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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
hi to all

am a youngster too. am just 23 ... what i feel of ram 's character is a person who's been to responsibilities too early.. he did not have his own kids but he did his part to niharika's kids as a father... he did not even realize he's getting out of age to get married.. at very late age when all his hope got vanished he got married ...he still feel their marriage is a compromise .. if he feel so how could he make up with his wife... there is much awkwardness in their relation... ha ram is normal man like every other man he dropped his jaw wen priya came out in front of him in red nighty... there is no such kind of relation between he can immediately go hug her and pull her to bed...what will priya think of ram then... wen two people are comfortable with each other then only it can happen... as far as my concern woman's acceptance is the prior thing...

ha now a days 10 year kid's are no more kid's .parents need to be careful of their children .what kind of stuff influencing their kids...their behaviors are different wen they see a girl in bikini... may be because of rams past he lost senses in a relationship... he needs to be comfortable with his wife .. what wrong in covering his wife... that s just akwardness.. that dose nt mean ram is inefficient... he do not have feelings like every men... there are men who are like dogs in the society but there will be people like ram too.. but we see many like dogs... and good men 1 in a billion ...

priya realized her feelings... i heard many time that women get solence and get happy wen they speak up their heart.. ladies clubs hota kya hai.. what else they disscus abt their marriage and husband and about saas... here priya has no problem like saas ki saazish .. obviously neha know s ram earlier to priya.. they are his best friends and took care of ram in every aspect... what all priya told to neha is what neha knows ram as... its just priya's dissapointment abt ram.. priya did not yell anything personal... she did not tell her abt their private things... i hope no one will tell things as such

well ram do not want to divorce priya .. still being a devote to his family .. he may think his family first.. as priya is still alien to ram... wen ram feel for her he wont listen to anyone regarding priya... he did not force her to sign it itself say that he didnt want a divorce...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Indya4ever & @ silvermoonlight

I think your post was something I agreed with totally.

Of course there are small things here and there which do not make sense...especially trying to portray Apeksha as a GF...I also think Ram should have not stopped to throwing divorce papers at Priya. But please note, that idea was given by Niharika, the divorce papers were also executed by her and sent to her. I doubt Ram would have even signed those papers himself. He was in a rage and even in Priya had signed them, he would have taken care of those somehow. What is surprising is that Priya did not ask him about why and how the divorce idea came to his mind...but remember...Priya already knows she loves him deeply... so maybe this is one super sensitive aspect she does not want Ram to remember ever again...


But I'm really amazed at some of the comments like

@ if you are a super successful businessman, you should be used to seeing naked women !!!!
@ even 10 year olds nowadays "react" when they see bikini clad or naked women ! OMG ! This is one line/reaction I can write 3 pages upon but will not as it will just get personal.
@ other than with Priya, I have never seen Ram make those cute schoolboy expressions... does anyone seen him like that in office?
@ red nightie scene, when he covered her up the next morning, that was the most decent thing a gentleman can do, under those circumstances. However, I guess, those rich people who see naked women all around whilst travelling, cannot be expected to behave like a gentleman ! Thank God, Ram does not belong to that class.
@ and the funniest... the need to procreate is so basic, that after being forced into marriage with a girl you hated earlier, you have to try and jump into bed with her. If you don't, you're abnormal !!!!!!!!!! I mean, how weird can this be? There is no process of friendship, falling in love and then sexual attraction and finally consummation...?
However, all said and done, I ACTUALLY think that lot of sarcastic comments above have come because of the writer's sense of humour and wanting to get into a debate just for the fun of it. Otherwise, why would anyone watch the serial daily and then spend so much time criticising it?
I mean, I simply switch off serials I think don't make sense or are showing too much nonsense... why would I additionally spend so much time writing on forums for those????? Nah...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
no i don't agree at all.
i loved this a lot. raya are awesome & cute .
script is also well written.
balh is rocking.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
good one 👏
listen he covered her as :😉
  • priya was uncomfortable last night in that she ddnt want to be seen that way, he respected her wish even when she wasnt aware of it. 😊
  • he is a through gentleman who did not take advantage of his sleeping wife!!however he did get his share of stares when she was sitting on the sofa if you all remember😉
  • why should they get ready to consumate? they both ddnt like each other, just married each other for their family. and face it mst of the telly drams are such that the consumation is after ages even if the couple is in love ( guess higher trps)😆
  • just coz he is a bussiness man he is expected to be sleazy and force self on priya? what he was trying to do with priya on vikram egging was i feel a move to see if hubby wife raltion however he ddnt feel comfportable and it ddnt result into anytihng.

