My New OS pyar ki ek Choti si dastan last part updated - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

What a treat !!!

part -1 and part -2 on same day

read 2 parts in a go
lovely story
love at first sight
beautifully done

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thank u for liking my OS and comments also
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Part -3
So priya liked the family and they all jelled up well ..

aww Ram is angry and priya is constantly trying to get him

she ended up in hospital and he ended up slaping her 😉

waiting for the reason ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Part -3

So priya liked the family and they all jelled up well ..

aww Ram is angry and priya is constantly trying to get him

she ended up in hospital and he ended up slaping her 😉

waiting for the reason ..

Thanks for pm


thanks for liking and thanks for commenting, am not a good writer if any mistakes are there sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: joemahika


thanks for liking and thanks for commenting, am not a good writer if any mistakes are there sorry


I commented what my opininon is , i didnt tell you there are some mistakes nor you are not a good writer than why you mentioned this ?? I dont know why you felt like that
Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: luvsakshi


I commented what my opininon is , i didnt tell you there are some mistakes nor you are not a good writer than why you mentioned this ?? I dont know why you felt like that

Sorry sorry I didn't mean that u mentioned something I just casually replied as I read ur every stories if u hurt am so so sorry I didn't mean that pls comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: joemahika

Sorry sorry I didn't mean that u mentioned something I just casually replied as I read ur every stories if u hurt am so so sorry I didn't mean that pls comment


I just want to confirm what you felt wrong in my comment re
so asked

Thanks for clarifying me ..

and Really I liked the story .. please continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: luvsakshi


I just want to confirm what you felt wrong in my comment re
so asked

Thanks for clarifying me ..

