TRUE LOVE, A note, page 22.

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Hiii Folksss...

I have attempted to pen down another story on ANSH, which is entirely different from the show, the characters names are the same, but portray a different role. Only the names are extracted from the show, the story is entirely different. I would just give a character sketch now and would update the script as day passes by...
All comments both positive and negative are wholeheartedly accepted as they only encourage me to write more or to correct my mistakes if any.. Expecting ur love and encouragement in the form of comments.
Ok now I stop my bak bak and go ahead with the character sketch.
Anandi: A beautiful naive girl, very simple in appearance and also lives a very simple life. Respects her family a lot and loves them to the extent tat she is ready to sacrifice her life for their happiness. Survived by mom, dad, and 3 brothers who are greedy. Anandi's father is a drunkard and hardly loves his family, hardly goes to any job to earn for the family. Anandi's mother works as a maid in a house and is struggling to make both ends meet.
Shiv: A very handsome man who loves his love a lot. A very hardworking man from a very respectable and a loving family. Survived by mom, dad, and a sister. Father is a bank employee, mom a home maker, and sister is 3 years younger to him.
Jagat: A smart but selfish man who thinks only about his happiness and wishes irrespective of others feelings. The only aim in life do or die to get what he wished for. Survived by mom and dad who are greedy in all ways. Jagat's father owns a textile shop and earned well enough to live a leisured life without any starvation in the future.
Suguna: A common and a very sweet friend to Shiv and Anandi. Anandi is unaware of the fact that Suguna is a friend to Shiv.
So here is the character sketch of my script. Further modification as the story progresses.
U folks out there find this to be intersting do comment so that I can continue it...Every comment is very valulable.
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Hey guys I am here updating the first chapter of this SS. Hope u guys out there enjoy it. Plz do comment or like.
So here it is.
Chapter 1:
Anandi, a 12-year-old girl, a girl in her 7th class, studying in a govt school. Anandi woke up early in the morning at 4, cleaned the house, freshened up, and walked out of her house, went to a house which is 2 lanes away from her house, opened the gate and took the cycle parked there. She rode the cycle and went to the corner of a street where many boys and two men were setting the newspapers of today. Anandi took her bundle of news papers kept it at the back of her cycle and started riding it to distribute it at various houses. This is the way Anandi used to earn 300 Rs to help as a part of her contribution to the house. She used to finish this work by early morning 6:30 and leave the cycle at the house from where she took it. The cycle belonged to Suguna, her best friend, and a year elder to Anandi, whose parents love Anandi a lot coz of the type of the girl she is.
Anandi came back from her work, and starts helping her mother in the kitchen and finishing the other house hold chores. Her parents always scolded and taunted her for being a girl and a burden on them. Anandi took all their frustrations calmly without even saying a single word or without even shedding her tears. After finishing her house chores she left for her school at 8:45 and reaches school by 9. Her brothers were given the opportunity to study in a private school of a good standard by her parents but when it comes to her parents on spending money or time on Anandi she was nothing but a curse on them. Anandi was the brightest student of the school and used to participate in every school competitions held be it sports, quiz, dancing, painting, debates, elocution, or even essay writing. She has participated in many interschool competitions and has won the first prize also. This used to be the way Anandi used to spend her childhood days.
She worked very hard when she was in her 10th class and also took up for tuitions for primary classes with which she used to earn up to Rs 1000/- month along with the Rs 500/- which she used to get by delivering news papers. She used to help her mother with the household chores and used to study at late nights and cleared her 10th class with flying colors. She got the 15th rank in the state for her 10th class and was felicitated by the education minister of her state for her performance. She was given a scholar ship of free education for her intermediate or +2 in a govt college.
She was more than happy and joined her college and was excited about pursuing her further studies which she lost hope as her parents dint support her. It was on Suguna's parent's force that her mother allowed her to go to college. Suguna joined a very prestigious college of that area and was in the 2nd year while Anandi was a first year student in a govt college. Anandi was very happy with her life until now and thanked her God for blessing her with all the happiness and for fulfilling her wishes. Though she never got the love from her parents, she was loved by everyone at the neighborhood for her intelligence, for her hard work, her respect for elders, her love for the younger ones, and for her character. Every parent in that locality wished to have a girl like Anandi in their family.

Precap: Shiv and Anandi see each other for the first time.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really different and a promising SS...please do not leave it midway like may others have done😭
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Hey Kurup, very interesting plot and nice intro chapter. 👏
Poor Anandi😭 ...life is very sad when you don't get the love you're entitled to from your parents...but Anandi with her determination and hard work hasn't let this affect her. Can't wait for AnSh to meet! 😳
I really liked it...do continue soon!
Edited by Vedo - 12 years ago
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Great start!!! Looks like it is going to be an interesting story.
Thanks for sharing
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Herez the next update folks. I reallly doubt whether u guyz out there are enjoying this, but I reallly enjoyed writing this and hence posting it.
CHAPTER -2
It was midterm and Anandi have been doing well in her studies and also helping her parents. Suguna was also there to help Anandi with any doubts which she had and was also helping her by issuing her the model papers and the question banks as she was an year senior to her and as both had taken the same course and had the same syllabus. So Suguna helped Anandi by givng all her 1st year books to her. It was time for intercollege Science fair and Anandi and another girl from 2nd year were selected to represent their college for the science fair. It was a fair to be held for 5 days and Anandi was excited and was equally tensed about this and was thrilled to participate, as she thought this as an opportunity to learn more and to gain more knowledge not only studies but also the way a presentation is to be held by observing other students performing at the science fair. Hence she prepared thoroughly well enough and she being the brightest student of the college was encouraged by staff as well as her friends and other students of the college and has helped by her close friends in every way possible for the presentation at the science fair. Suguna was the besstttest friend and she helped her not out of sympathy of her condition at home but coz of the love that she had for her.

