people both male and female, accusing and abusing Anandi and also taunting her for having spoiled a pure and a religious place and people instead of devoting their time in worshipping God was spending on abusing and insulting Anandi. Shiv was also present along with his parents in that temple as it was a famous temple of that particular area for the largest Ganesh idol. He was shell shocked at the sight that he saw. He could not believe his eyes. He was dumbstruck the moment he saw his first love standing in front of him after 4 years and that too in this pathetic condition and the whole world pointing fingers on her.

Anandi's family and Suguna's family were also present there. Suguna and her parents were almost literally crying by the site that they saw and Anandi's parents were least bothered. Suguna came up to Anandi and held her tightly as a support for her both physically and emotionally. Suguna's parents also moved along with her to support her daughter and her daughter's friend whom they considered not less than a daughter. Shiv was awestruck on the blames that the people present in the temple were putting on Anandi. Shiv did not know what to do at that very moment, whether to shout at everyone to stop abusing his love or whether to go to Anandi and console her to comfort her. He went near the idol, took the sindoor (vermilion) from the plate near the idol and walked up to Anandi and filled her maang with it. The whole people who stood there in the temple were shocked at that site and there was complete silence in the premises. After about 5 minutes or so, the first sound that came was the sound of a slap.

Precap: Shiv comforting Suguna

Ok guyz….The darkest part of the story is finished from now but that does not mean that it is going to all lovey dovey from now on. May b two more chapters will have a sad track but not a dark one.

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Pri_kinmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Please do post the other parts as soon as you can !!! ⭐️

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey guyzzz..back with the next update. Hope u like it.

CHAPTER-8

Shiv's parents and his sister came where Shiv was standing. Shiv's mother was so angry that she could not control what her darling son did minutes back and without thinking of the place that they were standing slapped him twice. His father with a lump in his throat said to him from today we have cut all the relations with U. We would think that we have never given birth to a son. We only have one daughter. Shiv was heartbroken by the words spoken by his parents, but he was helpless. He could not see his love being humiliated by the public and that too for no fault of hers. In his eyes, she was still pure, pure as the rain drops, pure as the morning dew, pure as the first rays of the sun, pure as a baby's laugh, pure as white.

Suguna's parents supported Shiv and asked them to come to their house. Shiv caught Anandi's hand and all 5 of them moved to Suguna's house. In all these incidents there was one thing that was common and that was Anandi being emotionless. Even when the people were insulting her, she said nothing, not even a tear ran from her eyes. When Shiv held her hand and asked her to walk, she dint respond at all, she was stationary there. Both Shiv and Suguna supported her to walk. After they reached home, Suguna's mother asked Anandi to freshen up as she looks too tired, but when they found that Anandi dint move nor respond in anyways, she asked Suguna to help Anandi. Suguna took Anandi to her room with the help of Shiv. Suguna's parents also moved along with them. Suguna took Anandi to the washroom and asked her to have a bath and that she can change into one of her dresses, but Anandi did not respond, she was just standing still. Suguna then decided to give her a bath and she removed Anandi's dress, but the moment she removed Anandi's dress, she was shocked and she could not tolerate the site that she saw and she left the washroom crying and screaming very loudly.

Suguna's parents and Shiv were shocked to see Suguna crying so bitterly. Suguna's parents have never seen even a small drop of tear in their daughter's eyes, but the way she cried today they were scared. The trio asked her the reason, but she said nothing, she just pointed to the washroom. Shiv at once wanted to go in and check out, but then held back with his decision. Suguna's mother went inside the washroom and even she too started crying looking at Anandi. Anandi's body was bruised with whip lashes all over and there were marks caused by biting, there was not even a single part of her body that was left without a mark. Her bosoms, her inner thighs, her buttocks, her waist were the badly hurt ones. Her bosoms and her inner thighs were just short of bleeding. Suguna's mother gave Anandi a warm shower and later asked Suguna to give her a pair of her dress. Suguna gave one of her dresses to her mother and helped Anandi to wear it. Still Anandi was the same emotionless living corpse.

