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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3:
Ram,priya,KK,and daadi mingled with each other very well ram ko bahuth khushi huyi ye dekhe khi Priya maa aur daadi se kam time mein jyada gelled up hogayi aur toh aur ram KO Priya ke baare mein bahuth kuch patha chalgaya he wants to know more about her
Ye sab enjoy karne mein ithni busy hogayi ki time nahi dekha Sudhir Ji call unko time yaad dilaya and they decided KK and daadi goes in one car and ram going to drop Priya at home
KK: ram dhyan se jyada der math Karna Sudhir Ji tense hongey OK
Priya takes blessings from KK and daadi
Now Ram and Priya in car, dono bahuth chup chap hai
Ram: so kaisa laga tumhe,how u feeling
Priya: am happy
Ram: bas happy aur kuch nahi
Priya: I can't explain am feeling very lucky jis tarah maa daadi mujhe pyar karthi hai jaise mein bahu nahi iss ghar ki beti am very happy
Ram asks with pouty face : aur mein
Priya : am blessed having u aapse hi toh hai ye sab relations
Tabtak dono sharma house pahunchgaye but donoko hi ekdusre se alag hona pasand nahi they want to spend time with each other unwillingly both get down from the car Priya insists ram to come inside but ram rejects saying its late
Ram : good night princess
Priya : good night, bye have a safe drive and pls once u reach inform me pls
Ram : OK then bye, Priya takes 2-3 steps and comes back running to him and hugs ram tightly
Priya: good night I I miss u and runs in to the building
Ram didn't expect this from.her he stood there like statue he can't understand what happened now after a while he jumps in air saying loudly
Ram : ram beta teri toh nikal padi aaj jhappi milgayi he dancing like mad
Priya comes to her room she is blushing she can hear his voice, goes to balcony and waves her hand saying bye
Ram reached KM he is very happy straightly goes to his room he dancing and releiving the moments in the car his touch, first kiss on her hand and last but not least hug and her words echoing in his ears I miss u after a while ram remember that she might be waiting for his call
In sharma house Priya also remembering everything and blushing and Lil bit tensed coz he didn't called her just then her mobile rings without looking caller id
Priya: aap theek se pahungaye ithna waqt kyun lagaya aapne call karne mein
Other side : beta thoda saas lo pehle ye check Karo kisne phone kiya, Priya suddenly looks at the phone and bits her tongue
Priya: maa wo mujhe laga unka call hoga isliye
KK: rehne do meine kuch kaha nahi na mein isliye phone kiya ki kal se hum shopping start karrahi hai toh tum bhi humein join karo eksaath sab hojayega
Priya:maa mein ek baar mummy paapa se puchke batao
KK: uski jarrorat nahi meine permission leliya hain unko koi problem nahi
Now ram trying Priya number its showing waiting, Priya also noticed this in her mobile,she is feeling helpless KK talking with her wantedly
Ram can't take this anymore he grabs his car keys and jacket comes down there he met KK
Ram: maa mein Priya ke ghar jaa rahi hu
KK: ram wait kya hua
Ram: mein kabse phone try kar rahi hu wo call attend nahi kar rahi hai am tensed am going
KK stops him and gives phone to him
KK: wo isliye phone nahi pick kar rahi hai am talking with her stupid
Priya hearing all this conversation she is smiling feeling happy thinking about his concern
KK goes from there giving phone to ram
Ram : mein yahan tensed hu aur tum hasrahi ho mujhe nahi baath karni tumse bye good night he cuts the call
Priya soch rahi thi wo majak kiya lekin ram sach me gussa hoke call cut kiya
She is waiting for his call but she didn't get any call from him
Here ram kept his phone in silent and sleeping
Here Priya waiting his call she constantly sending messages and making calls but there's no response she slept in the balcony whole night
Next day morning:
Karthik yelling : mumma,paapa
Sudhir shipra comes to Priya they are shocked,Priya sleeping in balcony she is shivering as its rainy season, they admitted Priya in hospital
At afternoon in Kapoor Mansion:
KK entering in to house
KK: bansi kaka ram kahan hai, ram tabi neeche aarahatha
Ram: hi maa aap kahan se aarahe ho
KK gives serious look to him
KK: bansi kaka Saab ki lunch pack karke driver ko dedo and KK calls to AK
KK: Ji mein abhi aayi hu hospital se wo theek hai ab , now ram tensed hearing hospital word
Ram : maa kya hua aapko aap theek toh haina, mein bhi kaise sawaal pooch raha hu aaptoh kisiko dekhne gayethey na tell me na maa kisko kya hua
KK sternly asks: ram jaake apna mobile check Karo I didn't expect this from u and goes to her room he can understand that his mom very upset with him he checks his mobile now he is shocked seeing enormous calls from priya and messages saying am sorry , he collapsed in sofa holding head in palms, he runs to KK room, he tensed
Ram: Pri..Priya KO kuch hua kya he can't complete his words,KK simply looks at ram and goes to do her work, ram grabs the car keys without asking any info ram going KK stops
KK: kahan jaa rahi ho patha hai kaunsi hospital,kaunsi room mein hai, ram already in tears
Jab tak ram and KK hospital pahunchgaye, sudhir ji reception mein milgaye
Sudhir ji: Krishna ji aap yahan
KK: wo ram ko Priya se milna hai toh
Sudhir ji:abhi Priya ki discharge hogayi toh wo sab ghar chalegaye
Ram very disappointed he is feeling very low he want to meet her
Ram: paapa kya mein Priya se milsakthi hu,pls aap hamare saath chalo
Sudhir ji: jaise tumhe theek samjhe beta
Sab sharma house pahunchgaye
In Priya room:
She is very upset, waise bhi wo bahuth weak hai,she standing in the balcony she is crying silently
Ram comes to her
Ram : Priya , Priya very happy hearing his voice, Priya turns to him
Ram gives tight slap to her
















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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Superb Update
I think there is a reason, Ram slapped Priya
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😊
Edited by rosinagoor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Wonderful update...
Everything was going smoothly but the ending was a bit disappointing...
Not fair... Ram slapped priya😕😕
Waiting for next update..
Thanks for PM😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Lovely update n kya ram ne Priya ko thapad Mara plsss continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
lovely update
ram slapped priya
continue soon
next plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
nice.but slap thora jada nhi hogaya?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Superb update!!!
But yeh kya ram slapped Priya!!! Kyu???
Plz continue soon
Plzz pm me too!!!
Edited by .pia_12. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sampa123

nice.but slap thora jada nhi hogaya?


sampa thanks for liking OS and for valuable comments
slap jyada nahi jaroori tha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Superb Update
I think there is a reason, Ram slapped Priya
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😊


yes Rosi theres a reason why ram slapped her u will get know in next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: rags06

Wonderful update...

Everything was going smoothly but the ending was a bit disappointing...
Not fair... Ram slapped priya😕😕
Waiting for next update..
Thanks for PM😛😛


Disappoint math ho yaar wo jaroori tha coz simply i already planned😃

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