Finally the day for the science project arrived and it was held at Suguna's college and all the children participated in the science fair attended the college on time and had settled down in their placed allotted to them. Anandi along with her partner in the project reached well before time and with the help of their principal who accompanied them went to the place allotted and was ready for the presentation. Anandi's project was a working model of Green Technology, building a rain detector to conserve water, as she felt the scarcity of water as a big problem these days and as the rains are also less these days she wanted to highlight on this topic to bring awareness to people about it.

Anandi and her partner settled down for the project and so did the other students. Anandi was surprised to see that her best friend Suguna was also taking part and was representing her college and was sharing the same room along with Anandi. Each room had 6 exhibits and Anandi and Suguna were two among the 6 participants in that room and the other 4 were from the other schools. Anandi and Suguna had a friendly and a casual talk and then finally settled in their respective places after arranging the project with the help of their partner. Suguna was worried as her partner did not arrive and Anandi could sense that she was worried and asked her for the same. Suguna replied that the time for the exhibition to start is nearing and his partner who has reached the school has not turned up as he is busy meeting his friends out there in the ground and in other rooms. Anandi smiles at Suguna and then sits down on the bench.

In just a minute or two a tall handsome boy arrives in the room and all the girls in that room were drooling over him while Anandi was busy praying with her eyes shut as she was tensed as this is her first experience of representing her college. Suguna looked at the entrance and shouted SHIV….wat took you so long. Anandi opened her eyes hearing Suguna shout and saw that it was her partner for the project. Shiv came up to Suguna and said I was busy with friends…U know me naa tat I cannot start my day without meeting my friends. Suguna hits him on his hand and asks him to settle down fast. Shiv settles down with Suguna and wishes her gud luck for the project. Suguna and Anandi are seated opposite to each other in the room. Shiv after settling down takes a look at the exhibits and the other students present in the room. He is awestruck after looking at the project just opposite to him and also at the persons presenting them. He looks at Anandi who was sitting on the bench with her eyes closed and hands folded and lips murmuring something. Shiv found it strange and passed a small smile and murmured unbelievable. Suguna asked him the reason for his smile, but before Shiv could answer the bell for the project started and the visitors started pouring in one by one. Upon hearing the bell, Anandi opens her eyes and the first person she notices was Shiv. Shiv was still looking at her, the moment she opened her eyes, Shiv smiled at her and wished her luck by giving a thumbs up. Anandi was puzzled at this and dint know how to respond but nodded her head in affirmative.

