My New OS pyar ki ek Choti si dastan last part updated - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Update Jyothi
Continue ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww di u r making me crazy after ur os hayeee Raya n their cute n sweet moment loving I plsss continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Wow... Nice update...
Will Priya say the three words😉😉
Will wait and see...
Please continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part -5:
Priya : waise ek baath kahu aapko mein aapko subah se kithni baar bol chuki hu wo magical words lekin aap ek baar bhi nahi kaha
Ram zor se chillaya : kya, sab ram ko dekhrahethey, ram aaspaas dekhkar apna sarjhulaletha hai
Ram: this is not fair Priya subah se tum ajeeb ajeeb things bhejrahi ho mere liye usmein wo nahi hai, maanjao tum kehna nahi chahthi baath ko palto math
Priya : nahi Mr.kapoor , yaad kijiye mein subah se aapko kya kya bheja and I mean it
Ram looks in to her eyes, both share a eyelock,
Ye dono apne duniya mein kho Gaye hai dono sabse chupchupke ekdusre ke ankhon mein dubgaye , panditji disturbs them
Panditji: Priya beta , lekin dono ko kuch nahi suna , sab inko dekhke hasnelage tab dono apni dreamland se bahar aagaye
Panditji handovers shagun clothes to both of them and asks to change the clothes
Here ram eagerly waiting how priya going to confess and he is trying to figure out what's the meaning in Priya gifts
Priya gets up and ram also get up now both are facing each other, everyone busy in their own world sharmas busy with kapoors, guests busy in gossiping remaining neha vikram and karthi and these two love birds
Priya looking in to ram eyes starts doing some gestures: Priya combined her right hand five fingers together and turned her palm towards ram , again she combined her left hand three fingers together and turned her hand 180angle to anticlockwise turned her palm towards ran, now she made her hands together and signalled ram through her eyes, althrough she blushing but kya faida kuch samajme nahi aaya ram KO he is confused again panditji disturbed
Panditji: Priya beta derhorahi hai ye kya kar rahi ho tum, ye sunthe sab unki taraf dekhne lage
Shipra : priya ram ko guest room dhikhao, karthik tum bhi saath mein jao
Priya extends her left hand to ram showing her palm, ram keeps his right hand palm, Priya interlocks her hand with his hand, looking in to his eyes says
Priya : meine aapko ek hi din mein ithni baar kaha
Sab log indono ko hi dekhrahethey, kisiko kuch samajme nahi aaya except KK , unko toh subah se patha hai Priya kya kehna chahthi hai , neha and vikram wo dono sochne lage Priya kya kehna chahthi hai
KK : Priya chalo beta derhorahi hai, Priya feeling very shy and embarrassed but she know that ye sab ki samajme ke bahar hai she goes from there leaving ram hand
Priya goes with neha
KK pulling ram ears: ram tumhe toh sharam ani chahiye wo ithni baar kehchuki hai aur ab toh sabke saamne bhi kehdiya lekin tum ekbaar bhi reply nahi kiya abhi jao jaake ready hojao officially ring pehnao tumse kuch nahi hoga, KK also goes from there
Now ram feeling very low ek toh unko Priya ki baatein samajme nahi aaya upar se KK ye sab kehke gaya ,
Finally ram and Priya ready for ring ceremony , panditji asks Priya first and then ram
Priya ram ko ring pehnathi hai ram KO apni aankhonse ishara karthi hi ki ring ko dekhne ke liye ram ring dekhke bahuth khush hojathe kyun ki ring mein I love you print this
Now its ram turn everyone waiting , ram goes on his knees and proposes
Ram : Priya I love you and I really do will u marry me now Priya in tears she feeling that she is in cloud 9,she just nods her head
Ram bhi Priya ko ring pehnatha hai, finally engagement hogayi sab Jo kuch hua uske baaremein baath kar rahethey,sab ram aur Priya ko tease karrahethey but sab sirf ram KO praise kar rahethey toh KK intervenes
KK: oye hello mere bahu bhi kam nahi wo subah har ek ghante mein ek baar iss janab ko I love u bolrahi hai, abhibhi hum sabke saamne bhi bathaya haan ye alag baath hai ki iss buddhu ko samajme nahi aaya now Priya feeling very embarrassed she goes from there executing
Priya : mein mein change karke aathi hu runs from there now ram pissed off he goes from there