priya complaining to her mom ;

  • i found it most natural, we all gossip and comment when we meet with our fmailes girlfrineds about our suisral hubby and boyfrineds, it is much better than the unreal wife who worships the ground the saas and pati walk on with no thought of thier mayka once in susral
  • her intention was only good fun it no way meant to belittle him .
  • if she wanted to make fun or ddnt respect him she wldnt have protected his secret with her family.

i like this that they should get to know each other ifsrt then go to the next level and yesterday he did touch her while talking so it is not like he is abnormal or weird.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
well abt desire and all i also dont have such desires ,also,i am 24 ,and i dont think there is anythin ,bad in that.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ya man loe4ever i agree ,with u ,that was i meant.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Interesting discussion...many times I do think the script could have been woven together beautifully and RaYa's relationship was shown in interesting way. I got hooked to the show because of slick promos and I am guessing slowly we all will get to see those promos coming live to our screens. As far as characterization is concerned both Ram and Priya are true to their characters except minor diversion for script's sake and both are discovering each other as well as their relationships as they both in a way are virgins 😉 but once RaYa bond builds up and CVs get hold of script we are going to witness major fireworks onsrcreen😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ya ... physical relation is just an extension... of their love.. they just started knwing each other... what 's the problem being a gentel man and covering his wife...

@ neha i read all this today ...
felt bad really bad on few comments

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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
I guess Ram's expression will work its magic and physical consummation would pale in terms of range of emotions and depth Ram can portray...all we need is those magical RaYa moments😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: lolita_lahiri


However, all said and done, I ACTUALLY think that lot of sarcastic comments above have come because of the writer's sense of humour and wanting to get into a debate just for the fun of it. Otherwise, why would anyone watch the serial daily and then spend so much time criticising it?
I mean, I simply switch off serials I think don't make sense or are showing too much nonsense... why would I additionally spend so much time writing on forums for those????? Nah...



Not to jump into the discussion, but I really do not agree with the comments here - they especially bother me as a MEMBER of IF.

The ideology that criticizing a show is a waste of time OR that if something seen on TV is bothersome, it should just be ignored and the channel should be changed.. THIS ideology that is so prevalent on IF is what baffled ME. Why is it that any criticism is considered as a waste of time? That if someone dares to say "Hey, this seems off! This is why I can't entirely enjoy this show!" the majority in the IF community retort with "Then don't watch it!"???! Are these really the ONLY options left? That a person can either watch it AND love a show OR they should just not bother with it at all? Why can't a person watch something, be critically unimpressed by it and then be ALLOWED to say the same? Why does their criticism have to be categorized as merely "vindictive" or a "waste of time". Is it really that hard for us as viewers and fans to realize that some people may not like what we personally adore and that it may bother them enough to want to express it? And that if they do want to express it, there is nothing horribly pointless about it. Why does the IF community either needs to ATTACK opposing views by calling them bashing OR DISMISS them entirely by calling them pointless..? Why can't they just be accepted as what they are - opposing but VALID points-of-view.. 😕 *shrugs*

I would like to assure everyone that I am not saying this as a member of the development team, in any capacity. This is my opinion a MEMBER of India-Forums, first and foremost.
Edited by -Fivr- - 13 years ago

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