Thats it for today guyz...Next update tomoro, until then C U, bye...
U know ur job, hit like and a small comment if u have time for commenting, but it would mean a lot and lot to me...every comment is valuable...
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Really like it...looking forward to more and soon please
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Superb update!! Nice continuity between chapters.
Thanks you for sharing👍🏼
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Lovely update K! 👏
Anandi is so brave and talented!
Haaye so AnSh finally meet...how sweet!
Do continue soon! 😃
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Hey buddies...Here is the next chapter of this SS which is very near to my heart...I am emotionally attached to this. So aage badthe haii with the next chapter.
CHAPTER-3
All the students got ready for their first day of the exhibition. Anandi was doing a very excellent job and hers was the best project in that room. Shiv was very impressed not only by her project but by her confidence too. Shiv's presentation was related on chemistry and he and Suguna prepared well and were also performing well, but was not as confident as Anandi was. Anandi was excited that her project was doing well. In between the presentations when there were no persons to visit, Anandi and Suguna shared some friendly talks and Shiv was surprised by the way these two girls were interacting with each other. Shiv slowly asked Suguna about how she knows Anandi and Suguna said that she is her neighbor and her friend since childhood. Shiv was excited now. He did not know why but he was getting attracted to this girl named Anandi.
Shiv has found many girls in his life so far who are very beautiful and sexier than Anandi is, yet he was never interested in them, but he found something special in Anandi and he just could not get his eyes of this dusky beauty sitting in front of him. Shiv never missed a chance of glancing at Anandi whenever he got a chance. The first day went very well and they departed to their homes. After reaching home Anandi started off with her daily chores at house as usual. Shiv also left home but was not in his usual self.. Thoughts of Anandi and her image always flashed in front of his eyes. He was disturbed since he first met Anandi and this was a new experience to him. The next 4 days went very well with everyone except for Shiv, as he could not resist himself from being away from Anandi and used every opportunity to be with her, like having lunch along with Suguna and Anandi and wenever Suguna and Anandi were together Shiv also was present, and it was the last day of the presentation and the best project was to be awarded by the district educational officer and out of all the projects exhibited, Anandi's project got the second prize, the first was grabbed by some other college. Apart from that there were some programs like dancing and singing also from various students of various colleges.
Shiv was very impressed by Anandi, her simplicity, and her down to earth behavior. Shiv wanted to gain more information about her and hence searched for Anandi and went to her. He found that she was standing along with Suguna. Shiv took the courage and went where the girls were standing. Shiv congratulated Anandi on her achievement and she kindly thanked him. Shiv could not speak anything to Anandi as he was tensed for the very first time to speak to a girl so he just stood there listening to the girls chatting. Shiv was the bestest friend of Suguna and hence she dint mind his presence there, but was surprised as Shiv never did such a kind of thing at all. Suguna was sure that there is something cooking in Shiv's mind as she has been observing his changed behavior since the exhbition started and she thought of asking him when they both were alone. After chatting for about 10 minutes Anandi and her partner bid bye to Suguna and Shiv and left to their homes.
Suguna asked Shiv wats the matter to which he replied that nothing he just came to congratulate Anandi. Suguna understood his intentions and then was about to move when Shiv held her hand and asked her to spend some time with him. Suguna agreed. He then started asking more details about Anandi. Suguna gave all the information like her school, her studies, how intelligent and smart she is, but as a true friend to Anandi never disclosed any information about Anandi's personal life to him. Shiv was so lost in Anandi's thoughts that he unknowingly said to Suguna that he thinks he is attracted to this girl and that it feels sad that he cant see her again. Suguna asked him what the matter is he said he does not know, but he always feels like seeing Anandi and also added that just a sight of Anandi makes him feel blessed. Suguna was happy on hearing all these from Shiv, coz she knew Shiv very well and also knew that he was a very good person, but was worried for Anandi. Suguna as a true friend to both Shiv and Anandi advised Shiv that may be he is attracted to Shiv, to which Shiv denies saying that it is something more than attraction and he is not sure if he can name that to be love. Suguna advised him to take some more time and to think very well, may be that he is infatuated at this time, coz at the age of 16 or 17 generally boys and girls misunderstand infatuation to be love and now that they both are not going to meet each other, it can decide very well if the feeling which Shiv had developed for Anandi is infatuation or is it love. Shiv keenly listened to what Suguna was saying and agreed to her. Both took leave to each other and then left home. On her way home Suguna was lost in thoughts of Shiv's confession and felt proud of herself for advising Shiv correctly, main reason is coz this is not the right age for love, secondly Shiv hardly knows anything about Anandi, her family background. So she felt apt to let time, fate, and destiny decide about Anandi's future as she does not want Anandi to suffer in anyways in the future as she has been suffering since her birth.

Days passed into weeks, weeks into months, and months into a year. Shiv and Suguna finished their intermediate course and had entered into the famous college of engineering. Their friendship was so strong that fate allowed them to be together even in their course of engineering. Anandi was in her senior intermediate now and was doing fairly well in her studies. Everything changed in this one year except for three things. Firstly Anandi and Suguna's friendship, secondly Suguna and Shiv's friendship, and thirdly Shiv's feelings for Anandi. He knew he had some feelings for Anandi and was sure that it really was love coz he could not forget her even for a single second. He remembered her every passing second of his life. Any free time, he would just close his eyes, and the image of Anandi would flash in front of his eyes. He knew he was in love with her but was scared to share it with anyone. He at times used to go to Anandi's college and stand by the bustop near to her college just for having a glimpse of his love. He many a times thought to share it with Suguna but could not take courage to do so. He one day even decided to go to Suguna's house, as he remembered that Suguna and Anandi were neighbors, but he dint as he dint want anyone to point a finger on Anandi and nor even let Suguna know that he was in love with Anandi. He decided to live his love in the hands of God.

The year passed by and Anandi completed her Intermediate and passed out in flying colors with a distinction, scoring 96% which was an achievement and she was not just the topper of the college, but also the topper of that particular district. Suguna was so happy for Anandi and she shared this information with Shiv. Little did Suguna knew that Shiv found this early in the morning as it was published in the newspaper and he already took the cutting of that news and had kept safely in his file along with his important certificates. Shiv answered diplomatically to Suguna and asked her to convey his congrats to Anandi. Anandi was happy after hearing the results and she came home to share this news with her family members but her family members taunted her for being a female and a burden for the family and cursed her for her life. Her brothers also instead of supporting her joined hand with their parents and combinedly taunted her and used her for their own benefit, but never showered any love or concern for her. Anandi was given scholarship to pursue her graduation, but her parents strictly refused and threatened her of taking their lives if she went ahead with her studies. Anandi in a state of dilemma bent her knees in front of her family and obliged to them and quit her studying.

Precap: Jagya meets Anandi.

Hope u like this update. Comments expected from all those who read it, whether its appreciation or criticism, both positive or negative...
Edited by Kurup - 12 years ago

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