Suguna's mother brought Anandi to Suguna's bedroom where everyone was sitting and made Anandi to lie down. Suguna's mother called her servant and asked her to get warm turmeric milk to which she obliged. Suguna's mother then said what she saw on Anandi's body and said Shiv that he needs to think of his decision very carefully as nothing is lost. She also added that Anandi is in a condition where she is shell shocked with all the things happening in her life and it has been more than an hour now and Anandi had shown no sign of emotion, neither grief, sorrow, happiness, or anything. Shiv said that he is never ever going to repent on what he did today and he is very happy with the decision that he took and will stand by his decision till his last breath and is ready to give his life to bring Anandi back to life. Meanwhile the servant came with the milk and Suguna's parents asked Shiv and Suguna to make her to drink this milk and to force her to sleep for some time. Saying this, the parents left the kids all alone.

Both Suguna and Shiv helped Anandi to sit and then Suguna made Anandi drink the milk and she did it. After that Shiv helped Anandi to lie down and patted her head slowly giving her comfort and which quickly gave sleep to Anandi. When both felt that Anandi was asleep, Suguna burst into tears sobbing very loudly. Shiv could not control Suguna's tears and went to her and hugged her tightly and consoled her and tried to comfort her. Suguna just looked at Shiv and found that even he was equally crying the only difference was that the tears were running at the same speed as of hers but the sounds were not loud. Both the friends were trying hard to comfort each other which they knew was hardly impossible. Looking at Anandi's condition they did not know what to do and what not to do. Both comforted each other saying that they both will take care of Anandi and get her back to her normal self.

After an hour Suguna's parents came to the room with some snacks and tea for all of them. Anandi was sleeping peacefully. Suguna's father said that since Anandi was legally married to Jagya, and since the marriage is not yet called off, she need to file a divorce case to start a relation with Shiv and looking at Anandi's condition it is clear that he was not less than an animal to have brutally hurt Anandi and it is also clear that may be he does not agree for a divorce, but this can b taken as a police case and the justice can be given to Anandi and her 4 years of suffering, but before that she needs to be taken to a doctor, especially a gynecologist who can look into her and can give us a note stating the problem and that would serve as an evidence. Shiv gave this a thought and agreed to Suguna's parents. Suguna's mother also said that they can b in this house as long as they want to and that this would not b a burden to them in anyways as they knew both Shiv and Anandi since childhood and also they do not consider both of them anyone less than Suguna. Both Shiv and Suguna were happy on hearing this. Shiv stated that he is grateful to them and will always be and thanks them for their help and states that he would find a house very soon near to his work place and move with Anandi but until then since he has nowhere else to go he and Anandi will stay with them. Suguna's parents said that they really do not have any problem at all.

Their talks were interrupted when Shiv's phone rang. Shiv was surprised to see the call from his home. He suddenly took the call happily and his dad spoke. Shiv was so happy on receiving the call, but was not that happy when the call ended. When suguna and her parents asked the reason, he said that his dad called him to collect whatever is required for him for his life and to live this house forever if he is planning to spend his entire life with Anandi. Suguna's parents said that they are helpless in this case to guide him as it is his life and tat nothing is lost until now. Seeing Anandi's present state of health he can decide what he wants in the future...his parents or a lifeless body. They also added that they are happy that Anandi is safe now and also equally sad that Shiv has to suffer a lot in life emotionally for two reasons; one to bring Anandi back to normal self and secondly the distance that he has to maintain from his parents. They still advised to him think carefully and decide and any decision will b accepted wholeheartedly. If he accepts Anandi or not, Anandi will b their daughter just like Suguna is and they will definitely take good care of her until she comes back to her normal self and even after that as long as they are alive. Shiv was overwhelmed with this response from Suguna's parents that he hugged them both and sobbed as he was missing his parents badly and said them that he will never leave Anandi. He would prefer death than leaving Anandi even if it is for split seconds.

Precap: Anandi cries wholeheartedly'

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Edited by Kurup - 12 years ago

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