and Really I liked the story .. please continue soon

Thank u tomorrow by the end of the day I'll try to update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
lovely update
but why Ram Slapped Priya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Jst read...
Haawww tight slap 😲
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4:
Ram ki thapad ki awaz sunnke sab Priya room mein aajathe hai, sab tensed ram ka gussa dekh khe saathi hi ram roraha tha,ram aur Priya dono chote bachon ki tarah rorahe hai, ram holds Priya shoulders,Priya crying she bend down her head
Ram: agar tumhe kuch hojatha toh mera kya hoga stupid
Priya sobbing : wo .. wo.. Ram gets angry
Ram : wo wo kya Priya kuch bologi ki nahi, mere taraf dekho Priya
Priya still crying: wo aap ruthgaye toh aisa laga saari duniya ruthgayi isliye aapko phone karthi rahi subah aankh khola toh hospital mein hu
Ram ko bura lagrahatha, wo apne ulte haath se sarpar hua pasineko pochraha tha
Ram: Priya agar call accept nahi kiya toh kya hua Priya mein marnahi gaya suddenly he feels her fings on her lips
Priya slightly nods her head
Priya : I can't live without u saying this she hugs him tightly this time ram also hold her caressing her back after a while ram Separates her, he caressing her cheek, Priya feeling tingling sensation she closed her eyes,her cheeks turned in to crimson red, ram slowly takes her face in to his palms,ram mesmerized her beauty ram bends towards her cheek to kiss her, Priya slowly opens her eyes and shocked
Priya : maa,ram comes to reality and looks back and he shocked
KK : thoda sabar kar ram , she slightly slaps him, she goes to Priya caressing her cheek
KK: dard horaha hai kya, Priya just nods her head
KK: take care don't repeat again, turns to ram, ab chale aur kuch baaki hai kya ram just nods his head and goes to sudhir ji
Ram: paapa mera ek request hai
Sudhir ji:haan bolo beta
Ram : paapa engagement aapki ghar mein hi hogi koi venue book math kijiye and Priya ki full shopping ghar se hi hogi dresses, jewellery sab kuch sabko mein ghar ko bhejungi aap sab yehi select kijiye aapko Jo chahe wo mein arrange karunga but pls Priya ko rest karnedijiye
Hearing ram words sharmas feeling very happy for Priya
Sudhir: OK beta Jo tum kahogi wahi hoga, mein aaj bahuth khush hu tum jistarah Priya ki khyal rakhthe ho mere saari chintha durhogayi
KK : wo toh hai sudhir ji jab ye kisise pyar kartha haina unkeliye kuch bhi karega , achha ab hum chalthe hai, Priya takes blessings from KK finally looks at ram she remembers what happen few mins back she feeling very shy
Finally sab log jaane lagthe hai Priya bhi unki saath chalne lagthi hai
Ram : Priya tum kahan aa rahi ho jaake rest Karo
Priya : mein bahar thak aathi hu ram cuts her in middle
Ram : humein rasta patha hain aap andar jaasakthe ho
KK: Priya jao beta ye sunnewala nahi ziddi hai jaake aram Karo
Finally Priya goes to her room, but she is not happy
In car:
Ram kahi khogaya tha bahuth chup chup hai wo, toh KK asks
KK: kya hua ram kya sochrahi ho. Priya ke baare mein
Ram smiles : haan maa matlab 2 din sirf do din pehle Miley hum ekdusre se theek se 2 min baath thak nahi ki wo pagal ladki raat bhar mere ek call keliye apni health kharab kardi jabki usko patha tha wo pneumonia patient hai wo jyada derthak thand mein nahi rehsakthi phirbhi ithna pyar ithna dard kisi stranger ke liye I can't understand
KK: ram wo ladki hain zahirse baath hai, shaadi ke liye haan karthi haina uss pal se wo sirf apni pathi ke baaremein hi sochthi hai usko tumhari har Choti Choti reactions usko bahuth effect hotha hai, waise usko kehrahi ho tumne Jo kiya uska kya ithna haq dikhadiya uspe thapad maara
Ram scratching his temples: maa aapko sab patha hai phirbhi poochrahi ho, jab usko aise dekha naa dil mein kuch dar hua agar kuch hua toh isliye thapad maara sorry
KK smiles at his childishness
KK: sorry mujhe nahi Priya KO kehna hai tumhe
Ram : apne kehna diya kya
KK astonished by his answer : besharam she catches his ear
Beech ke 14 days aise hi beethgayi Priya ki shopping ghar par hi hogayi daily ram and Priya convo chalthi rahi ,tomorrow engagement day
@12 pm night:
Ram,Priya donoko neend nahi aarahithi, kal undono ki engagement ye pal KO wo dono jeebhar ke jeena chahthe hai, subah se donoki baath nahi huyi ekdusrese dono busy hai apni apni kaam mein,finally ram calls her as he know that she also feeling like him
Priya enjoying and blushing remembering every moment with ram, her thoughts disturbed by mobile ring, Priya face light up seeing caller id , Priya attends the call
Priya :hi
Ram: hi haan
Priya controlling her blush: batayiye kaise call kiya aapne
Ram in husky tone : Priya.Priya
Priya blushing hearing his seductive voice : hmm
Ram : kya hmm abhibhi tum mujhe bataya nahi mein intezar kar raha hu
Priya ram ko sathana chahthi hai, usko patha hai ram kya pooch raha hai phir bhi natak shuru kiya
Priya : ithni si baath pehle kyun nahi poocha mein batau
Ram eagerly asks: hmm batao batao
Priya : good night
Ram : Thad ye nahi
Priya : OK sweet dreams
Ram now pissed off
Ram : I know tum mujhe satharahi ho koi baath nahi kal hamari engagement toh u have to look more beautiful
Priya smiling imaging ram face
Priya : aap bhi ab sojao
Ram : Priya sunna
Priya : ab kya
Ram : Jo Mein sunna chahthi hu wo toh tum kahogi nahi, agar mein kuch poochu toh milega
Priya now confused : kya
Ram : aajtak sirf jhappi mila hai ek pappi miljayetho accha hoga
Priya feeling very shy
Priya : wo bhi milegi lekin abhi nahi sirf bye
Ram pouts his face looking at phone and smiles,thinks himself
Ram : Priya mein punjab da puttar ithni aasani se chodunga nahi
Both drifted to sleep thinking about each other
Next day in sharma house :
As today engagement everyone busy in arrangements neha came early to help Priya
Kapoors joined ram very eager to see his love, Vikram comes to ram
Vikram : oye sab tumhe dekhraha hai ithna impatient kyun ho
Ram : vikram actually mein impatient nahi yaar mein ye soch raha hu kaise Priya se I love you bulwau
Vikram : kya aaj tak Priya tumhe I love you nahi bola, ram pouts his face saying no
In Priya room:
Neha : aaj toh ram gaya Priya hits playfully on neha shoulder
Neha : seriously yaar aaj wo thak jayega I love u kehthe kehthe
Priya murmurs: aajtak ek baar bhi nahi kahan aaj kya bolega
Neha hears this and she shocked
Neha : what he didn't confessed and u too ithna time waste kiya
Shipra comes to take Priya
Shipra : Priya chalo beta muhurat time hogaya hai
Priya comes to hall,ram didn't blink eyes looking at Priya she is looking beautiful in pink lehenga
Panditji asks ram and Priya to sit with each other,ram very happy ,Priya Lil nervous and shy
Without anyone notice our love birds starts their convo
Ram: looking beautiful
Priya : aap bhi looking very handsome
Ram: mujhe tumhe kuch kehna hai
Priya : ji boliye
Ram : ring ceremony se pehle hi tum mujhe wo three magical words bataogi
Priya : ring ceremony se pehle sabke saamne hi bataungi mein aapko
Ram astonished with her reply: sacchi
Priya looking at him : pehli baar aapne mujhe kuch poocha hai wo mein jarrur poora karungi


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