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Their dark connection has reached a peak, delightfully frightening in its reality. If there was more time on Shashi in the frame, he would certainly have stopped at Priya, from the very beginning he cannot calmly react to her, but as if he wants to know how great her strength is. With Vedika, only a stupid game "measure authority" threatens him. With Priya it would have been different: no catfights. Only a real war of mind and spirit. It would end exactly as you wrote, and Ram would gradually cure Priya

Originally posted by: SEA05

Their dark connection has reached a peak, delightfully frightening in its reality. If there was more time on Shashi in the frame, he would certainly have stopped at Priya, from the very beginning he cannot calmly react to her, but as if he wants to know how great her strength is. With Vedika, only a stupid game "measure authority" threatens him. With Priya it would have been different: no catfights. Only a real war of mind and spirit. It would end exactly as you wrote, and Ram would gradually cure Priya

It's an open ending and I so glad you are seeing the positive side for Priya, my baby deserves it🥺 (even thought it was me who made her witness a suicide that would potential scar her for life😝)

WOAH!

That took a pretty different turn then what I intended. I get why you wrote what you wrote but definitely gonna take time to comprehend since we reached the end at once instead of growing with the Story🙈

Talking to her'bt how he desires her & then shooting himself right infront of her eyes was something that Shashi is fairly capable of doing.

If there one thing we realize through the OS is: Men can fall & sacrifice themselves for Priya if it comes to it. She doesn't even realize the power she holds over them 😲

Originally posted by: SONIA441

WOAH!

That took a pretty different turn then what I intended. I get why you wrote what you wrote but definitely gonna take time to comprehend since we reached the end at once instead of growing with the Story🙈

Talking to her'bt how he desires her & then shooting himself right infront of her eyes was something that Shashi is fairly capable of doing.

If there one thing we realize through the OS is: Men can fall & sacrifice themselves for Priya if it comes to it. She doesn't even realize the power she holds over them 😲

Sorry about that🙈 I actually never realized that, but I agree, Priya has a power over the men around her. Shashi, who respects no one, considers her smart, Ram is... Well, Ram and even Neeraj is obsessed with her, even if he was the one who left her. My girl is a kween🔥🔥🔥

Read both the parts in one go... damn as usual beautiful writing shibani ❤

It is so descriptive I could literally see each scene unfold right before my eyes 🥺

Ps. I also found this hilarious in a way. You've watched khkt kyaa? The actor who plays shashi portrayed an obsessive stalker of the FL. This reminded me of that 🤣🤣🤣🙈

Okay, I certainly didn't expect this.😆 This really took a 360 degree turn and I really love this? Seriously, when I was reading the first para, I really thought Ram would save the Priya, but I really didn't expect this in my dreams.😆 Awesome update, love.👍🏼 Though a bit sad that Priya is broken now in a whole new way.🥺

Originally posted by: SereneRainstorm

Read both the parts in one go... damn as usual beautiful writing shibani ❤

It is so descriptive I could literally see each scene unfold right before my eyes 🥺

Ps. I also found this hilarious in a way. You've watched khkt kyaa? The actor who plays shashi portrayed an obsessive stalker of the FL. This reminded me of that 🤣🤣🤣🙈

Nahi🤣 He just has this villian face, main kya karu😭 (no offense to the actor, but he was in yhm naa, I read on his actor bio😅)

Glad you loved it🙈

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Okay, I certainly didn't expect this.😆 This really took a 360 degree turn and I really love this? Seriously, when I was reading the first para, I really thought Ram would save the Priya, but I really didn't expect this in my dreams.😆 Awesome update, love.👍🏼 Though a bit sad that Priya is broken now in a whole new way.🥺

I was so nervous about this one🙈 Apni Priya deals with Nandu, she'll come out stronger 😊

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Nahi🤣 He just has this villian face, main kya karu😭 (no offense to the actor, but he was in yhm naa, I read on his actor bio😅)

Glad you loved it🙈

Both him and Sid have that classic kamina face I think 😂😭 I have only seen them as clown antagonists 😭😭😂

By the wayyyy I may or may not *ahem ahem* happen to have something that you might like planned for next week 😉😉🙈

Originally posted by: SereneRainstorm

Both him and Sid have that classic kamina face I think 😂😭 I have only seen them as clown antagonists 😭😭😂

By the wayyyy I may or may not *ahem ahem* happen to have something that you might like planned for next week 😉😉🙈

Sid has the boy boy that might go good vibe🤣 Also, Kabir keh gaye, "kal kare so aaj kar, aaj kare so ab" So jaldi jaldi post karo😍😌