Aise hi din khatam hogayi sab acchese hogaya but ye dono alag alag mood mein hai
Priya room : Priya rolling all over the bed holding pillow and remembering everything today happend, wo baar baar ring ko dekhke sharma rahi hai, jistarah aaj wo ram ka haath pakda, jistarah wo alag alag gestures se ram ko I love u bola
Here ram feeling dejected he can't take it anymore so he called Priya
Priya attends the call
Ram: Priya pls batao mein pagal horaha hu soch sochke pls help me
Now Priya also feeling bad that he didn't understand her gestures
Priya : rehne dijiye Mr.kapoor Jo hogaya so hogaya aap jaake sojayiye kaafi der hogaya she cuts the call
Now ram very abundant he wants to know the meaning of Priya gifts and gestures he calls vikram
Ram : abhi isi waqt neha ko leke ghar aajao
Vikram : kyun kya hua
Ram : sawal math puchu ghar aajao jaldi
After some time in ram bed room
Ram showed whatever gifts today Priya sent him
Neha and vikram laughs at ram, ram irritated now
Neha : ram ithna stupid kaise hosakthi ho tum
Ram : pls neha waise bhi mood kharab hai
Vikram : OK relax I'll explain
Subah subah tumhe 8 tulips mila haina uska meaning I love you, 8 letters so 8,tulips, tulips KO kahi love express keliye use karthe hai, 8apples ram cuts in middle
Ram : 8,for I love u and apple telling that sweet life ahead
Vikram: yes and every hour one maple leaf means I love you, Russia mein maple leaf ko love symbol maanthe hai
Neha : buddhu Priya engagement Jo tumhe kaha wo seedhe seedhe bataya I love u and end mein wo tumhara haath pakda haina she proposed u for marraige and she wants to u for whole life
Ab ram ko sab samajme aaya and he is very happy he wants to see Priya coz he know that she is upset ram bids bye to vikram.neha
Neha : ab iss waqt kahan jaa rahi ho
Vikram : Priya ke paas, jaane do neha
Here Priya feeling bad that she tried to make it special but all messed
Ram enters her room from balcony
Priya sitting on the bed hugging her legs tightly ram feels very bad
Ram : Priya , priya looks at him and she is shocked she runs to him
Priya : aap yahan iss waqt kaise aaya aap
Ram : shh.shh. aram se mein balcony se aaya hu and iss waqt isliye kyunki mujhe samajme aaya tum kithne cute cute ideas se mujhe I love u bola
Priya now happy and feeling very shy she turns to go but ram holds her hand
Ram: mujhe abhibhi intezar hai Priya mujhe tumhari moose sunna hai pls, he pulls her slowly towards him, ram hugs her from back holding her hands tightly,,ram placed his chin on her shoulder( both are standing opposite to dressing table, ram looking her through mirror)
Ram : I understand agar tumhe sharam aarahi hai toh tum aise hi bolo mein apni aankhen band karliya but pls batao I want to hear ram closed his eyes
Finally Priya says: I love you pressing every letter she confessed and she closed her eyes ,,ram khushi se zorse hug kiya, now Priya feeling his hot breathe on her neck
Ram: thank you Priya, Priya open ur eyes, Priya slowly opens her eyes she looking at ram through mirror, ram turns her,now both are facing each other, Priya apna sarjhuka kar khadi hai, ram takes Priya face in to his palm he pecks on her forehead, Priya closes her eyes feeling his lips, Priya gulping lump in her throat
Priya : ab aap jayiye Mr.kapoor bahuth derhogayi hai
Ram : tension math lo mein jaunga mujhe bhi acha nahi lagtha aise chupchup ke romance karne ka, kuch hi din mein haq se leke jaunga
Ye sab sunke Priya poora laal hogayi hai
Ram side hugs her and takes her to the balcony
Ram : Priya ek baath kahu jab tum aise sharmathi hona tumhari ye naak ithna laal hojathi haina maan kartha hai he bites her nose with his teeth
Priya : ouch jabtak Priya apni aakhen kholi ram wahan se chala gaya,Priya smiles touching her nose
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Superb Update Jyothi
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Awesome Update
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Very cute n romantic love the way Priya said I love u to ram n pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Superb update😉
Continue soo and thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
superb updates 👏
loved the way priya said I love u
continue soon
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